Thursday, February 23, 2006

A Teen Slut's Saga is complete!

Hey everyone!

Sorry for not posting more recently. This new year is turning out to be an incredibly busy one! Thankfully I've found the time to complete (that's right complete!) one of my stories, though.

Yep, A Teen Slut's Saga has been finished. I just posted chapters 18, 19, and 20! Chapter 20 is the "epilogue", the conclusion, to this little story. Chapter 19 is rather short but contains a huge plot-development, and chapter 18 is, well...

Sigh. Chapter 18 was hard to write. I think it's a classic case of overwriting, you know? The third or fourth draft was probably perfect, but I kept rewriting it anyway. I hope it ended up interesting, hot, and true-to-character, but I don't know. I could rewrite it again (in other words, I'm not totally satisfied) but it's gotten to the point where I feel I'm totally beating a dead horse.

In any event, Chapter 18 is still very hot. I think you'll enjoy how sexual Amy becomes in it as she tries to defy her dad in her silly, adolescent way.

Chapter 19 will (hopefully!) be surprising. I'm proud of this chapter...

As for 20, I struggled at the end, but I think I wrapped everything up in a somewhat decent way. I leave you to judge!

Sigh. So what's next? Well, I am working on TTT still, of course. I really do want to finish that!!! But if fanmail (or mail in general!) keeps up, I think I'll be forced to continue the exploits of Amy Torch. Remember, her story was always intended as a two-parter. I'm halfway through that second part, too... maybe one day I'll post it! :P

Some of you are probably wondering where I've been, what's been going on, etc. And yes, I suddenly have a LOT to fill you in on. I really do. Things have been crazy-ridiculous in my life lately. But I have to leave all that for another post because I'm just so, so, SO tired right now...!

Sorry! Read TSS and enjoy and please comment or email... or just hang on the forums and behave like dirty little perverted boys. Seriously, you won't offend me... I'm totally used to it.

:P

-shannon-
~so tired!~

12 Comments:

Blogger knotsew_innocent said...

Glad to see you are at least still in one piece, was a little concerned there for a bit!

Off to read the new chapters....


:)

12:27 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

well slut ( He says with nothing but love) Sure is good to see that you are up and around again.I cannot wait to read what you have been up to this New Year.You seem happy and chipper so I am glad about that.I can see the smile in your words makes my heart feel good.

5:58 PM  
Anonymous musashi270 said...

I agree with knotsew; Glad you are OK. Get some rest and be happy.

1:04 AM  
Anonymous kinkymexican said...

please do finish TTT. i love that story! although i usually dont comment I am a fan of yours...

9:00 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I just discovered you and I must say, I am VERY impressed with the quality of TSS. You're an excellent writer. It was as if you were telling the story of a real person. The ending was amazing. I stayed up all night reading every episode in one hit. Thanks for sharing it!

I hope that you can sort out your financial and study problems. The world needs people with creative minds like yours. I'm going to read all the episodes of TTT tonight - wish me luck!

I wish you all the best. Thanks again.

9:02 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I just clicked on my bookmark for your site to check if it was updated, and happily, I discovered it was! I'm a bit late, but still. I read all three of the new TSS chapters, and I loved it. It made me smile and nearly start crying all at once. I can't read to read more, of whatever you write.

5:31 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

what an utter disappointment. Dismally written, not at all up to the standard i have come to expect and enjoy. it seemed more like you were in more of a hurry to finish the story than to close the storyline properly.

I sincerely hope your (eventual) ending to TTT is more thought out and better timed.

3:00 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

i found this surfing the internet INNOCENTLY not looking for porn....which is actually...kinda strange that i actually wasnt...and well i read TSS and i fell in love with your writing and how well everything was laid out...if you ever had any doubts about not accomplishing it to however well it could be...your wrong because i thought it was perfect and i hope that you do continue it because im really yearning for more and i am sure many others are also, good luck with your writing and i really really hope you do continue TSS

Sincerely,
A Fan =D

4:54 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I've never commented on an adult story before, but I felt obliged to do so on this one (TSS).

Your writing is extraordinary! After I was halfway through the story, I actually had the feeling I was reading a book, not an Internet adult story. The writing was that good and the plot that well thought out.

Once I was into it, I had to read practically the whole saga in one shot, pretty addictive. And I'm not saying addictive in a sexual way, as I stopped looking at the story as 'porn' halfway through, and started to really feel for Amy, and actually found myself thinking over her situation for lengths of time in my head, how desperate and negative it was, and how unfair that was on her. And that all because of one fateful night.
Heavy stuff.

I could go on, but I get the feeling I'm getting repetitive, so I'll leave it at this, and I'll check out TTT, hoping it's on the same level as TSS is.

Keep up the good work!

6:46 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Car 54 where are youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

2:13 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Love your writting, but...

You have not finished TSS, too many loose ends.

Amy's mysterious twin.
Amy's Mom.
And... You left that girl in a very bad place.

The "Foster Home" chapter was rushed, not at all your usual descriptive style.

You completely left out any detailed descriptions of Amy's rapes, and abuse. I never grew to hate the foster parents, I never got “excited”, and it was not a sexually stimulating chapter.

So many directions you could have gone.

I have spent many hours thinking of lines text you left out for the sake of "Wrapping-Up" this story.

I wish you’d completely re-write chapters 19 and 20, and do them the justice they deserve.

I Love You, but I hate Chapters 19 and 20.

11:31 PM  
Anonymous eric.conboy@gmail.com said...

First, i would like to say, you wrote it well and please dont take this comment as all bad. infact i would take most of this as good and actually someone only semi related to TTT.

Second after you read my comment, i have left my email. in the hopes you would use it to send me a synopsis or even an update on your site. (I hope you dont mind and sorry)

I just finished reading TTT. or parts of it anyway. it was very hard for me to read and i ended up not reading it all.

i can barely start to say how bad i felt for Tina in her hardships. her confusion. how much shit has had to deal with...and ESPECIALLY how it ends with michelle. i thought that was tragic, unfair and cruel of her. i really felt for tina and i would have loved more then anything to have atleast some closure on that....i mean michelle and tina never talked and in chapter 11 it had been a year since that happened right?

let me tell you why.

i dont know all the details nor would i even consider telling them all here...but my mom had a hard life. she followed in that way of the story. she lost friends, and abused her body with sex, drugs and booze and fell into the wrong crowds.

i wasnt old enough to remember this first hand nor did i exist for all of it, but i was told of parts of it and it bothered me a lot...hurts even.

i konw i got a bit more involved with the story then that was worth and is a real story as i understand but i konw I feel that tina didnt deserve to loose michelle as a friend and to be cast out with nothing as of yet to tell us if it gets better between them or if tina gets happier.

but who can blame me...i can relate to a story like that in a way. you wrote it well but id really like even a synopsis of what happens next. i know id feel better if i knew michelle and tina resolved their problems.

i also noticed you havent posted on this since march!! so i might just have to live with this to be continued and anxiety for tina

hope you come back Shannon!

1:00 AM  

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