Wednesday, December 31, 2008

Daddy's Firm Part Five!

Okay, I just posted Daddy's Firm Part Five to SOL.net! I also posted both parts 4 and 5 to this site, but I posted them in text format and they look a little funky in my browser, at least. I'll post the html versions (the ones that don't look funky!) here soon but for right now you might want to copy and paste the text into whatever word processor (i.e. MS Word, OpenOffice Write, Notepad, etc.) to make it more readable. As always, please go over to the SOL.net version if for no other reason than to give it all 10's in their voting system...!

There is a caveat to this, however. Part Five was supposed to be the conclusion to the Daddy's Firm story. Not anymore. In the near future I'll be adding an epilogue to the story which will explain what happens to the loser of the competition. Why am I doing this?

Originally this epilogue was going to be a part of Part Five. I changed my mind for two reasons. First, I had promised to post Part Five before the end of the year. But I'm only about a third of the way through the epilogue scene and there's no way I can get it done before the clock strikes midnight later today. I felt compelled to at least post something in the meantime, you know? 

The second reason for doing this is a little more complicated. Basically, this story has been really hard for me to write. The genre isn't something I'm particularly comfortable with for personal reasons many of you are aware of. I've managed to write parts 1-5 only because I felt a sort of... internal challenge, you know? Like, once I started I told myself, "You have to finish this!". I don't know why but I've felt like I owe it to Alice and Rachel to resolve their stories. 

Unfortunately, though, one of them has to lose the competition. The loser is going to suffer a great deal, and that's where the epilogue comes in. When I post the epilogue you'll know what I mean. Writing this scene is extremely difficult for me. It's what's been holding up Part Five for so long. But by making the epilogue separate from part five, I can at least warn everyone about it in advance. I can say, "If you liked the story and felt that it concluded nicely at the end of Part Five, stop there. Only read the epilogue if you have a strong stomach!". 

So... yeah! The epilogue is not necessary, I don't think, for the reader. As the author of this sordid tale I feel compelled to write it, and eventually to post it, but part five should be a satisfying enough ending for most of you. For those of you who crave to know the fate of the competition's loser and aren't worried about the total lack of erotica such a fate will entail, well... the epilogue will be posted soon. So stay tuned!

-shannon-

P.S. If Part Five isn't showing up yet on SOL.net, or on this site, be patient. SOL.net always says "submissions could take up to 48 hours to appear". Usually it only takes a couple hours, though. As for asstr.org, well, try this link for part five and this link for part four if the regular ones aren't working. Thanks!

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Wednesday, December 10, 2008

Daddy's Firm 5 will be late, plus Wishlist!

First off, Daddy's Firm Part 5 will be late. Sorry! I'm working on it, I really am, but it's taking longer than excpected. I want to make sure it's perfect before I post. I should have it done soon... promise! Once it's finished I swear I'll post it here. Stay tuned!

Second, I've decided to do another Christmas Wish List. It's been 3 years since I did this because I hate asking for stuff from you, the great friends of this site. But lately I've been totally without good "inspiration" and I can't afford to buy it for myself. Times are tough, you know? Argh. But "inspiration" helps me write, you know? Shrugs...

Anyway, like I said, back in 2005 I posted a blog entry where I listed several websites I really wanted a membership to. That blog entry is gone for some reason (I probably deleted it out of embarrassment... like I said, I *hate* asking for stuff!) but you can read my "thank you" post here

Three years have passed... ugh. I feel so old. :( But still, now more than ever, I have the need for good porn. You have no idea how much it helps me with my stories... sigh. 

So I promise you this: if you buy me a membership to any of the following sites, I'll give you one of the following three things:

1.) A one-on-one cyber sex chat, no holds barred. Max 1 hour. I haven't cybered in forever, so that might be a lot of fun...!
2.) The uncompleted (so far) draft of Trailer Trash Teen chapter 12. 
3.) A really unsexy picture of myself. A real one. But I will block my face out in the picture, and it won't be worth it. Trust me, you should ask for 1 or 2 instead.

So, what's on my wishlist this year? Here we go!

2.) http://www.sexandsubmission.com/
3.) http://www.deluxepass.com/
4.) Any site you wish to share!

Contact me if you are willing and able to fulfill any of my wishes on this year's Christmas list... if you can and do, it will be greatly appreciated. Trust me, I use all "inspiration" to help me with my stories, plus I'm sort of lonely right now and desperate for reliable means of getting off... :P

Thanks in advance! 

//update! Please make sure to *ask* me first before going out and buying me a membership somewhere... so far everyone has but I'd feel bad if I ended up getting a membership to a site someone else has already gotten me. I'll update this page if and when I do get some of the memberships, though (so far, not much luck!). Thanks again everyone!

-shannon-

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Wednesday, December 03, 2008

Daddy's Firm Part Four

I just posted "Daddy's Firm" Part Four to Storiesonline.net! Go and read it. Now! :P As always, give it a really high score (10's only, please) and e-mail me with your comments/thoughts, too...

Oh, I also just added Part Three of that story to this site. Part Four will be added here next week, when part five (the conclusion) is added to SOL.net...

-shannon-
~patience is a virtue~

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Wednesday, November 26, 2008

Daddy's Firm Part Three

It's (barely) Wednesday but, as promised, I've posted the next part of "Daddy's Firm" (part three) to StoriesOnline.net! There are two parts left after this one. I'll post part four next Wednesday and part five, the conclusion to this short, the Wednesday after that. Oh, and of course, I'll also make sure to add the updated parts of this story to this site, too. But they always go to SOL.net first.

Why? Well, the main reason is that I want you all to go over there, register for free, then read and vote on my stories. When I say vote, I mean you should give them all 10's. And no, 9's don't count. Neither do two 10's and one 8, if you use the advanced voting option. All 10's help, anything less sucks. Why? 

Because I don't get any money or anything for using that awesome site, or for writing in general, duh. But high scores make me feel good about my work! And most people there hate my kind of stories... I mean, anything on SOL.net that involves "forbidden" themes tend to get a lot of 1.1.1 votes, you know? Or 10.8.1 votes. Or the basic, simple, "1" vote. Argh. It's sort of annoying; I mean, if I start to read a story there and the story's topic doesn't appeal to me, I just stop reading. I only vote on stories whose topics I think I should like, you know? But whatever. Just go over there and vote. If you'd rather not, then just wait because I will post the chapters here eventually, too...!

Btw? I bet I could write a top-scoring story for SOL.net right now if I wanted. It would involve little sex, the characters would all be adults who are really into romance (the men even moreso than women), and everything ends up happy in the end. If I wrote a story like that it'd be a hit on that site!

Uhm, I should say, though? SOL.net is a great site. Lots of great authors, like Rache, are on there. I just hate how many idiots decide to vote for stories they would never like. I mean, even if you hate the topics I write about, would you really give me a 1 out of 10 for "technical" on any of them?!? Yet it happens all the time! Bullshit.

Oh, one quick thing! I got a lot of e-mail about the first two parts of DF and there seemed to be one consistent theme from longtime readers: Why does this story seem to be so thin on plot in comparison to your other stories? Other people put it more bluntly: "Why'd you decide to write a totally unrealistic story that's sort of stereotypical?". Well... My reasons are simple. I just started to write and decided not to worry about the details. I know this isn't my opus, you know? I just wanted to write a quick, fun little story of a very forbidden genre and not worry about explaining a ton of stuff. Believe me, I did a lot of deleting during the course of writing. My instinct was to give Alice a ton of backstory, to explain a lot about where Rachel was from, to go into great detail about what the firm is and all that... but I decided, "No, not this time! This time I'll just write something a little cheesy, a little mind-candy, some popcorn summer movie fun, a genuinely pure stroke story for the really depraved mind...". I've never written something like that before and, well, here's my first attempt. Hopefully some people enjoy it. 

Anyway, yeah. I know this story isn't great but please give it 10's anyway. Try to augment the jerks like this guy, who e-mailed me (anonymously) just last night about parts one and two:

"I gave you a one an dnever felt so good to give it, anybody who gave it better deserts to die as much as u for righting it."
Btw? That's just one line out of a very long and very poorly written e-mail... English is probably his second language, based on some of his word choices, but if not he's just a total moron. I hope he's reading this and will post a non-anonymous comment here to defend his so-called intelligence...!

Oh... and to those of you who obviously have liked this story by giving it great scores on SOL.net and sending me those awesome e-mails? Thanks so much!!! Each of you are worth like, ten or twenty of the jerks out there who just want to hate. :)

Okay, good night, and happy turkey day everyone!

-shannon-
~wired!~

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Wednesday, November 19, 2008

Daddy's Firm

I just posted the first two parts of a new story, "Daddy's Firm", to SOL.net. I'll be adding a new part every Wednesday until the story is complete.

This story is something I've been working on for a while and it's sort of a new "genre" for me. I'll be really interested to hear your comments about it since it's basically a short story broken up into six or seven parts. Plus, the protagonist is a 10-year-old girl, an age I've usually shied away from given my own... history. Ugh.

I'll post the story to this site in the coming days. Until then, as always, you can find it available at storiesonline.net. 

-shannon-
~nervous~

//update! "Daddy's Firm" parts one and two are now available on this site. You should still go over to SOL.net and give it all tens, though... I'm getting my butt kicked over there! Argh.

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