Story Reviews

 

This is the collection part of the website, the place where I provide reviews to stories I think are really good! To be in this collection a story has to meet two requirements: it must be a sex-story with a "forbidden" genre (young participants/teenagers, rape, blackmail, incest, bestiality, drugs, humiliation, etc.) and it must be good! Each story is reviewed and graded by me so you can determine whether or not you want to read it. If there's a story you feel should be added to this collection, please contact me about it. Thanks, and enjoy!

 


24-Hour Boy Toy Tiffany (m/f, m+/f, f/f, blackmail, force, non-consensual, humiliation, incest)
by Dr. Wu

First of all, this story is the second installment of the "Tiffany Daniels" series by Dr. Wu. The first installment was "Toying with Tiffany".

Sigh. Don't you hate it when you're reading a great ongoing story (either a serial or a series of books) when you know the author is no longer around? Well, I do. It's sort of disappointing! Here I am, just having finished Dr. Wu's second story, looking forward to the next three he published about Tiffany... and already I'm depressed that it ends after that. You know? After the fifth book about Tiffany, the series is over! I wish he were still active. I wish Tiffany would go on in future stories... even though I haven't even gotten through her third!

Anyway, this story is fucking incredible in any event. I think this installment, the second of the five he ended up posting, is just outright amazing. If I can be blunt: I had to break for orgasm nearly five times reading this second part of the Tiffany saga! I cannot, simply cannot wait to read the rest, now!

See, the first story introduced us to Tiffany: a sexy young 16-year-old rich girl who gets blackmailed by her elder male teachers into many a depraved act. This part continues her story: what happens after she's "escaped" her teachers' torments? What happens when this young Anna Kournikova look-alike has to baby-sit her cousin? Trust me, it's really hot!

Definitely check out Toying with Tiffany first. I mean, 24-Hour is better in my opinion, and it prolly would stnad on its own... but having read TwT beforehand, let me say that a.) it's a great story! and b.) It's cool that you start 24-Hour knowing the main characters. So read TwT, then read this one!! I haven't read the third story yet, but when I do, the review will be posted here. Have fun!!!

Rating: A!

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Daughter's Prison (M/f, non-consensual, incest, pregnancy)
by SilentAllTheseYears 

The night I found this story, I was really tired. I was actually just looking for something to bookmark and return to later, because I didn't have the energy to read through an entire story. But once I started reading this one, I simply couldn't stop! Every paragraph, literally, kept me wanting more because the author does a fantastic job keeping the reader interested with every sentence.

This story is about a young teenage girl, written in the first person, who loses her mother to cancer and is forced to basically raise her little brother. Her father, meanwhile, becomes an alcoholic loser, putting his family on welfare because he doesn't want to work. As Jane grows up she starts realizing that her father is attracted to her-- he makes it pretty obvious, in fact! However, despite all his inappropriate behavior, there's nothing she can do about it. She's trapped.

One of the greatest strengths of this story is the author's ability to "keep it moving". It's not actually a very long story, as these things go, but it ends up spanning the time from when Jane is 14 until she's 18. However, it never feels rushed. As her father begins to be more and more of a jerk as Jane becomes more and more physically mature, we really do feel bad for Jane and how she's stuck in this situation. The relationship between father and daughter is realistic, as are Jane's feelings about them.

All this isn't to say that the story doesn't have its weaknesses. Like some of my other favorite stories, it's rife with grammatical mistakes-- but don't worry, they're not so bad as to make it difficult to read. I suppose the biggest problem with this story is the lack of more detail in the sex scenes. If anything in the story feels rushed, it's them: one even occurs with the main character passed out (making it difficult to read about seeing as it's written in the first person!). The story is still arousing, don't get me wrong, but it probably could have been more so.

All in all, a great story nonetheless. Daughter's Prison will definitely suck you in, get you hot, get you angry, and then make you want more.

Rating: B-

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Drugged Babysitter (F/f, M/f, drugs, non-consensual, rape, reluctance)
by Dark Dreamer 


This short story by Dark Dreamer is about a teenage babysitter who accidentally drugs herself after drinking what she thought was cola. When her customers return home and find her nearly passed out on their sofa, they can't resist the urge to take advantage of their drugged-up sitter. Uncharacteristically for Dark Dreamer it is the wife, not the husband, who is more forceful and aggressive with the teenage-girl. And you know what? It works! Though not DD's best story, the short build-up to hardcore action makes it worth a read. 

Rating: B

(The link to this story will bring you to a directory where all eight parts of Farm Girl are located!)

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Farm Girl (M/f, MM+/f, F/f, anal, bestiality, non-consensual, incest, w/s, spank, f-solo, rape, reluctance, torture)
by Dark Dreamer 


This classic, which I only recently read, is about a young girl named Becky (around 14 or so) who is heavily in touch with her sex-life: she loves it! She learns about masturbation all by herself and the story drops you right into the action. Eventually these habits come back to haunt her as she is continuously maltreated by strangers at first and then, eventually, her own dad. This stuff is hard-boiled: rough, nasty, but manages to stay highly erotic as well. If you haven't, definitely read it now!

Rating: A

(The link to this story will bring you to a directory where all eight parts of Farm Girl are located!)

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Junkyard Family, The (M/f, m/f, m+/f, f/f, non-consensual, incest, rape, reluctance, light bdsm)
by Dark Dreamer 


This is another classic by Dark Dreamer, one that I've been getting yelled at for not posting! In fact, I only just recently read it, but I loved it! It's basically about a family that lives in a junkyard: four brothers, two sisters, and their father. The younger sister, Jody, is a tomboy-type while Keri is an extremely well endowed, sexually charged teenage girl. I don't want to spoil what happens but just know this: Jody is more experienced sexually than Keri at first believes, and soon the two sisters' sexual lives become intertwined...

Although this story isn't as good as "Farm Girl", it's another great work by Dark Dreamer. I highly recommend it!

Rating: B+

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Katie and Lyn (f/f, consensual)
by Gina Marie (no longer active)

Someone told me online that consensual sex could be as hot as non-consensual, as long as it was written correctly. This story was their proof, and I must admit, I finally understand! This lesbian story of two teenage girls not only provides eroticism in breathtakingly new ways, it refrains from vulgarity in order to do so. And while it explores these two young girls' fantasies it never loses sight of the fact that they are girls! The author manages to simultaneously provide hot sex-scenes AND maintain the characters' innocence throughout them... shudder!!! I love this story. Read it and love it!

Rating: A

(Story may be obtained by searching for the title and author in Google Groups) 

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Little Susie (m/g, m+/g, drugs)
by Robin Smythe

This excellent, well written story is about a young girl who desires nothing more than to emulate her older sister. But "Little Susie", as she's referred to by both her sister and her sister's "cool" friends, doesn't know what it means to actually be an older teenager. She finds out quickly that she doesn't fit in, and that she really is a lot younger than all her sister's friends. But Susie is determined to make it all okay, on the night of The Party...

This short story is well worth the read. Although it's very short and at places feels rushed, it's definitely a well written and wonderfully erotic tale of a young girl and her first sexual experience. It's realistic and sensual, and I highly recommend it to anyone who enjoys this genre...!

Rating: B+

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The Receptionist (M/F, M+/F, humiliation, spanking, light-bondage)

by Orestes

 

A young doctor hears rumors of a secret group of surgeons known as the "Cutters Club" who meet to humiliate, degrade, and fuck a new female victim every week. At first Dr. Roxanne Tremblay dismisses the rumors as an urban legend at her new place of employment. But when a friend of Roxanne's named Shelly confirms the rumors as being true, the young doctor grows intrigued. Slowly she begins to investigate (out of mere curiosity, of course!) and takes a series of small steps toward becoming one of the Cutters Club's girls of the week.

 

This story is written exceptionally well for a story of its kind. I really enjoyed the way the author successfully portrays the main character as reluctantly turned on by the idea of being fucked and degraded by a group of twelve men, and the way he slowly works events toward that ultimate scene. An exceptionally erotic story, I highly recommend you read The Receptionist right now!

 

Rating: A

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Receptionist Bonus (M/F, M+/F, F/F, humiliation, water-sports)

by Orestes

 

In this, the sequel to Orestes' The Receptionist, we get to learn the fate of Dr. Roxanne Tremblay. Following her degrading yet sought-out gangbang at the hands of several co-workers, the young surgeon/slut is suspended by her hospital for one year due to the video-taped evidence of the woman's "moral lapse". Desperate for money because that same tape ended her marriage, Roxanne takes up her friend Shelly's offer to become a lowly receptionist at the cosmetic surgeon's new practice. But although the young doctor promises herself to restrain her humiliating sexual urges from now on, it isn't long before she caves in to the demands of an anonymous letter-writer.

 

I was extremely glad to discover that Orestes wrote a follow-up to The Receptionist. Although I enjoyed that story's surprising ending, the many questions it left unanswered demanded a stirring sequel. Receptionist Bonus, though occasionally less-inspiring than its predecessor, does a great job answering those questions. If you enjoyed The Receptionist  you should definitely check this one out.

 

Rating: B+

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Slave Sister (m/f, m+/f, f/f, M/f, blackmail, humiliation, non-consensual, reluctance)
by Norm de Plum

There are some stories that are so accepted as "classic" that it's nearly impossible to ignore them for long. This story is one of them! I have received so many e-mails telling me that I should include it on my site that I finally took the time to read it... and I'm glad that I did. You will be, too!

In this tale of wonderfully forbidden erotica a 14-year-old girl named Fran becomes the initially unwilling victim of her older brother's sexual dominance. It doesn't take long, though, for Fran to become a slave to her own body's submissive nature: whether he's sharing her with his friends, forcing her to come on to her teachers, or keeping her horny throughout church, there doesn't seem to be any act too degrading to stop Fran from having wonderful orgasms! The blackmail angle of this story works perfect in this context, as it's not too predominant. Instead it's Dave's ruthlessness that keeps Fran coming back for more. It works well!

Again, I'm so glad I read this story. It took me a while to get through but it never dulled and it gave me many, many moments of "pleasure". I'm betting that I'll be putting links to more of Norm de Plum's stories up here eventually, since he has many more. Until then, read this one: you won't be sorry!

Rating: A

(You can obtain this story either by searching for the title and author in the alt.sex.stories.moderated newsgroup or searching for it on ASSTR)

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Stacey's Adventures (M/g, BDSM, g-solo, w/s) 

by mrdf at hotmail dot com

Part One - Part Two - Part Three - Part Four

 

A pretty 12-year-old girl with a crummy home life stumbles upon a discarded porn-magazine behind an adult bookstore on her way home from school one day. Stacey, a deceptively timid and shy girl, discovers that she enjoys pornography so much that she gets into the habit of "dumpster diving" behind the store on a regular basis. It's only a matter of time before the girl is caught by the store's owner, a brute of a man named Boone. What happens between them next is only non-consensual in a legal sense, because Stacey is certainly willing!

 

The sex-scenes in this story are always no-holds-barred in their descriptions and activities, something I was alternatively aroused or disgusted by. This isn't to say the action didn't get me hot, just that sometimes the activities described were a bit too graphic, even for me! Also, I enjoyed what buildup there was to the action a great deal, and it's a shame there wasn't more of it (more background on the characters, especially Stacey, would have been nice too). That being said, Stacey's Adventures is a taut, in-your-face kind of story that contains interesting characters and oft-clever situations. It's not for the feint of heart but I know for a fact I'll be watching this author's posts on the newsgroups from now on... hopefully he'll even do more stories about little Stacey!

 

Rating: C+

 

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Stacy's Senior Year (m/f, f/f, m+/f, M/f, blackmail, humiliation, non-consensual)
by Parker
Ch.1 - Ch.2 - Ch.3 - Ch.4 - Ch.5 - Ch.6 - Ch.7 - Ch.8 - Ch.9a - Ch.9b - Ch.10

This story is perhaps the best of it's kind. The retired author, Parker, is listed on the "Alt.Sex.Stories Hall of Fame" page as having been one of the first writers to attempt a story like this. I have no way to know for sure if that's true, but frankly, I don't care! There have definitely been a lot of stories since that have tried to do what he did with this story but most fall far short of his ability. This story is as much a classic in the "Forbidden" genre as Dark Dreamer's Farm Girl, in my opinion. If you haven't read it yet, do so now!

Oh, what's the story about? Lol! I nearly forgot. Basically, Stacy is a senior in High School who is the typical stuck-up bitch. Uber-popular, wealthy, beautiful-- until she gets noticed cheating on a test by two fellow students, Gary and Neil. Gary turns out to be a cold-blooded mastermind of manipulation and together he, Neil, and their friend Sharon manage to reduce Stacy into a full-blown slut.

What makes this story so great, despite it's relatively simple plotline, is the fact that Parker manages to really develop the characters. Each character truly is different (unlike a lot of stories like this where everyone is the same, cookie-cutter-2D-type). The story is told from both the perspective of the "victim", Stacy, and the perpetrators, Gary & Co. The ability of the author to tell the story like this with such well developed characters makes the sex and subjugation of Stacy incredibly arousing! Also, the story seems realistic! Unlike so many stories where the victim immediately becomes a total slut, this story manages to slowly, realistically degrade poor Stacy over a period of time. You really get sucked into the action and are continuously shocked by how much deeper Stacy sinks with each chapter. A fantastic read!

Please note: The links for this story were obtained from ASSTR's alt.sex.stories.moderated archive. I really didn't want to have to post stories by chapter, but I had no choice here since I couldn't find it altogether in one file! To speed up the reading process I suggest you right-click on each link, select save target as, and simply save the file to your hard-drive! Again, I'm sorry!

Rating: A+

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Toying With Tiffany (M/f, M+/f, oral, anal, blackmail, humiliation, reluctance)
by Dr. Wu

I first read this story a long time ago. And let me be honest for a sec: when I did, I didn't really like it! I thought it was overrated (everybody loved this story!). I don't know what it was... I guess it just didn't click with me or something. Maybe it was the ants at the beginning, which I think originally made me squirm (and still does, but now in a good way!).Who knows?

What I do know is this: after re-reading it a few days ago, my new impression of the story is, "Wow!".

This story follows in the same vein as Stacy's Senior Year, in a way, by taking a "high and mighty" popular high-school girl and turning her into a depraved little slut. What I think is unique about this story, though, is the way in which Dr. Wu really brings across Tiffany's utter humiliation at some of the things she's forced to do. And by making her tormentors the teachers rather than fellow students, you get this feeling that Tiffany is totally at the mercy of men who are in complete and utter control. You feel bad for Tiffany, but the fact that she seems to enjoy a lot of her torments makes you feel hot, too!

This story has a few sequels, which I have never read (I don't think). But I'm definitely going to read them now! Maybe after I do I'll post reviews here. In any case, definitely read this one right away: it's well worth it!

Rating: A

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Usherette (M/g, f/g, F/g, oral, anal, reluctance)
by Unknown?

This is a story of a 12-year-old girl named Betsy Morrison who really wants to get a job at the local movie theatre. She is hired immediately, even though she's underage, but quickly discovers the real reasons for her hiring: to "play nice" with the theatre manager. Soon Betsy is taught a lot of things by a lot of people and they're lessons she actually enjoys!

This is a great story that does an awesome job combining the action with the plot! What goes on with little Betsy at work, and what is going on at home, both work well together to bring the main character alive and keep the sex scenes highly arousing. I think this was one of the very first erotic stories I ever read, before I really enjoyed the more forbidden subjects!

Rating: A-

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