Suburban Girl Ch. 10! (and Shawn and Lilly Ch. 3)
Hey everyone!
I just posted chapter 10 of "Suburban Girl" to SOL.net. It's quite a long and sprawling chapter but I think it sets up the rest of the story quite nicely. There's just one chapter left and I'm working on it right now... in fact, making this post to my blog is taking away from my precious writing time. Grr.
Oh, and as promised, I also posted "Shawn and Lilly" Chapter Three. Thanks so much, by the way, for all the awesome feedback about this story! As predicted my SOL.net score for it sucks (my fave explanation so far? "...I gave you all 1s on principal because I need my fiction to have some truth in it"... ???) but your positive letters buoy my spirits! :)
-shannon-
p.s. Yes, I'll be putting up SG9, SG10, and all the S&L chapters, in text format, on this site soon, too. In the meantime just register for SOL.net already... geez! :P
Labels: shawn+lilly, Suburban Girl
posted by Shannon at 9:12 AM
2 Comments:
fucking stellar....all of it...
The SG and the S&L story...not a huge fan of the violence of chapter one but the story line of 2 and 3 were so fucking good...
man...incredible! all 10's from me.
crow
I too found the violence...revolting. But, damn, you can write. That is what your focus should be. You are a gifted story teller. Just perhaps, another form of story. Not porn.
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