the twisted mind

Tuesday, December 31, 2019 at 11:04:41
name: [redacted]
storyname: Pervert's Zoo Club - ch 12, I think
email-subject: Dog shit
comments: Yeah..more of stories with dog shit stuffed into pussies. And then fuck those pussies. Licking, eating dog shit straight from doggie's asshole.
Stories on following themes would be nice!
Family scat party.
Family swap scat bestial party

... To a great degree, I really write scenes based *somewhat* on RL or what I've seen being done, ie. vids, etc. There are some great Kinky Thai vids that show eating or using dog shit. Seems that they are the only ones with that subject matter or one of the few.

Like I've said before, I'm an equal opportunity pervert. I write about all kinds of different fetishes and themes. Some like some of them, others like different ones. Scat seems to be of interest to a limited portion of readers. But I'm glad you liked the story and that particular part. I'll have to work your ideas into some of the coming ZM chapters.

I did write a chapter about them making a scat video if you're interested. As scat has a limited audience, and some are quite vocal about their dislike of it, I hadn't yet published it. It's not complete as I probably need to embellish it some more and go over it again, so if you have any ideas, just let me know.

Monday, December 30, 2019 at 07:22:06
name: [redacted]
storyname: Zoo mom
comments: comments: Love the zoo mom story and hope you keep posting chapters here. Thanks!

Tuesday, December 17, 2019 at 12:45:39
name: [redacted]
storyname: Teen slut Karen
comments: I used to read your zoo stories all the time and thoroughly enjoyed them. For some unknown reason I hadn't been back to your site for some time. I happened to take a look at it today and read the first of the teen slut Karen stories. I tried my best to simply read it while I stroked my cock and licked up all the precum that I got. I wanted to get through the entire story without cumming but again as usually happens halfway through one of your stories I end up squirting all over myself. I had to finish the story while leisurely taking my finger and wiping the cum off my belly and chest and licking it up. Thanks for providing an outlet for those filthy pervs like myself. Keep us all cumming !

Thank you for your feedback. I really DO appreciate it. And I'm VERY happy that you could "enjoy" your time with Teen Slut Karen. I write the stories just for that purpose.

I'd been reading stories on asstr before they were on the website - back when it was just a newsgroup. (Yeah, I'm an old techno fart LOL) I started writing my own stories since I couldn't find any that I really liked on the subjects that I liked. Then I started posting them online so others might like reading them. Some apparently have. ROFLMAO

TSK was written quite some time ago, just after the Zoo Mom series was beginning. You can see that it is an offshoot from ZM after the family goes to the pet shop and gets their new Rotty, Storm.

Recently, I had a bit of inspiration and ended up writing another TSK as an offshoot of the ZM storyline. Karen is asked to babysit for a young girl and ends up getting the mom and dad going... Well, can't give away too much.

I post any of my new material on our White Productions site. The TSK chapters are posted there, except for the new ones of her babysitting adventure. They will be posted there first. If you were to join the site, I'd be happy to let you preview those new chapters for me and give me any ideas for finishing them. Plus, as I said, the rest of the TSK chapters are posted there too. So lots of good reading for you.

Your story of getting off from my getting off story sounds like something one of our members recently wrote in our messaging/chat app on our site. I'll bet you'd get along quite well with some of the other like minded "filthy pervs" that are members.
...
I'll try to keep writing stories like TSK. Some of my new ZM chapters that have never been published might be quite to your "liking" too. LOL Let me know what you think of the ZM series when you get a chance to get through them.

Sunday, December 15, 2019 at 20:09:45
name: [redacted]
storyname: Teen Slut Karen
email-subject: Added Chaper
comments: Hi Ole
Thank for adding another chapter to the Teen Slut Karen story. Funny thing. I read the first chapter last night again and here you add another today. Have a good week, [redacted]

See what happens when readers mash on the feedback button and let me know they're reading or are interested in my stories?

Saturday, December 14, 2019 at 02:38:37
name: [redacted]
storyname: Zoo Mum
comments: Seit 9 Monaten tut sich gar nichts, ich bin enttaüscht!

Hallo,
Vielen Dank für Ihre Kommentare. Ich freue mich über jedes Feedback meiner Leser.

Vielleicht haben Sie nicht mit meiner Website Schritt gehalten, aber ich habe Kapitel 21B im Mai, Kapitel 21C im August und Kapitel 22A im Oktober veröffentlicht. All das war in den letzten neun Monaten.

Wenn ich eine neue Geschichte poste und keine Kommentare oder Rückmeldungen bekomme, wie kann ich dann feststellen, ob jemand die Geschichten liest oder ob es jemanden interessiert? Ich versuche von Zeit zu Zeit zu aktualisieren, aber wenn es kein Interesse gibt, warum sollte ich fortfahren?

Der ASSTR.ORG-Server hatte in den letzten Jahren viele Probleme, aber ich habe versucht, meine Website-Seiten relativ aktuell zu halten. Wenn Sie mehr von meinen Geschichten lesen möchten, können Sie sich gerne unserer Mitgliederseite anschließen, auf der ich zuerst alle meine Geschichten zusammen mit vielen anderen Autoren poste. White Productions

Ich werde weiterhin versuchen, gelegentlich zu aktualisieren und zu posten, aber ohne Feedback gebe ich keinen großen Anreiz dazu.

Friday, December 13, 2019 at 05:10:43
name: Person who reads stories
storyname: ZooMom 15 & 20B
email-subject: Good writing
comments: I saw your post lamenting that nobody enjoys your stories and just wanted to let you know that's certainly not true. People that enjoy these things tend to be a bit shy about communication for obvious reasons.
I especially enjoy the stories where Sissy shows her exhibitionist streak. 15 with the electronics store and 20B with the mall kiosk were especially enjoyable. Can't wait to read more!
-A person

Monday, December 9, 2019 at 09:07:49 name: [redacted]
storyname: Ch22B Zoo Mom
email-subject: praise
comments: Hello! I found your blog through Alt.Sex.Stories and felt compelled to respond to your posting. I was intrigued by your comments about your recent Zoo Mom posting and find myself deeply immersed in the chapter, eager to start at the beginning.
And, it was actually the beginning of another series of yours that led me to here, and I am so glad. I had read chapter 2 of Summertime at Grampa Dick's and was trying to find chapter one...
I have written, sporadically, erotica for several years. Sometimes self inspired, sometimes via requests, and I became acquainted with Alternate Sex Stories when I was seeking an outlet for some of my writings. I use to frequent the site, but the quality has been missing and so I really don't visit it much anymore. That is until today!
I am impressed and encouraged by both your writings, and your forthright and right on statements within your disclosures. It's not rocket science, it's not world peace or God forbid, politics, it's erotica (and yes, I do make a distinction between porn and erotica), and if it floats your boat, Great! And if it doesn't, leave, move along please...you knew what it was before you clicked it on, so no holier than thou proclamations, or self aggrandizement, just move on, Thank you.
It is refreshing to read your stories, the quality, the flow, the dynamics, and absolutely yes, the erotic sex...and incredible stuff. Would love to write more, and I hope to, but I want to get back to enjoying your work, and having an entertaining morning.
Take care, and keep up (no pun intended), the good work.
Respectfully,

I'm glad you like my Zoo Mom story. I've got quite a bit more written on it, and some planned but not quite written or completed. I do post any of my new stuff, including Zoo Mom and others, on our membership site at White Productions

There's a LOT there. We've been adding new stories at the rate of about 4 to 8 per month, including some of my stories and some from other authors. Plus the whole Little Model Annie story universe which is huge. You can see most of what's posted on the site by going to the site/story outline page.

My stories that have been posted in the members area and what will be posted in the future are listed on my story page.

I actually had been reading a lot of stories on ASSTR and some other adult erotica sites for a number of years and finally decided to write my own since I wasn't finding what I liked as far as themes and quality of writing. I first posted the Summertime series, but then ran out of steam on it and started posting my Zoo Mom series. Plus my SF fantasy, Solitude Interrupted. And others. Other erotica sites limit themes such as underage, incest, bestiality and more. ASSTR has never limited or censored content, but lack of interest and maintenance of the server/site has caused it to be limited the last several years.

I am able to FTP my stories and pages up to it and as long as it works, I'll continue to add some of my series from time to time after they've been published on our member's site. I have always encouraged other writers to write and post their stories. Now that ASSTR isn't functioning well and doesn't create new writer's accounts, that is harder. We have no such content limitations on our White Productions story site.

... I REALLY DO appreciate your taking the time and making the effort to send me your thoughts. It does help to encourage more writing.

Monday, December 9, 2019 at 01:33:41
name: V
storyname: Zoo mom
email-subject: Fantastic stuff
comments: Just wanted to drop a line as say how much I enjoy the Zoo Mom stories. I don't know how popular Asstr is anymore but I can personally say I would love to read more when uploaded.
Great work!
V

I'm very happy you've enjoyed my Zoo Mom series. ASSTR seems to have been working lately, although not completely. I'm sure there are still a lot of people who are reading the stories posted on it. But it's sorta discouraging not getting any feedback or knowing if anybody out there cares.

We used to receive weekly "hit" reports so that we had some idea of how many people were reading the stories. With the server problems and stuff, those are no longer available, so the only way we authors who ARE posting stories will know if anyone is reading them or want more is by reader feedback. Even the ASSTR feedback email program doesn't work, so that's why I have installed and linked to one that is on an independent server. ;^)

Again, thank you for your comments.

Monday, December 9, 2019 at 00:50:02
comments: Have read most of your stuff. Please post next chapter Zoo Mom.

Monday, December 9, 2019 at 00:47:49
comments: Yes, don't give up posting, please. This is good work.

Monday, December 2, 2019 at 00:38:55
name: [redacted]
storyname: Grandpa & Karen
email-subject: Next chapter-quick
comments: I just finished reading chapter 8a and now I'm hanging with my dick out and hard. What happens next? Does Faye get boinked? Do Karen and Ralph get it on with Faye? I want to read more about Claire's tortures!!
Pleeeeeeze!

Thanks for your comments. I'm glad you like my stories like Summertime. I've had fun writing them.

Summertime was one of the first stories that I wrote and posted online. I have had a lot of good comments on it, but I had only written a few chapters of it and posted them too quickly and soon had nothing more left when the dreaded writers block hit me. I did write a few more that I had worked on and finally got ch 8 written, which was then split into two parts. Some time later, I got a bit of inspiration and ended up starting chapter 9 with Claire calling Gramps and asking for a no holds/holes barred torture session. I got about half way through it and it just petered out. I really would like to get more of it done and complete that chapter.

We have posted chapter 8B on our White Productions member site, along with my other stories such as Zoo Mom, Teen Slut Karen, two Solitude chapters and a few others. Plus all of the Little Model Annie series, and a lot more, including work from three other authors.

I did get a bit of inspiration going and started writing a whole new series, The Porn Families, which I've got one set done, and several others partially written. My graphics expert friend, Onix, added eight 3DX galleries to one, which are basically graphic stories in themselves, but based on the story I had written.

You can have access to all of this that I post on our site by signing up as a member... Look at my Ole Stories page or the Site Outline page to see just how much content is posted there.

I'll make you a deal. If you sign up, I'll give you what I've got written for Chap 9 of Summetime as a preview, and you can give me your ideas on what should be done with the lovely Claire to conclude the chapter and her torture session. Sound good? LOL I might even give you a preview of the first Porn Families story.

Friday, November 29, 2019 at 14:11:05
name: [redacted]
storyname: Zoo Mom
email-subject: More Please...but...
comments: I don't like the pissing or shitting stuff, but everything is great fantasy and good jack-off material to. Don't your places have Black people...black women, black men (and not just those with obsceenly big dicks!!)??
But overall I enjoy the stories...and I'm one of those people waiting for more...

Thanks for your comments. I really DO appreciate any reader feedback or response.

I can only say that I'm pretty much an equal opportunity pervert. I write about many different fetishes and taboos. Some may like some, others not. You're free to skip over any parts you don't like. I won't make you read them.

Basically, I write what I know and what is based on RL (real life). The black population makes up approx. 10+ percent of the total, so I'm basically writing about the 90%. Again, it's what I know. Other authors are probably much more adept than I at writing black (or non-white European origin) characters and stories. I'll let them do it.

I'm just not socially or politically correct in that I've just gotta cater to and write for every social group extant. I started writing my stories because after years of reading on asstr, I wasn't finding stories that I liked that well. So I started writing and then posting online to share with others who might enjoy reading them. Apparently there are a few.

Again, I write what I know from RL and write what I like. I'll leave it up to others to do the same.

Monday, November 25, 2019 at 07:08:26
name: [redacted]
storyname: zoo mom
email-subject: Like the new chapter 28
comments: Hi Again.
I like the new chapter of Zoo Mom with Lynn, but I hope you do some more with her tits and don't just run the story around the best part. But hay keep on making this story like your work more on the tit torture and more on the pain slut hay.

Glad you liked the latest chapter posted. I have a number of chapters written in the story that will be posted on the site in the future. I think you'll like the Kari Birthday chapter, but I'm not sure when I'll get to it. It's been written for a while and has all the things you like. I just need to go back and expand on some stuff and massage what's there.

Wednesday, November 20, 2019 at 22:00:15
name: [redacted]
storyname: zoomom ch 22
email-subject: more
comments: I have been really busy lately with being sick, but enjoyed reading about mom's new role as sex slave, though in a way she always has been. I love the work and can't wait to see more of these perverts, hoping and being presently surprised with everything, thank you.

Sunday, November 17, 2019 at 17:51:04
name: [redacted]
storyname: Zoo Mom
email-subject: More Chapters
comments: I love the Zoo Mom story. Please ad more.

Saturday, November 16, 2019 at 08:19:36
name: [redacted]
storyname: zoo mom
email-subject: updates
comments: keep up the great work

November 16, 2019 at 06:40:10
storyname: All
email-subject: 22B comments: I'm on board with getting 22B out there. I can never tell when you are actually updating the site, or just reposting most of it. (=
Thanks for what you've already posted. I'll be reading even if I'm not posting replies.

Glad you like the stories. I will be posting the next chapter of Zoo Mom soon.

I make no apologies about knowing how asstr.org works (or sometimes doesn't) and taking advantage of it. I've gotten similar but more stridently vehement condemnations and I've tried to 'splain it on my info pages. And whenever I DO add to or update the site stories, I usually try to add that information to the What's New page and possibly to the Story Notes page. So you can alway just look there for what the latest story post has been.

Authors on asstr.org are only rewarded by readers letting them know what they think of their stories. As far as I'm concerned, that includes the good and bad. And if you include your email address on the form, I DO respond to all who take the time and make the effort to send me any comments. So if you are reading the stories, take the 20 or 30 seconds it takes to click the feecback link (and not just mine, but other authors who provide one) and let them know. Not on every chapter of a long series story but at least on the different stories. Having to beg to get even a couple responses out of thousands who read them should be unnecessary.

Again, thanks for your comments and next time, include an email address so I can respond!

Sunday, November 10, 2019 at 14:30:13
name: J
storyname: Grandpa dicks
email-subject: continue
comments: I hope you will continue this series. I found it to be erotic and enticing.

Thanks for your vote of confidence. You do know that the latest chapter of Summertime, ch 8B is posted on the members area under my Ole Stories page. LOL

Yeah, I've gotten a lot of good comments on that story since it was first posted. Problem was that I posted all the chapters that I had written up to that point (ch 6 I believe) too quickly on asstr and then the dreaded writers block hit. I had more of the Zoo Mom series written and in progress, so I started posting them. I've just never really gotten back to the Summertime series after I had gotten Ch 8B finished. I did at one point start ch 9, and got about 1/2 finished before it just petered out and that's the way it has remained.

By that time I was working with Data on the huge LMA storyline and Summertime just sorta fell by the wayside. I don't know if I'm ever going to really get the inspiration back to do more with it. If I do, I will certainly enjoy doing it and posting the results. I liked writing it. Actually, it was a revision of a previous story I had written but never posted or finished.

Friday, October 25, 2019 at 21:10:32
name: [redacted]
storyname: Ellen's tech
email-subject: Awesome please update
comments: I am a 32 yr married woman currently in USA through my IT company. I had held interests and BDSM and D/s, however have mostly lived them online and stories like yours make them come alive and I am really thankful for that.
May i interest you to frame a story on myself.
What do you think Sir?
I can be reached at [redacted]

Thank you for your nice comments. I'm glad you liked my "Ellen" story. I've gotten some nice comments on it.

I originally wrote Ellen for a lady author on another erotic literature site, after she made a completely innocent comment. After I had written some of it and shared it with her, she liked it and actually helped with suggestions and ideas for it. I did get a 2nd chapter started with some of her suggestions but have never finished it. I probably should resurrect it someday and see if I can get the rest finished.

I'm sorry, but as enticing as it is, I really don't have the time to write stories about others or with their ideas. I have so many stories unfinished that they could keep me quite busy. But thank you for asking and your interest in my stories. If you're interested in BDSM, look at my Zoo Mom series. Actually, my Summertime at Grandpa Dicks series has some of that too.

Again thanks for your feedback. I DO appreciate it.

Wednesday, October 23, 2019 at 05:49:49
name: [redacted]
storyname: Summertime at Grandpa Dick's
comments: Really love this story line and would like to see many new chapters about Karen's adventures. In particular involving peehole and catheter play. I would also like to read about enemas and needles through her labia.
Suggestion for chapter: Karen gets ring piercings through her nipples, four rings through her labia and a clit ring.
Suggestion for chapter: Karen gets pimped out to a tech billionaire and his young throphy slut for a long weekend on their ranch. Heavy rubber bondage, fisting, medical & electro play. Karen sucks and gets fucked by a dog, sucks off a horse and drinks its piss.
Mild critique: some chapters nave a bit too much dialogue and not enough depravity

Thank you for your comments. I really enjoyed writing Summertime but after posting the first seven chapters on asstr.org rather quickly, the damnable writers block struck and I really didn't have any more to post. I did finally write the 2 part chap 8 and I have 1/2 of chap 9 written and roughed out, but I don't know if I'll get back to that storyline or not. I've really gotten a lot of good feedback on it though.

BTW, all of the Summertime series (up to 8B) is posted on our members area at White Productions, along with lots more, including my Zoo Mom series, and the Little Model Annie series that was written with my co-author on it, Data001, along with his 33 part Head Teacher, Young Sex Slave story. Plus Amy macBitch's hugely perverted "Expanding the Family" story and Neel Down's 30 chapter "Nude Like Me" series and his new "Across The Street" series that's just started. We have over 170 chapters of the UK series, The Gang, which are being posted weekly.

As for your suggestions, I like them. I'll make a note and if I get any spurts of inspiration and start writing on that series again, I'll see if I can include some of them. BTW, do YOU know how difficult it is to collect horse piss? I.e., knowing *when* they're going to pee? But it's a fun idea.

Regarding too much dialog, I write erotic STORIES, not stroke stories, although some might not understand the difference. Character and storyline development is important to me. You have my permission to skip any boring stuff you don't like and get to the good stuff. And I have often said that my characters live, rent free, in my mind and all I do is transcribe what they do and say. Sometimes I can't help it if they talk a lot.

Again, thanks for your comment. I REALLY DO appreciate any feedback and comments on my stories. Glad you enjoyed it. Hope you enjoy the rest of it.