Your Recomendations, My Thoughts (Part Two!)

Virgin on the Verge by Dr. Wu
I know, I know, another Dr. Wu story! But I would totally be remiss if I didn't include this one eventually. Virgin on the Verge contains some of the same themes you'd expect from a Wu story (teenage high school girl, blackmail, etc.) but in many ways it has more twists and turns than the Tiffany Daniels stories and includes an ending that seems foreign in comparison. In Virgin on the Verge Wu introduces us to a 16-year-old girl named Allison, a shy and demure teenager who ends up manipulated and ultimately controlled by someone she thinks is a friend. Where the story goes from there is both predictable and surprising because Wu manages to steer the course into choppy waters while delivering yet another highly erotic classic.

Ellen by Emerson Laken-Palmer
(Part One) (Part Two)
This story (like all the ones reviewed in this post) was recommended by a fan of the site. But you know what? I was so familiar with Ellen, and so sure that I had included it on my reviews page, that I sorta just skipped over the e-mails I got about it. Then it occurred to me: maybe I hadn't included it on my reviews page. Why else would so many people be suggesting it? So I went and looked and, sure enough, Ellen is not in my collection.

**bad shannon! bad shannon!**

Sorry!!! Anyway, Ellen is an old story but it's a classic. It's written from the point of view of a man recalling how he came to love and obsess over his little sister, Ellen, back when they were both teenagers. Yes, it's an incest story. Yes, it's a love story. But it's written in such a deep, thought provoking way that you really believe that the story being told is true. Its sense of realism accentuates the eroticism in a way that will leave you wanting more. I absolutely love this story. Thanks to all of you who recommended it... and shame on me for not having included it in my collection before now!

The Jailbait Blog by Joe
Okay, so this isn't a story. Sue me! This little blog was recommended to me a few days ago and I'm so glad it was. It's run by a guy who calls himself Joe. He describes his blog as being... "Your # 1 Source for Legal Jailbait! Discussion of what is permissible attraction vs. outright perversion involving teens, usually of the smoking hot adolescent girl variety. Nonnude (Nonude?) videos always..." Anyway, Joe's blog is basically a collection of videos (primarily from YouTube) that feature hot teenage girls doing... well, anything! Like dancing, or stretching, or just messing around. The videos he features are basically innocent, but the fact that they capture hot teenage girls who don't know they appear sexual gives them a very voyeuristic quality. Warning: sometimes the videos don't load, or are removed by YouTube before you can see them. But don't worry! Everything he posts is legal, fun, and alluring. Here's an example:



Anyway! Check out the stories and that blog, and definitely make sure to keep the recommendations coming! Thanks!

Your Reccomendations, My Thoughts (Part One!)

Wow! The response I got to my posting the other day where I asked for good story recommendations has been overwhelming! Already I've received nearly 25 emails, there have been a few posts to the forum thread I started for it, and the blog entry itself even got a couple of comments. It seems most of you prefer e-mailing me directly, which is fine, but I encourage everyone to check out the forum thread, too. Anyway, without further ado, here are some of the stories that were rec commended to me. I'm only posting three right now, but don't worry: if you don't see yours here it only means it's on my "must read" list. It could very likely show up in part two of this little... uhm... series? Yeah! Series, that sounds good! :)

14-Year-Old Sandwich by Dr. Wu
Dr. Wu only wrote for a little while many years ago, but his stories still seem to resonate. His name came up in several e-mails and even a forum posting. The Tiffany Daniels series, which most consider Dr. Wu's opus, has already been reviewed on this site (it's a personal favorite of mine!). This story, about two teen girls who essentially prostitute themselves in order to get tickets to see the Backstreet boys, has nothing to do with Tiffany but is definitely a good read. It's short by Dr. Wu's standards, but manages to turn an unrealistic idea into plausible erotica the way very few authors have ever done before. If you've never read this one, read it now. If you've never read any of the Tiffany stories, start there. If you want to read everything in the short-career of Dr. Wu, click the link!

Little Tina and Friends by Unknown
This incomplete but very long story was recommended to me via e-mail with the caveat that it features girls a little bit younger than I normally read about. And that's true: Tina, the star of this story, is only 11. But the exploration of her innocence and naivete through both her point of view and her "teacher" remains compelling. It's not the best written story, to be sure. The fact that I ended up skipping repetitive scenes is a testament to the fact that the unknown author didn't really seem to know where he or she was going at times. It's hot though, for a variety of reasons, in the way that poorly written stories with great ideas sometimes can be. I guess that's something only erotica stories can achieve... shrugs. Anyway, if you like your girls very young and naive and blackmailed, check this one out! I wasn't disappointed, at least... :P

Owned Teacher by Thumb
Another uncompleted work, Owned Teacher achieves so much that you will become immediately hooked by its narrative. Here we have a teenage girl, a senior in high school, blackmailing her female teacher. And then doing much more, so much more. This story was recommended to me on the forum, and even though I was warned it was a long one I figured I'd be able to stop reading right away since I had things to do that day. I was wrong. I couldn't stop reading. Although it lags at times, Owned Teacher is a treasure I'm glad to have finally found. You will be, too, once you read it... trust me!

Well, that's it for now. Please keep your recommendations coming in! Remember that I will never divulge your name unless you say I can, and that you can make recommendations by either replying to this post, or posting on the forum, or just by e-mailing me.

Your enthusiasm keeps me active on this site! Thanks again!

Shannon

Recommendations!

"...clearly I'm geeked about finding a new author... to enjoy. Thank you for all the work you've put into your stories. I'm just mad I never discovered you before... I've been reading this stuff (erotica) for 13 years now, have been on SOL.net for more than four years, and only today I finally find you? It just is not fair! :("

Have you ever read a book that was so good you just had to share it with your friends right away? You loan the book out to someone and beg your friend to read it. Once they've done so you tell them to pass it on; you'd rather have more people enjoy it than have it back in your possession. If you never get the book back you don't care, so long as you know it's being enjoyed over and over again by many people, probably some of whom you don't know. You just want everyone, the entire world, to be able to experience the same giddy thrill you got from reading that novel the first time.

I'm like that. Lol, my bookshelf is packed tight with books I hate. The ones I love I just have to loan out, I just have to share them.

It has been a long, long time since I read an erotica story online that made me feel this way.

Now I have. Earlier today I discovered an amazing author named Rache. And she wrote a story that was so incredible that I nearly fainted while reading it. I was at work when I read it (slow day!). Once I started I just couldn't stop.

Let's cut to the chase: here's the link to her story (make sure you're logged into www.storiesonline.net first-- for the noobs it's a free sex-story site but you have to be registered to view its content; no spyware, no ads, 100% free, the real deal-- go reg, then click the following link): Long Fall to Forever.

Rache is the author. And I read all the installments of "Long Fall" at work. And I was pleased to discover the author has written many, many more stories besides on SOL. Because "Long Fall" is not only hot and well written, it's also intriguing, genuine, and compelling.

Right now I'm reading another of her stories from the same "world" LF takes place in (a story entitled "Runaway Dream"). I'm only about 1/4 of the way through of RD, but it is just as exciting, compelling, and awesome as the first story of hers I read, if not more so.

I don't want to spoil anything for you by telling you what these stories are about. Suffice it to say they're graphic, stirring, and definitely of the "forbidden" genre. And they are just... well, if you're like me you'll be hooked by the plot right away. I don't know how else to describe it.

I will say this: Rache is a terrific writer. She is superior to me in all ways when it comes to character development, plot, and creativity. And I don't easily say that!!! My ego is huge. But the fact that she can craft stories like this... wow. I didn't want to stop reading. I didn't want to stop cumming! Argh....

My one and only complaint about her is that she doesn't seem to proofread her works before posting. DO NOT CONSIDER THIS OBSERVATION AN INSULT, THOUGH! She occassionally makes a mistake like writing "your" instead of "you're". She occassionally makes a mistake by not identifying an article with its infinitive properly. Lord knows I've made many of the same mistakes. I'm just saying her stories aren't perfect.

But they are amazing. And easily the best erotic fiction I've read... ever?

Oh, I almost forgot! That quote at the beginning of this blog entry? That's from a fan mail I wrote to her earlier today. And though I always write to any author whose story "satisfies" me, I never gush like that. Never. I have literally never written such an embarrassingly complimentary e-mail to another writer before.

That's how much I loved this story. If you trust my judgment in such things, ignore the story codes. Just read either story I just posted links to. Or read her other ones... she's written over 100 (omg). And make sure to send her encouraging feedback, even anonymous feedback!

Let her know Shannon/PunkyGirl sent you! :P

-shannon-