Some updates and stuff

Forgive me for the very un-clever title to this post but I'm sick today (though I'm feeling a lot better now than I did earlier!).

Anywho, almost two years ago exactly I started writing Suburban Girl. Well, I just finished it, believe it or not! Don't let the link I just gave fool you, though: there are twelve chapters in total, not eight. I just haven't uploaded chapters 9 through 12 to this site, yet. I keep trying to get myself motivated to update this site with all of my stories (which is still missing Shawn and Lilly, Bush Fires, Carefree Again, the SG chapters... the list goes on!) and a few other things, too, but it's a real pain in the butt and just the thought of doing so depresses me. Eventually I'll do it but in the meantime you can see all of my stories (and access all 12 complete chapters of Suburban Girl) via my page on the SOL.net site. Click here for that.

So why, do you ask, do I post first to SOL.net and not here? Because it's easier to do so, simple as that! With ASSTR I have to fire up an FTP client, edit an HTML page using Frontpage, upload everything, make sure the links work... on and on and on! With SOL.net I just click a couple buttons and yay! It's there. Neat.

I know some of you think it's a pain because while SOL is free it does require registration, but I don't get what the big deal about registering is! I mean, it's free... and don't tell me you don't register out of "principle". That's just dumb. Most sites nowadays require registration, after all!

On that note, no, I am not going to re-enable anonymous comments to this blog. A lot of people have asked for this but haters, trolls, and spam-bots have ruined the anon-posting for all of you. I know it's not your fault and that it sucks you have to pay for a minority's abuse, but that's just how it is.

Oh! I almost forgot... here's a picture of some pretty girls who definitely want to have sex with you. :P You get that for promising to comment/give-feedback/give high SOL scores regarding Suburban Girl...! Thanks!

-shannon-

~sleepy~

Suburban Girl Ch. 10! (and Shawn and Lilly Ch. 3)

Hey everyone!

I just posted chapter 10 of "Suburban Girl" to SOL.net. It's quite a long and sprawling chapter but I think it sets up the rest of the story quite nicely. There's just one chapter left and I'm working on it right now... in fact, making this post to my blog is taking away from my precious writing time. Grr.

Oh, and as promised, I also posted "Shawn and Lilly" Chapter Three. Thanks so much, by the way, for all the awesome feedback about this story! As predicted my SOL.net score for it sucks (my fave explanation so far? "...I gave you all 1s on principal because I need my fiction to have some truth in it"... ???) but your positive letters buoy my spirits! :)

-shannon-

p.s. Yes, I'll be putting up SG9, SG10, and all the S&L chapters, in text format, on this site soon, too. In the meantime just register for SOL.net already... geez! :P

Suburban Girl update plus a new story!

Suburban Girl Chapter 9 is now up on Storiesonline.net! Make sure to login over there, read it, and then give me all 10's in the scoring system to let me know how great you thought it was. :P I'll be adding SG9 to this site in text format soon...

Something else I'll be adding here soon? A completely new story I just posted at SOL.net! You might remember that a couple days ago I asked you guys if you thought I should start posting "Shawn and Lilly" even though it would add yet another "in progress" story to my growing list ("Trailer Trash Teen", "Daddy's Firm", "Suburban Girl" being the others). Well, using an online poll you voted overwhelming, 263 to 46 (or 85% for, 15% against) that I should. So please don't get mad when this story takes forever to complete. I posted the first two chapters just now so you can meet the two main characters but I won't post any more updates to it until I post the next update to "Suburban Girl". I have the first four chapters already complete so don't worry, S&L won't slow down the progress of "Suburban Girl". :)

Like I said, I'll be adding the S&L chapters to this site soon. Meanwhile, go read it at SOL.net and make sure to... oh, you get it. All tens. :P

Also, please let me know what you think about the story! Either comment here about it or e-mail me... I'm really curious how it will be received. I mean, definitely let me know your thoughts on SG9, too, but S&L is very, very different than anything I've written before: very dark, violent, and crazy. I know that's not everybody's thing but hey, I like trying new things! Besides, Lilly is really fun to write for. She's nuts. You'll see... and your feedback will mean a lot to me just like it always does.

So why are you still here? Go to storiesonline.net and check out not one, not two, but three new chapters by me in one night! How cool am I? :P

-shannon-

Suburban Girl Chapter Eight

...is now up on StoriesOnline.net! For those of you who don't know anything about that site, as always, read this old post. I hate repeating myself.

You can find Chapter Eight of Suburban Girl by clicking here (make sure you're logged into SOL.net). 

I'll be posting the chapter to the "My Stories" section of this site, too, for those of you who don't like or don't use SOL.net. Probably in the next couple of days. :)

Let me know what you think of this latest chapter by either commenting to this post or contacting me via e-mail. Thanks!

-shannon-

P.S. Make sure to check out my last post about the future of the Forbidden Forum... just scroll down! Or click here, whatever. :P

//UPDATE! Suburban Girl Ch. 8 is now available in the My Stories section of this site!

Inspiration and Such

So the whole thing about Suburban Girl Chapter 7 sort of had a backlash-- after I posted about how most of the responses I was getting were from racist readers, I got a ton of positive responses from people who (rightly!!) think those people are morons! So yay, it turns out my reading audience isn't entirely made up of ignorant assholes...! :P

Moving on, I spent the last few days on yet another quasi-vacation with Beth. It went well, for the most part, except that she tried to force me to write whenever we were bored. She'd say, "Write for the next thirty minutes; get me hot; I'll be back soon." And I *know* I could have done that very, very easily except one of her rules was that I had to be adding to a story (either posted or not) I was already working on. Argh.

In the end it sort of worked. I made some progress with SG8, among other things. Still, I kept telling her that if she *really*! wanted me to make headway with these "projects" she'd let me spend my time browsing for some raunchy porn first. That *always* inspires me, you see? But she was, as always, against it, for two reasons. First, she believes that her sexiness should be all the inspiration I need when we're alone and on vacation together. Shrugs. Second, she pays the one credit card I just recently acquired (to help "build up" my credit), and one of the rules is that I can't spend anything on porn sites. And she gets the bills... grrr.

Which sucks! But then again, I see her point.

Anyway, she suggested I use my free time (i.e. time not spent with her... like right now!) to do my searching for free-porn/inspiration. So I am. But since I'm too tired to *really* try, I'm just asking all of you! Again, this was sort of her suggestion, I guess, but... argh! I hate homework assignments.

What I'm looking for is a site with videos like FacialAbuse.com. Or GirlsBoardingSchool.com. Or YoungPorn.net. Not those sites exactly, mind you... if you read my forum, you know I've been there, done that! In fact, some awesome fans of this site (you know who you are by now!) have kept me hooked up with some of those sites... but unfortunately, sites like that rarely update (how dare they?!? :P), and I've seen most of the vids on them by now.

I really need some good recommendations for other good, hard-core sites! You know... either raunchier than FacialAbuse, or less annoying than YoungPorn, or less pretentious than GirlsBoardingSchool... if you know this site and my stories, you know what I'm looking for, I think!

I so, so, so hate begging like this. For porn, I mean. Long time fans of this site will know this. But still... if you have any recommendations, or any ideas; any suggestions or any thoughts along this topic, I'd appreciate it if you let me know. Please keep in mind when you contact me that my budget, as laid out by Beth (mixed thoughts on that, here, btw), precludes me paying for a site. I mean, don't let that stop you from saying, "Wow, you would love this awesome, nasty, hard-core site, if you could afford it!"... but I would really rather you could both suggest it and provide me access to it for free.

Darn it!

I feel like such a whore making this post. This is not the first time but darn it again... I hate feeling this way. Sort of begging for free stuff. I hate that. I hate charity. It comes up constantly in my fights with Beth... I'll say no more right now. But you get the idea. Sigh....

Oh, one last thing. Beth is no longer my only regular lover. A man I will call "Simon" hooks up with me on a regular basis, now, too. This is a recent development, and I would talk more about it but I am so tired. I will let you know three things, though: Beth knows about him; she introduced me to him; and he knows *nothing* about this site. I don't give that information freely.

Sometimes I wish I'd never given that information to her. I know she'll read this, but she'll understand. The point of this site was so that I could just talk about my dark side, my nasty side, my embarrassing side. Letting her know about all this... part of me wants to cry.

Argh.

<--- me crying right now. Sort of. Kind of. I love her, though, I really do!

It's just sex with him, btw. The sex is great, I won't lie... he makes me feel young again, the way he treats me... I feel like a little girl again. Maybe I make myself feel that way with him. I've been with guys his age before (I think) but... shudder. He's just so cool about it.

Enough for now. Oh, except to say that yes, I still dance; yes, I still want to go back to school if I can ever get my act together; and yes, I'm still working on TTT and SG and a ton of other things. I've been writing a TON lately. It's the sex-scenes that keep killing me. Whenever I re-read them they just aren't hot. Orgasms in real life are so, so much different than orgasms received via porn. I guess that's why I've always loved and needed certain inspirations...! :P

At the same time... and I don't care if Beth reads this since I know she will... he satisfies me with something no woman ever could. It doesn't mean I love her less. It doesn't! I really do love her! If I wanted to cheat on her with someone, believe me, I could! Given my job, my online "Shannon" persona, etc... I could so do it. But she let me hook up with him.

I've never lied to her. About all that. I won't say I haven't lied to you, Beth... I can't say that. Argh.

I only ever lie to the people I love.

-shannon-

P.S. If you want to read a good sex-story, check out Rache's "Girl Fag" on SOL.net. I would never have recommended it before (even though I love her writing!) except that she's been re posting the whole thing just recently... and now it's a lot better!

P.P.S. I love Beth. I really do, with all my heart and in more ways than I can ever communicate via text like this. I say this not because I know you will read this tomorrow but because it really is true.

"Beth", you knew how fucked up I was when we first got together.

SG Chapter 7 and Racist Readers

First, Suburban Girl Chapter Seven is now available on this site. You know where to find it.

Second, why do I keep getting racist e-mail about this chapter? Here's a great example from steinman88@*****.com:

you [sic] problem is that you [sic] story went from good positive natural and normal sex and a little slutty too to stereotypical 'the white man is small and blacks are huge' shit... I thought better of you after eveything [sic] you wrote before. Hope you get back to good stuff and leave the blacks out... this is turning into another 'white girl becomes black gang's slut' story'... I give you one more chapter then I quite [sic].

Now here's the thing. When I posted this chapter I admitted that I didn't think it was my best work. But I was thinking that the negative reaction I would get for it would be comments like, "You took too long getting to the action" or "This chapter was really slow compared to the others". You know, stuff like that. I never, ever expected that so many of my readers would be upset about interracial sex!

I mean, let's think about this for a second. I've put Becky through bestiality. I put Tina through prostitution. I put both Amy and Kaylee through incest. And other than Kaylee, every female protagonist I've ever written about has endured rape, torture, coercion, etc. None of that upsets the people who have initially responded to SG Ch.7, though. No, what bugs them is that I had Becky have sex with black men.

I have received, as of 2:56am EDT on this date, exactly 14 e-mails about SG Ch.7. Not nearly as much as I got for Family Honor, but I mean, FH was sort of a fluke (keep 'em coming, btw! I still love all the e-mails I get about my first and only short story...). Anyway, 4 of those e-mails have been anonymous submissions via SOL.net. The rest have been from people like steinman88 up there, people who have such little shame about their utterly racist hearts that they don't care if I get their e-mail address. Oh, and of those four anonymous messages? Yeah, only one didn't include any racist-leaning comments.

All of this has come completely out of left field. Hopefully this initial reaction to the latest chapter will turn out to be a minority viewpoint. I'd hate to think that most of my reader-base is made up of racist assholes, you know?

Grr. I mean (and I'm sorry for going off on a rant here!) I could honestly understand if it was the opposite; if it were black people writing me angry e-mails about this chapter. Think about it: I've never included black people in any of my stories before and then, when I finally did, I had to make them gang-bangers. I could understand getting e-mails criticising me for employing that ugly stereotype, or for the dialogue I wrote for them (did anyone notice that only Maurice speaks proper English in the chapter?). But to get so many e-mails right off the bat from readers pissed off primarily because I had Becky get involved with black people... ugh. It makes me feel sick.

I'll just never understand racism, I guess. It's a totally foreign notion to me. To not like a person and, indeed, hate a person just because of the color of their skin... I'll never get that. I mean, I've known a lot of racists in real life. I dated one in high school for a very long time. I've heard all the so-called "explanations" for why racism is "acceptable" or "logical" or "scientific". But for me it's all bullshit. Like, you might as well try to convince me the Earth is flat. I can accept that you think it is and I can accept that other people share your belief. But I will never agree with such a statement, now will I ever understand why you'd choose to be so ignorant.

Suburban Girl Part Seven

I just posted chapter seven of my story, Suburban Girl, to storiesonline.net. It usually takes about 24 hours before submissions appear on the site but once it shows up you'll be able to find it by clicking here (make sure you're logged into SOL.net first). I'll add the chapter to my stories section on this site shortly after it appears on SOL.net, too.

In the meantime I want to talk a little bit about this story in general and this latest chapter in particular. A lot of people like to bug me about both this story and my other unfinished one, Trailer Trash Teen. I'm constantly asked via chat or e-mail why it takes me so long to post updates. Some people have even suggested that I not post anything unless the story is completely finished. While there is a certain logic to that, for me part of the fun of writing something as long as SG or TTT is the constant feedback I get after posting new chapters. Also, finishing a chapter is extremely difficult and time consuming and it sort of recharges my batteries when I can post something new for all of you to read.

But why does it take so long for me to finish these things? Simple: I want them to be good. Or, at least, as good as they can be. Take this latest chapter of SG, for example. I actually could have posted it quite a while ago. If I had, though, it would have been a disaster. I basically re-wrote the entire thing over the holiday weekend and trust me, it's a lot better now.

That being said, let me tell you something about chapter seven. It's not great. I mean, it's good enough to post and I'm satisfied enough to move on to chapter eight but I have to admit that chapter seven of SG is not my best work. I'll be interested to hear every one's opinion about it, but I just wanted to warn you that I'm not 100% satisfied with the final result.

Why am I posting it, then? Simple. Writing a story like SG is like taking a cross-country trip. Say you start in South Carolina and want to drive to Oregon. Now, a lot of the trip is going to be fun and scenic, right? At the same time, though, there will be big boring stretches (Nebraska, anyone? :P) you'll have to drive through, too. Chapter seven is one of those necessary but not exactly amazing stretches. Now, I understand that an extremely gifted writer can avoid a stretch like SG Ch.7. I'm not at that level yet, though, sorry! :(

Anyway, is it boring? I think probably a little. Is it erotic? I hope so! You let me know... thanks!

//Update: Wow, Ch.7 is already on SOL.net! That was quick. What's most interesting to me, though, is that SG is now my longest story according SOL.net. Trailer Trash Teen (still incomplete after 11 chapters) is "only" 458kb in size; Suburban Girl, after posting Ch. 7, now shows as being 477kb in size. Interesting...!

Suburban Girl Part Six

Yep, I posted it over at http://www.storiesonline.net/. For those of you who don't know about that site, click here (or just take my word when I say that I'm just a member of that site; I don't run it, receive any money from it, etc.). I'll post it here, too, once I get motivated enough. :P

Oh, and for those of you wondering about me and my last post, let's just say I'm not going to any of those meetings anymore. I've been too busy doing this with with Beth:

Two Young Girls Practice Kissing on Each Other

Looks like you've got kissing down. Now go do your math homework.

Get humor videos at NothingToxic


:) Btw, no, that's not really me and her (if you even had to ask!).

SG Part Five (already)! :)

That's right, I just posted Part Five of "Suburban Girl" to storiesonline.net and alt.sex.stories.moderated! It should only take a couple hours before it shows up on SOL, and it usually takes a good 12-hours or more before it shows up on ASSM. I wish wish wish I could just upload the story here, too, but as I've mentioned before there seem to be some FTP problems at ASSTR.org. Grrr...

Anyway, you know what's crazy? Suburban Girl is about to reach 68,000 words! That means its on pace to easily eclipse "A Teen Slut's Saga" in length... crazy! When I started writing this story I had figured that by part five I'd be almost done, but once again I've kinda gone nuts and decided to make my poor victim (in this case, Becky) endure a lot more than I'd originally planned. Shrugs... it's been fun for me at least! And for some of you, too, based on the feedback I've been getting!

Speaking of feedback, I want to apologize to everyone who has taken the time to write me about this story and still waiting for my reply. I hope you believe me when I say that your letters really, truly inspire me to keep writing, and are very much appreciated! The same goes to those who have posted about SG in the forum, commented on this blog, or sent me anonymous comments via SOL's feedback thingy. I wish I had the time to reply to each letter and comment I've received but, well, I only have so much time every day to work on the story so I usually choose to spend all of it doing just that (which is why I'm already up to part five)! I hope you understand...

Okay, so you'll be able to see "Suburban Girl" Part Five at this link once SOL posts it. Make sure you're logged into SOL first or I don't think the link will work. As always, your "10/10/10" votes at that site are much appreciated, too! I've been getting a lot of them and they've helped to keep SG hovering at around the 8.42 average (for a while it dipped below 8.21...). Thanks!

shannon

p.s. In case you didn't notice, I've been labeling every post about SG in this blog... if you've missed any of my other SG related posts (or just want to stroll down memory lane!) you can always click the "Suburban Girl" label at the bottom of this post to see them all. :P

SG Part Four!

Yes, it's here! I just posted "Suburban Girl" Part Four to Storiesonline.net (if you're logged into that website right now you can click this link to go straight to it; if not, just login to SOL and do a search for "Suburban Girl"). I also posted it to alt.sex.stories.moderated but, as you know, posts to that newsgroup often take a while before showing up... so be patient, or sign up for SOL and see it now. :P

As always, if you're there anyway, go ahead and give "Suburban Girl" a 10/10/10 score! I appreciate SO MUCH all of you who have done so but there are so many anti-forbidden genre ppl out there right now that I literally received two 1/1/1/ scores last week. From the same person. Listen to this (actual) e-mail where the jerk confesses as much:

From: Truce2B
Date: October 31, 2007
Subject: {SOL} Feedback: Suburban Girl
Message: We all are sinner in the eye of the lord but you are sin more. You write becky to be a young slut a young girl with problmes. You give her no dviniation so she goes dogs. NO DIVINATION. she goes slave? you make her ultimate sinner! You must , need, rot in hell. Give me your real name. i will send u there. I will hunt u down and do lords work. In mean-time u get 1s from me and my other*. Your story will bury. NO ONE SHOULD READ IT. 1111111111111111111111111111111s are all u get.

*I got all 1's (1.1.1) for Suburban Girl twice last week, like I said. The first came at 1:12am Oct. 31, and the second vote occurred at 1:20am, Oct 31. The above e-mail came at 1:48am that same day. Coincidence? Shrugs!

Anyway! I hope (most) of you enjoy part four of SG. Bye!

-shannon-

SG Part Three FTW! :)

Hey everyone! I'm sorry it's taken so long to get the next part of Suburban Girl up and posted... it went through several rewrites and basically I just got so sick of wondering what I left out/if I explained stuff correctly that tonight I decided, "Okay, this re-read is to correct grammar and spelling ONLY." So I did that. Just now. I can't say I'm totally happy with the result but I still think it's pretty good. Anyway, as always you can find the story over at StoriesOnline.net, or on the Alt.Sex.Stories.Moderated newsgroup. Unfortunately I still can't add it here to this site b/c the ASSTR.org admins haven't gotten back to me on what's wrong with my account (nothing I upload seems to show up!) but that hasn't stopped 4,293 of you from finding it on SOL (and it giving it an average score of 8.43! Not too bad but remember ppl: 10's only!!! We have to fight against the 1's and 2's the anti-forbidden-genre ppl love to dole out!).

By the way, someone recently asked me if I'm affiliated with Storiesonline.net in some way. The answer is no! No no no! I'm a member, just like you! I registered for free like most of you do, years ago, and eventually earned a "premium" account because of the stories I've contributed (which, frankly, is only a little bit better than the free account). But I don't get paid a dime, and I DEFINITELY have no control over how the site is run! Lol, if I did my stories would all have 10's. :P

What I like about SOL is that it's so easy to add and update stories to it, plus (despite the rants I've given before) the scoring system and top 10's and all that are pretty neat. And the lack of ads/pop-ups/etc. The only thing I don't like is the fact that you have to register in order to download/view stories there. I mean, it's free to register, but it's still a pain. Plus, with a free account they're always telling you about the stuff you'd get if you'd upgrade to premium (like category searches, simple stuff like that...nothing too major). You know me, I like everything to be free! But hey, not many people peruse the newsgroup for erotic smut anymore... argh. I remember the good old days. Sigh. Anyway!

So yeah, head on over to SOL.net, register for free if you haven't already, and look up my story. "Suburban Girl". Or, once you're registered and logged in, you could try using this link. It might bring you to a list of all three of my stories, but I'm too lazy to test to see if it works right now. Please post in comments if it doesn't!

Oh, and here's a little movie-love for you real fans out there! I'm pretty sure I haven't posted this one yet but if I have, the heck with it. I'm too lazy and tired to go looking for some other new porn for you all. I mean, you're supposed to be looking for porn to share with me on the forum and via e-mail, remember? To keep me excited and writing? Remember?! :P

As always, definitely e-mail me with your thoughts on SG3. Your comments are the reason I keep writing! That and the porn... thanks Sphere, Dolemite, and VooDoo!



-shannon-

Working Hard on Chapter Three!

Suburban Girl is doing so-so. On SOL I mean. Currently it's been downloaded almost 3700 times, has been marked as "favorite" ("library" in SOL terms) 80 times, and has a score of 8.18 out of 10. That's not bad! My average has been wrecked by some 10/10/1 scores, but whatever. I know the subject matter won't appeal to everyone, I knew that when I wrote it. What I don't get is why someone would read it, knowing what it's about (the story-codes I've labeled it with leave no surprises) and then praise my writing and then trash its appeal. Shrugs. Can someone please explain?!?

Someone made a comment to this blog recently, where they said that I write best when my life is at its worst. Wrong! That's not true. Because my life is always fucked up, silly! The truth is I write best when I am horny. And yes, I have a boyfriend right now, and he's awesome between the sheets. If anything, having a constant cock in my life only makes me hornier. And thus I write better. I write best when I'm horny, you see. So it's movies like this that get me writing. Long story short? If you want to see chapter three of SG anytime soon, try and get me horny.

I dare you.

:P

SG Chapter Two!

Well, this is when things get really nasty! ;)

As promised, Part Two of my newest story, "Suburban Girl" has been posted. Please head on over to storiesonline.net to see it (it should show up soon), or check it out on alt.sex.stories.moderated. I'd try posting it here to the site but since Part One still won't show up (and the admins at ASSTR.org haven't returned any of my e-mails asking why that is) I'm not going to bother right now.

Oh! And in anticipation of the high scores* you'll likely give my newest effort, here's another embedded movie! Can anyone see this, btw?! Sometimes they don't show up even for me, but sometimes they do. Shrugs! It's worth a try in any event...



-shannon-

*If you happened to notice a post I made late last night where I sounded very frustrated and angry (I also copied an entire chat I'd had with the person who had made me so upset), you didn't imagine it. Thing is, though, I didn't mean to post it. In fact, I didn't think I had until I saw it up this morning! I deleted it right away because it was written while I was very upset and, like I said, I thought I'd been smart and hit the "save now" button so I could review it after I calmed down. See, the guy I'd been chatting with had told me he was one of my biggest fans and all that, but then had gone on to say he gave my newest story bad scores. We got into a debate about that since I think fans of this site should give my stories all 10's on SOL to balance out the people who *hate* anything not "normal"... well, it's not worth going over again. Suffice it to say I regretted posting that message and it's gone now.

Suburban Girl Part 1 Is Doing Well!

And that makes me happy! Because on SOL it currently has 1,563 views, 45 votes, and an average score of 8.21! I know, not enough to get it onto the "Top Scores" section of the site, but it's still pretty good for a hard-core, underage, d/s story on SOL. And I have you, the fans of this site, to thank for this terrific response. "Suburban Girl" is getting an even better response than "Trailer Trash Teen" did in its early days, and that's saying something! And that's why I've decided to try something new with this post... I'm embedding a little porno movie I found on yuvutu.com here, something I've never tried before. Consider it my way of saying, "Thanks!". Let's hope it works!



Pretty hot, huh? Assuming it worked, and you watched it, I bet you're wishing I would post more videos that turn me on... and I will, too, so long as this experiment works! My motivation for doing so also relies on my stories getting positive scores on SOL.net, though (scroll down to the third request on that page for info)! Yes, I know, I'm a whore for praise from anonymous erotica readers, but at least I'm honest about it. :P So if you still haven't gone over to storiesonline.net to vote all 10's for "Suburban Girl" (and btw, why would you e-mail me to brag that you gave the story all 9's?!? I've received *two* e-mails from ppl who clearly think I'd go down on them for such a lackluster endorsement... grrr!), please make sure that you do... you don't want me whining and begging again like I did in my last blog entry, do you? :P

shannon

Triumphant Return?

Okay so maybe I jumped the gun a little when I said I needed to kill this website... I mean, where else am I going to be able to post new stories? :P

Maybe I'll go into more detail later about my failed attempt to try something new in order to make money (which had been my main reason for leaving this site). Right now I really don't want to talk about it. What I do want to talk about is my newest story, something I've been working on for a couple weeks and that I'm so excited about I actually decided to post it to the masses. It's called Suburban Girl and... well, I might as well just copy and paste my intro to the story I used for my post to ASSM. Here it is!

Author's Note: This story is heavily inspired by my personal favorite UseNet story of all time, "Farm Girl" by Dark Dreamer. It's not a retelling of that awesome tale, nor is it a sequel or anything like that. Rather it's sort of a re-imagining of Dark Dreamer's classic character, Becky, as told in my own words. I hope no one is going to consider this plagiarism. I have loved "Farm Girl" for more than a decade now, having first read it when I was a shy 13-year-old girl who knew little about erotica but became instantly hooked. I hope that this story serves as a tribute to Dark Dreamer's work.

Synopsis: In the suburbs of Cleveland, Ohio a young girl discovers that masturbation is a sin. But when she breaks a promise to God to stop her immoral actions she begins to see the Bible's list of sexual restrictions as her most basic and carnal desires. Because for this 13-year-old suburban girl, sin and her wanton sexual needs go hand in hand as she struggles to endure a body built for sex, abuse, and constant orgasm.

So where can you go to read this story? Well, I've only posted part one so far, but never fear part two is coming soon. And part three is almost done. That leaves four unwritten parts, I know, but I'm enjoying writing this so much I have every confidence I'll actually get it done! Uhm... don't look at me like that. Trailer Trash Teen is still in progress, too... argh. Anyway, to read this story simply mosey on over to my stories section. It should be posted there eventually (I've uploaded the files but ASSTR.org has very slow servers). You could also try searching for it on alt.sex.stories.moderated... again, I posted it there but the process of having new submissions show up is something like 48-hours. But do you want to know where you can get it right now?

Where you can read it at this very moment?

Where doing so would also be doing me a HUGE favor? :P

Head on over to www.storiesonline.net. If you haven't already, register for the site (it's free, and it's worth doing for more than just my stories... SOL.net hosts a TON of great works!). Then either do a "Quick Search" for "Suburban Girl" or just go to the author's link at the top of the main page, find my name (first click on the link "P" as in "Punky_Girl"), scroll down to my name (Punky_Girl!) then click on the link for "3 Stories" (because I have three stories hosted there right now). Sounds easy, right? It is, I just make it sound complicated... sorry!

"But Shannon!" I can hear you asking, "How does reading any of your stories on SOL.net help you?"

Simple. Because I can trust you, my loyal readers, to give my stories there good scores. At the end of every story SOL.net asks you to rate what you just read. But a lot of people don't like the genres I write in and so they give any stories that deal with themes such as incest or non-consensual sex pathetically low scores, generally 1's and 2's. The reason I know for a fact this is going on is because I get a lot of hate-mail through SOL.net, as have many other authors I've chatted with who post there. The hate mails are usually like, "dad fux his sleppin kid that sik i hope u die i gave it 1" (for the record, A Teen Slut's Saga still brings in the most hate mail... grr). Shrugs. Anyway, it'd be nice for a change if I had a story on there get a rating over 8.12 (that's what TTT has right now; A Teen Slut's Saga has a paltry 6.39).

So please! Even if you read my newest story somewhere else, do me a favor and go over to SOL.net and give it a 10! Better yet, do the advanced ratings option and give it a 10 in each category! Better still, after you've done that with Suburban Girl, head on over to my other two stories and try to prop their scores up a bit! I'm dying here, I'm dying!!! I just can't take the fact that my stories, while definitely not perfect, suffer these miserably low scores while pieces of shit, poorly written cookie cutter stories constantly score in the 9 to 10 range! It kills me, it kills me! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

Sorry. Anyway, vote early and often. And as always, use the forum to discuss my newest story, or post a comment here, or if you're not feeling shy at all drop me an e-mail. Or just do all three. You'll make my day. Thanks!!!!!!

-shannon-