[Some of my responses have been slightly edited or revised. Names redacted for privacy.]
name: A[redacted H[redacted]
storyname: Woodenhorse 3 chap 2
email-subject: coupling
comments: Eagerly awaiting new chapters. I understand that in South America, it is comonplace for girls to lose their virginity to an animal before a guy. Further, I understand that pagents and derbys are held with girls and women coupled to their horses, donkeys, llamas, etc. How the harnesses are made and how they are tied in. Especially when coupling with boars or animals like them. Keep up the great work
Hi again A,
I know you've indicated your interest in some of the subject matter in Goldfish's Woodenhorse series. I like the subject too, but have no knowledge of it at all. I'll check with Goldfish and see if he has any more written with that theme.
I know there's a lot of vids done in Brazil with horses. Would be interesting to find out just why that particular theme is popular there.
Sort of like scat vids are done in Germany.
Remember, if an email address is provided, I can respond directly if I get more information or stories from Goldfish.
name:
storyname:
email-subject:
comments: Re: Zoo Mom 22B --
Thank you so much for posting this. The wait between new chapters always seems too long, and I see you're well ahead on future chapters. Thanks for continuing to release the "older" chapters on asstr where the rest of us can read them, even if belatedly.
I haven't written before, but I've read every chapter, and it is sick, twisted, and perverted in a fun, fictional way.
Here's hoping to see more chapters, sooner rather than later.
Be well.
Hi there. If there was an email, I could have responded directly. But thanks so much anyway!
I've very happy you like the new chapter. Isn't there something about "absence makes the heart grow..." uh, more pissed off? [Being old, I can't quite remember how that one goes.]
Asstr.org has been having some problems the last few years. I know that a lot of stories have disappeared and even access to the site has been spotty. The author's control panel hasn't worked in several years, so those who do not know how FTP [File Transfer Protocol] works can't update or add to their sites. I'm an old tech geek (emphasis on the old), so I have been using the FTP service to maintain my site's pages. I didn't add any new stories for quite a while, as access was very iffy and sometimes I would get a 'media full' error, which means that the allotted server space was filled up. So it's not because I haven't wanted to add more stories, it's been rather a krapshoot on whether I could or not. I still hold my breath when I try to access the server to upload anything.
Yeah, I've been told I have a sick, twisted, perverted mind. So what's new? It's just that I have spent a long time working on getting it this way and I ain't about to change now. Besides, there are some people (like you?) who seem to like the output from my cesspool. So I guess those who don't like it will just have to put up with it.
Every comment and feedback gives me the incentive to add more of my stories here. I've decided that on the birthday of a great writer in April, I'll post another one for those of you who are patiently (or impatiently?) waiting for more of my smut. See the comments below for links to our site where I do publish my new stuff, plus a LOT of other stories.
In the meantime, some of the comments have inspired me to add more to some of the chapters that aren't finished and start some others. So I'll try to continue fulfilling your needs for dirty stories. M'kay?
name: Kindofsortof
storyname: Zoomom
email-subject: Compliments
comments: I love your stories. You have a truly unique mind. I just wish you'd post them more often like you used to.
Kindof included no email address to reply to, but thanks for the comment.
Glad you like the stories. That's what I write them for.
Believe me, there are some who might consider my mind unique but probably not quite in the same way that you intended. But I've sorta grown attached to it and figured I'd keep it for a little while longer. Altho' I find bits and pieces of it falling off once in a while. More often than I'd like.
As I've mentioned before, I still write and my stories are posted on my my Ole Stories page on our White Productions member site. Some of them, like my Zoo Mom series, will be posted here if asstr continues working and after they've been posted for our members for a while. Over 40 chapters (easily) of Zoo Mom and growing, have been outlined, planned, partially written or completed. So there's a LOT more coming out. There are also exclusive series that won't be posted here, that I will provide exclusively for our members.
As always, thank you very much for taking the time and making the effort to give me your thoughts. It will just encourage me to post another chapter or story here, knowing there's some interest out there.
name: J
storyname: Summertime At Grandpa Dicks
email-subject: Keep up the good work
comments:
Hi,
I love the content of this story. Just the right amount of nastiness, plus some excellent prose. I love the subject matter, all of it!
Thanks,
J
Hey J,
I dunno, I'm not sure anyone has ever accused my filth of being "prose", but I guess in the teknikul sense of the word... But 'nastiness'? Oh yeah, I've been accused of that and much more.
Very happy you're enjoying the story. I did enjoy writing it so many years ago, when I first started posting online on asstr and another story site. For some reason, I ran into a block writing it and havren't really done anything more with it. I'm hoping to get something spewing out of my cesspool of a mind and add more to it. Just don't know when that may happen. I only wish I had the conscioius control over what vomits out of the dark, dank recesses of my deviant mind.
A little known fact: Summertime was an adaptation of one of my first erotic stories that I wrote, that has never been and probably will never be published. I'm glad Summertime has received so many great, positive comments.
Thanks for letting me know there's someone out there reading my spew and enjoying the subject matter. I'll try to keep banging stuff out and posting some of it here occasionally. Chapter 8B of Summertime is posted on my Ole Stories page at our White Productions member site.
name: grandad4u
storyname:The Trip Ch2
email-subject:The Trip Ch2
comments:
I read this chapter, probably because it was about Thailand where I have spent time years ago. I don't care for slavery, bondage, pain, etc. but thought I'd read it anyway. I enjoyed it enough to read it all. The slave's stories about their lives interested me very much. The torture, not so much. I do enjoy Tit tying like that Vicky experienced, and water sports, and loved that vickey enjoyed taking on all of those men. Women enjoying wild sex is exciting to watch, read about or participate in. It was actually a good story, and I enjoyed it. The ending was a good one. I understand you did not write it. I'm enjoying "Zoo Mom". Shit, blood and needles are not a turn-on, but the youngsters and animals are. Love their lifestyle. I'm 80_ and need the stimulation.
Hi there again. Glad you liked CB Ed's story. He's an old guy like us and sent me his stories. I liked them so decided to post them for others to enjoy. Glad you did too!
As I have mentioned before, I'm an equal opportunity pervert. I write about all kinds of interesting (to me) hot, sexy themes and if you don't like one, then just keep reading as there will be another one around very shortly. And I have no problem with anyone skipping over the parts they don't like and getting off on the ones they do. Remember, it's all fiction and fantasy. But I do base a lot of my ideas on what I've seen or heard of happening in RL (real life).
For instance, the mice and snake play is based on old Ark After Dark videos. The tit torture scenes reflect recent Torture Galaxy videos. I just take the actions and ideas and create interesting fictional scenes that apparently more than I enjoy. Once I started posting my stories, I started to get feedback and comments sharing and describing acts and behaviors that would put some of my hottest scenes to shame. So, naturally, I started incorporating them into new stories. I love getting feedback from readers (especially female) that enjoy my fictional themes and have personal experiences similar to or more extreme than what I've written. There are so many really wickedly perverse things going on that I couldn't keep up with them in years of pounding them out on the keyboard. But I'll try.
For those who enjoy a story of an innocent youngster finding out about sex and then going down the road to perversion, our huge continuing Little Model Annie story on our White Productions member site should be right up your alley. And I've mentioned the new series I've started, Porn Families, which has all the perversions and is focused on the young ones in the group.
Thanks for letting me know you like the stories I've posted for select other authors. I'm happy you found them and enjoy them. Us old geezers need all the help we can get since our memories are going and we can't remember all those lovely things we used to do wonderful things with.
name: Grandad4u
storyname: Summetime at Grandpa Dicks
email-subject: Continuing story
comments: Chapter 8A: Karen spends the day with her mom (Is there more?)
Just found this place. Read ch 1 years ago. Reread it and enjoyed it again. I jumped to ch 8A just to watch Karen bring her mom along. Enjoying the story; jumping back to ch 2. Can't find good characters like these in most places. Have always loved the taboo characters & stories. 30 yrs ago they were easy to find. Not so much now. I've enjoyed your writing and the subjects. At 80+, they're needed. Don't have a lot of "private" time to enjoy; but do when I can. Lost most good stuff I used to have with computer crashes and email being taken away. The "old days" on computers had a lot of plusses. Keep writing the good stuff.
Thanks Grandpa!
Yeah, I just recently realized that I first started posting Summertime on asstr.org as my first story here - ten years ago! Jeez, doesn't time fly when you're having pervy fun?
Back on the ol' wild west internet when you pretty much had to be a computer geek to even get what's considered 'online' now, when the newsgroups and BBS's were the only places you coudl find good written porn, I was connected before there was a public available 'web'. The alt.sex.stories.text group that the asstr.org website originated from was a great place to read. Damn, we be oldies, huh?
I've mentioned this before, but after years of reading the news groups and then the asstr.org website, I started writing my own stories since I couldn't find much that I really liked to read. I'll actually read most any porn stories no matter what the theme, but I just wasn't finding what *I* liked. So I started writing and posting. Unfortunately, I quickly posted most everything I had on Summertime and then had nothing more left. So I started posting the Zoo Mom series that I'd started writing. I've never really expanded on the Summertime series, beyond the half of chapter 9 that I'd started but petered out on. I've gotten a LOT of great comments on the Summertime series though. Maybe the clouds will break through the writers block and I'll get the motivation to add more to it. If I do, it will first be posted on our our White Productions member site, where most all of my stuff is and will be posted. I have a new, huge series titled Porn Families which include some of Onix's great 3DX graphics and will be posted exclusively for our members on that site.
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I hope you enjoy some of my other works, like Zoo Mom, Solitude and Ellen's Toy Boy. I'll try to keep posting some of my stuff here also. Enjoy. Thanks again for your comments.
name: not entered
storyname: Zoo Mom chapter 22B
email-subject: not entered
comments: Thanks for 22B!
I know Julius didn't enjoy the Ides, but I did thanks to the story update.
Not as funny as your notes, but I like: Animaniacs: Good Idea: Trick or treating on Halloween. Bad Idea: Trick or treating on St. Patrick's Day.
Wash your hands and be safe. Us old farts are the ones who have to watch out for the coronavirus (Gen Z Kids Have Nicknamed Coronavirus "Boomer Remover".
No name or email left on this one. But thanks!
Yeah, apparently some didn't agree with ol' Julie's political philosophy. Seems we have a LOT of those types today. They'd rather kill and destroy than look at things dispassionately and agree to disagree. They're still using knives, but also more modern implements of destruction.
Not familiar with Animaniacs. Glad you like my notes. I thought about starting a blog, but it's too much work. LOL And if there's one thing that I'm allergic to, it's work. In any form. So I guess I'll have to continue to post my semi-hillarious notes for all three of you to enjoy.
I'm washing my hands after I... uh, well, you know. Does drinking hand sanitizer help? You know, alcohol (hic)? Soaking it from the inside out. Bacardi 151 and coke. That should take care of it, right? And don't believe that it's that easy to get rid of me, despite popular opinion and desires. Like I've said before, "I don't get sick, I make people sick."
Thanks for reading the new chapter. Glad you liked it. I'll see about getting something more posted soon. I'm looking for a holiday in April to celebrate. The only one I can see that's good would be National Farm Animals Day. Does that work for you all? [Although Cake and Cunnilingus Day has a certain je ne sais quoi about it.]
name: m[redacted]
storyname:
email-subject: yummm
comments: Hi Daddy!!! I love nasty fuckstories! Yes I'm female and a total perv. Younger the better. Love manipulation, molestation, rough physical and psychological abuse. I'm the rare girl-vert. Any suggestions on hard hard core young stories?? I have 3 stories I've written myself on nepi and leslita. I've read everything on asstr and follow it religiously. Need more!!!! XOXO
Hi M,
So Who's yer daddy?
Glad you like my stories. And interesting to know that someone actually knows what 'nepi' is.
We'd like to have more nasty lady readers and helpers. It helps us write better from the female POV of our characters. If you'd be interested in helping us with your POV and suggestions on story ideas... [Free Trial Membership info added here]. You'll probably enjoy the Little Model Annie story as well as my Zoo Mom and others there. It's all good fantasy, adult erotic fiction.
If you like what you see and want to help us, I can give you more information on how we can work that out.
Let me know what you think. If you've been on asstr for a while, then you'll love what we have written.
name: old[redacted]
storyname: summertime
comments: please post the 8b and 9 such a great sd Tory line, bern waiting a long time for the complete story :
Hi Old,
Thanks for your request. There has really been little interest expressed in posting chapter 8B and 9 of Summertime. Actually, I've only got 1/2 finished of chapter 9, and since there's been little interest shown, I just have never gotten it finished.
Chapter 8B has been posted on our White Productions member site though. When or if I get chapter 9 done, I'll first post it there.
Thanks for your interest and nice comments about it. I really enjoyed writing it oh so many years ago. Seems like a long time ago, but it's only been about 10 years. ROFL
name: G[redacted]
storyname: Tartain and wooden horse
email-subject: Is more stoies
comments: I was Wonder my s there are mores stories to either. Listed here and we're can I find his stories he writes
Hi G,
Remember, if you include an email address, I can respond to your comments directly and I usually quickly do.
As I noted to another comment below, I've posted some of Goldfish's stories here on my asstr pages for others' reading pleasure. Because of the server problems and flaky access to asstr in the past, I had not continued to post his stories, since I didn't know if I would have access. I will contact him and see if he has more of his series. I think he had had some of his stories posted on another asstr collections site, but I'm not sure where it was or if it is still accessible and updated.
I DO really appreciate your inquiry and will try to see if I can get more of his stuff to post here. I hope you enjoyed the second chapter of his Woodenhorse 3 series that I posted on Valentine's Day last month.
name: A[redacted]
storyname: Zoo mom
email-subject: Purchase?
comments: Is the whole thing available for purchase, somewhere?
I've been reading it from the beginning for the past couple months, and now it's not available to continue:( Let me know, very much enjoyed it up until I ran out of reading material;)
Hi A,
As noted elsewhere on my asstr site, I post all of my new material on our member's area on my stories page at White Productions story site. So no, it IS continuing and available. I just post first for our members, then I will add it to my asstr site here after it's been there for a while.
Not only are the latest chapters of my Zoo Mom series, up to # 28B posted there (I've got over 40 chapters written, partially written or planned so far), plus my other series, such as Teen Slut Karen, Solitude Interrupted/Revisited, Ellen's Toy Boy and the Summertime series, but also the huge Little Model Annie story written with Data001, Amy macBitch's growing Expanding the Family, and Neel Down's Nude Like Me and Across The Street One House Down. Plus we post a weekly episode of The Gang by UK author Paul Turner. That's a LOT of reading material. And yes, it requires a paid subscription for a number of reasons. And there's my whole new recently written extreme series titled "Porn Families", which will be posted exclusively there in the future. Sorta too extreme for posting on these pages.
I have offered a Free Limited Trial membership to anyone who is interested in looking around and seeing what is there. You're welcome to try it out...
Almost all of my Zoo Mom, Teen Slut Karen and Summertime series are also made available there as .txt, .pdf, .mobi and .epub formats for downloading and reading offline, as are the Little Model Annie series. So there's a LOT there and it is growing. Plus a public and private member chat utility.
I appreciate your interest in the series. Thanks for your inquiry.
name: T[redacted] W[redacted]
storyname: Zoo Mom
email-subject: Everything
comments: Been following Zoo Mom for a few years now and would like to continue. Thank you for a job well done.
Hi T,
Yeh, it's hard to believe that it's been about ten years since I first started posting my stories on asstr.org and other places. Whew! Makes me feel old! Well, I am old. I started reading the original asstr when it was just a newsgroup and you had to have a special 'newsreader' to even access it. Before the web. Yeah, I am old.
As you probably know and I've noted everywhere, I post all of my new stories on my stories page at White Productions. So far, chapter 29 of Zoo Mom will be posted soon, and I've got over 40 chapters written, partially written, or roughed out. So if you want to read all of my newest stuff, join us there.
I appreciate your nice comments and glad that you've enjoyed the writing for so long. I've enjoyed writing and posting to share with others. And feedback. is the only way I know there's someone out there on the other end. As long as there is, I'll try to keep going. Thanks for making the effort to let me know.
storyname: Zoo Mom
email-subject: It's great
comments: Thank you for writing so engaging long stories!
I love zoo mum, I hope you continue to add to it!
Hi,Another comment with no email to respond to, but thanks for your comment. Glad you like my story series. It seems that I really can't write a single standalone short story. Well, anything 'short'. I'm a wordy sunuvabitch.
As I've stated before, my characters seem to live in my head and I just transcribe their goings on and conversations (and thoughts). Regarding writing a single standalone story, it is easier for me to not have to constantly develop a new storyline and characters from scratch each time. With a series, the reader already "knows" the characters, mostly, and has some background on them and their story. So I don't have to constantly reinvent the wheel, so to speak, with each new story. A new chapter in a series builds on what has gone on before, since the reader already "knows" the characters and has probably grown familiar with them. But mostly, I just can't write anything short, as even these replies illustrate.
Back before asstr.org had major server problems and moved to a new server, authors were sent weekly reports of the number of views each particular story had gotten the previous week. Thus, we could tell if anyone was reading our stuff. We could see the number of hits each week on each part of a series and know whether it was being followed... and by how many. Now, without those reports, the only way we'll know anyone is reading our stories and want more is if they use the feedback. form. I will continue to add more stories if there is any indication that there are readers who want more. As the old teevee saying goes, "Keep those cards and letters coming in, folks".
storyname: Zoo Mom
email-subject: are you going to upload something?
comments: I saw you upload more content from other stories, but I was wondering, will you upload anything else from the "Zoo Mom" series on this site?
I like the story "Teen Slut Karen" keep it up!
And greetings from Argentina (I just wanted to let you know that you have a viewer here hahaha)
Hi F[redacted],Thanks for your feedback and comment. Glad you like my filth. And from way down in Argentina, even. Wow.
As I've noted, I have posted new chapters of my Zoo Mom series throughout the year. I will continue to do so, but everything is first posted on my stories page at White Productions, then I may post some of them on asstr.org after they've been there for a while. It really wouldn't be too fair to our paid members to post everything here on asstr for free.
As I mentioned to a previous commenter, I've posted Zoo Mom chapters in May, August and October of '19 in addition to the 2nd chapter of Teen Slut Karen. Sure, I'll post more of them this year, along with Teen Slut Karen and maybe others. At least as long as asstr.org does still work and lets me upload files. They probably won't be posted quick enough for some impatient readers ,
Again, thanks for taking the time and making the effort to send me your thoughts, even from way down Argentine way. LOL I appreciate it. Bueno!
name: L[redacted]
storyname: Zoo Mom
email-subject: additions
comments: Hi Ole
It was nice to see you added some more chapters to read. Its been a while.
Aw, c'mon, it hasn't been that long, has it? Seems I just posted a Teen Slut Karen episode in December, and a Zoo Mom chapter in October. I think I'm doin' pretty good at that. Then there were those chapters posted in August and May.
I know that's not fast enough posting for some of you, but you know you can get not only my stories, but the big Little Model Annie story, along with much more from several other authors on our our White Productions member site. But you knew that, huh?
... Thanks again for being one of my regular readers. I DO appreciate your comments.
( L[redacted] is a longtime reader of my site and regularly sends me feedback. )
name: A[redacted H[redacted]
storyname: Woodenhorse
email-subject: Belly riding
comments: Like to see more BELLY RIDER stories. There must be thousands of true stories, past and present, of this unusual sport.
Hi A,
Unfortunately, another comment without a valid email address to respond to. I didn't write the Woodenhorse stories, I just posted them for an author friend. I liked his stories and themes, and decided that my three readers would maybe like them too. Apparently you're one of the three. LOL
When asstr started having major server and site problems, I had to stop posting not only my stories but those of my friends that I'd been adding because we couldn't access or upload to the site. I've just never gotten back to adding more of Goldfish's stories, since the site may or may not continue to be flaky. Also, unless readers use the feedback form link to let us know they like and want more of the stories, we don't know if there's any interest or anyone even reading. Now that asstr has been more or less workable and I can at least upload my files to the site, I may have to start posting more of Goldfish's and CBEd's stories. Again, it depends on the responses I get - or don't get.
I've heard conflicting stories about 'belly riding'. It sounds interesting and I can see the attraction, but I've never been able to confirm the practice. As I've said before, I write stories based mostly on RL, and I've never gotten any first hand information or seen a video depicting the practice. If you or any readers can point me to first hand accounts or information about it, I'd like to learn more about it being done in RL.
Of course, it definitely IS an attractive subject for adult erotic fictional/fantasy stories. I'll see if Goldfish has more on it.
name: N[redacted]
storyname: Zoo Mom
email-subject: Feedback
comments: Hi there.
Ive not read the story, but love the plt youve mentioned. Yes, youre sick and perverted, but thats what makes the story so good! Im on the same page man..
N[redacted]
Hi N,
Thanks very much for your comments. I really hope you will enjoy all of the story and the other ones I've posted.
I've never denied that I'm a pervert (in my mind) and I've just written stories and then shared them for others who might enjoy them. Apparently some do. [grin]
It's always amazed me that written (novels) and video depictions of murder, rape, maiming, and other totally illegal and immoral acts are not only constantly displayed but applauded and are given awards, but the loving acts that I write about are SO taboo that authors who write such things are threatened with persecution and jail terms.
I started writing because I couldn't find any well written stories on the themes that I liked. Then I started sharing them online for others. Like I say, apparently some did/do like them.
I hope you read and enjoy all of my stories. Remember, any new material I write is first posted on the White Productions members site. If you like them, join us there.
Thanks again so much for making the effort to offer your feedback. I DO appreciate it.
name: Fr[redacted]
storyname: Zoo Mom
email-subject: love it
comments: You're stories are awesome, great characters, setting and super erotic.
Great writing, I'm always excited when I see you've posted an update.
Unfortunately, another comment without a valid email address to respond to. I really do appreciate all feedback and responses to my stories and am happy that there are readers who are keeping up with my updates. Asstr.org does and has had some problems, but as long as I have access to upload my files, I'll try to keep posting some of my stories after they've been published on our White Productions members area for a while. Not everything that I've written will be posted here, but I'm trying to provide some new reading materail once in a while. Every comment helps to add encouragement to do so.
name: L[redacted]
storyname: Shit Letter
email-subject: He's a dick
comments: Great response "Ole"
The asshole probably never wrote a story when he was in grade school. And probably couldn't write one if he had to.
L[redacted]
"L" is referring to the anonymous complaint that I have posted and responded to on my Info2 page.
name: R[redacted]
email-subject: News
comments: Hi
Not sure if you are aware but the Mr Double Palisades site has been taken down by the FBI and it's author arrested in November
Link
This may well mean that a host of authors are now looking for a new home to be able to post their work. I know I am. But it may also be worth letting people know as if his site has now been accessed by the FBI they may be working through his membership list. SO if you know anyone that was a member is worth letting them know.
Regards
R
I hadn't heard about mrdouble being taken down. Hope that isn't an omen for all of the story sites. And I couldn't really find much about it by searching. Not much there. But it IS an election year so the various bigot pols want to show how much they're against "crime" by taking down the visible but very easy targets - porn sites, prostitutes and johns locally, dirty book stores (although those are a dying breed) and other "immoral" but not always illegal activities. They get BIG media coverage - local, or national - and the general public thinks "something is being done" and they're being "tough on crime". After all it's much easier AND SAFER to bust a ho, porn shop or porn site than it is to actually go after, arrest and incarcerate murderers, dope dealers, shoplifters, etc... the really violent faction of society. After all, the cops want to go home safely at the end of their shift so who's the safer bust? A local porn shop or the local gang that's robbing and murdering?
If an elected official is running for re-election, then the more "free" publicity they can get from cracking down on the immoral things that give them major headlines, the more it happens. They just gotta coordinate to make sure they aren't at that porn shop, or with that ho, or their credit card isn't connected to the porn site featuring pics and vids of naked little boys. LOL
The FBI can't seem to go after major, criminal security breaches, leaks, kickbacks and corruption at the highest levels, but the easy targets like a porn site is easy pickin's.
I hadn't been to mrdouble's since the 90's or so, and I never 'signed up' or paid for anything there. Did read some of the stories when it was first online. I wouldn't know any of the members there.
We hadn't really started our site with the idea of publishing other authors' work. It was originally just for our own Little Model Annie series, plus our own separate material, such as my Zoo Mom, Summertime, etc. We've had some submissions from others, but in general, they weren't up to our standards. When we did want to fill in and provide our members with more reading material, we were offered The Gang series, then Neel Down's Nude Like Me, and we started posting them. Amy macBitch joined and we discussed her ideas, which turned into an expansion of my "WCR - Geoff Sterling" character. She was and is so much fun to work with and her story is well done, so we started adding it.
Data and I have discussed looking for a few new authors to add to the site, but really, those who can write literately in the genre are not plentiful, or are being published on asstr or other sites. When Loliwood went down, we wondered about looking for some of those authors to publish. But we just haven't done much.
Is there anywhere the authors that had been contributing to mrdouble post or share messages? I'm sure we would look at reviewing some others' works, but we really have our hands full just keeping the site updated, the server functional and getting our stories into posting format- in addition to writing any of our own. If anyone wanted to submit their stories, they'd have to be completely edited and proofed, ready for posting. We don't have the time or the inclination to work on others' material to get it "postable". Also, the quality of writing has to be a little above the average.
Do you have anything posted on asstr or other functional sites that we could look at? I'm sure that adding some new material by other authors would be something we'd take a serious look at. I doubt we'll try to become the next mrdouble or asstr.
Thank you for joining our site and for letting me know about this "news". It's too bad that any site is persecuted for the themes on it. Seems Hollyweird can visually portray murder, mayhem, rapes, beatings, shooting, blowing up and all sorts of otherwise "illegal" or "immoral" acts nightly, but we have to be in fear of persecution because we've strung alphanumeric characters together to tell fantasy that some deem "offensive". That IS why we went to the paywall type of site, so those consenting adults accessing the material KNOW what they are getting and have to make the effort to get access to it.
name: Youreuphoria
email-subject: Pictures
comments: Hey there, I really love the images of zoo mom. Would it be possible to get a link to the artist or to have a gallery and reference which chapter they are from?
Thanks
Keep writing!
The artist is Onix and he has done some remarkable galleries with his artwork for our stories. There are some full galleries that he did last year for the Christmas/New Year's holidays which feature the Zoo Mom family and are posted on our members area. He has done some 3DX illustrations for several of our stories on the White Productions site. In addition, he created 8 (eight!!!!) great galleries for one of my new Porn Families stories which will be published on the site in the near future. His work is amazing. He has a put a lot of his 3DX graphics on what he calls his Picture Dump on the White Global domain.
He has been busy with other projects lately, but occasionally gets the bug to do some more illustrations for us. You can send any comments or thoughts and we'll forward them on to him.
name: pupelvr
storyname: ZooMom
email-subject: All stories
comments: It is very early 1/3/2020 and wanting to read the entire ZooMom series but I don't have access to them.Maybe I need a subscription(?),don't know.But yes,I very much enjoy them and thank you for putting your wonderful crazy,twisted thoughts to print for us to enjoy.I also started reading the White Production stories but got stopped or hit the wrong key(operator error factors into a lot of my mistakes) but I was enjoying them too.And I have enjoyed a lot of your single stories along the way.I have read stories in many places since discovering them around 1995 when the internet was more relaxed we'll say, but time moves on and things change I've heard.Well Ole Crannon I have yammered enough oh!could you please tell me if their is a fee or something so I can read new stuff when it comes out! Thanks
Thank you for your comments. I'm glad you like my crazy, twisted thoughts. ;^)
Most of my Zoo Mom series is posted on our White Productions membership site. It is a long and continuing series, so not ALL have been posted there yet. But I post anything new there first.
Regarding membership at the White Productions story site, it does require subscription. If you just want "a look around", there is a free limited trial subscription that's offered exclusively to my asstr.org readers.
name: Fahren[redacted]
storyname: Summertime at Grandpa Dick's
email-subject: 8A and 9
comments: Would love to see the next chapters. Please add more description of the mother. So far I can't tell from your story so far how she looks or is built. Seems like a generic character that needs more info filled in if we're to visualize her as part of the sexual part of the story.
Originally, I hadn't really considered Karen's mom as a primary character that would really be much of a part of the story-- a generic character, as you say. As the story developed in my mind, I had to decide whether to bring her character more into the story. In fact, Karen's dad wasn't considered much when I first started... it was just Gramps and Karen, but the storyline developed as I wrote it.
I've said that the characters live in my mind and all I do is just record/transcribe what they do and say. LOL Which is mostly true. The story will develop as I write. I don't and never have outlined and plotted ahead of time the storyline. I just write. And they tell me what. ;^)
The Summertime story just sort of petered out after I had posted most of all I had written on asstr, and I had gotten the dreaded writers block, as far as that storyline. I don't know if I'll ever write more or finish it. I really should, but things have just not worked out for it. We'll have to see if I get any spurts of inspiration for it.
But thank you again for taking the time to give me your thoughts. Each time I get reader input, it gets me interested in working more on the story. So thanks for your encouragement. Chapter 8B IS posted on our members area at White Productions
name: Mimmo
storyname: Grandpa Dick
email-subject: Too Wordy
comments: You're stories are great both in content and visually. I can really see what is happening and I can follow along without going back and rereading what happened and who's who. However, you tend to linger too long on a particular event. You painted the picture and instead of moving on naturally, you tend to beat a dead horse. I have gotten bored and or frustrated that I have skipped a few paragraphs just to move the story along. Keep up the stories though. I am looking forward to chapters 8b and 9 and hopefully more.
No valid email was included so I couldn't respond directly.
I'm glad you like the stories and I have no problem with readers skipping over anything (themes, descriptions, activities) they don't like or want to read. But à chacun son goût, as you can see in the previous feedback comment that some do want more description... at least for certain things.
I have admitted that I'm "too wordy" many times. Seems I can't just write something short, including responses to feedback.
name: V[redacted] D[redacted]
storyname: Where is 8b
comments: Where is 8b and 9?
As I have noted, Summertime chapter 8B has been written and posted on our member area at White Productions. I post all of my new stuff there first.