OMG, I wrote that?!
Ugghh!!! I was just rereading chapter six of "A Teen Slut's Saga". I liked it at first but then I got to chapter seven and had to stop.
IT IS SO BAD. I mean, chapter six is so horribly written that I am at a loss to explain why I ever posted it. And chapter seven? Even worse.
I've written worse things but I never posted them! Why did I post this crap? Ughhhhh.
I write all the time, you see. I just don't post CRAP like this. Is it possible I actually thought at one time that chapters six and seven of ATSS were good? Shudder! I so hope not. Could I have been that fucking dumb?
I am utterly embarrassed to realize how bad my writing can be.
IT IS SO BAD. I mean, chapter six is so horribly written that I am at a loss to explain why I ever posted it. And chapter seven? Even worse.
I've written worse things but I never posted them! Why did I post this crap? Ughhhhh.
I write all the time, you see. I just don't post CRAP like this. Is it possible I actually thought at one time that chapters six and seven of ATSS were good? Shudder! I so hope not. Could I have been that fucking dumb?
I am utterly embarrassed to realize how bad my writing can be.
Labels: confessions, stuff about me
posted by Shannon at 3:12 AM
5 Comments:
It's a common thing, to at one time think something is good enough to show, and then later relaixe the mistakes it has. Don't feel bad, really. Best bet, decide if you wanna fiddle with it, to try and make it up to your standards, or if you don't mind leaving it for the time being.
A great story on its whole. I have reread it a few times and always liked it.
I thought the whole TSS was fresher and more vibrant than TTT which I think had a lot to do with the speed and energy you wrote it with.
Writers are their own harshest critics. I think you're judging yourself too toughly. It was good stuff.
I read Chapters 6 and 7, then read 4 and 5 for comparison. It all reads like a pretty good novel to me. I hadn't read it before. I read as much mainstream as porn, and I find you to be a pretty good writer. I just finished Jimmy Buffett's book A Salty Piece of Land. I think this is better written and more real than that, at least in those chapters.
Calvin
The next time, I think that I will masturbate before I read your story. That way I can better critique your writing skills and not just enjoy the fantasy descriptions.
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