[Some of my responses have been slightly edited or revised. Names redacted for privacy.]
name: Ken
storyname:
email-subject:
comments: Hi, maybe you can help. I am or was an author on here, a while back and now nothing seems to be working. Do you know what may have happen or how I could reactivate my account?
Here is my [site] address
https://www.asstr.org/Authors/preciouslambs/
Thanks!
Hi Ken
Doubt I can give you much help. I'm just another author who's probably a bit more IT tech savvy than the average bear (or bare). All I can do is upload my files to my asstr site. If that goes, I'll be in the same boat.
If you know your site access password, you should be able to use an FTP program, such as cuteFTP, filezilla or similar to access and upload files to your asstr page area rather than your author's dashboard interface. That's all that I do.
As far as I know, most author areas/sites are working (although many seem to have been lost), you just have to use FTP to xfer files up or maintain your site. I get a 404 Not Found error trying to go to that link, so your account may not still be valid. If you know your userID and PW for it- should be in an old email that you got when you first signed up for an account - then if the account is still on the server, you could try accessing via the above mentioned FTP programs.
Unfortunately, over the years, a lot of things have been deleted from asstr through server crashes, moves, etc. I wish you luck, but I have no majik answers or solutions.
name: Donnyb
storyname: Zoo Mom
email-subject: Societal norms????
comments: I have been a mental health counselor for over 42 years. I have listened to hundreds of parents, teens, young children for most of those years. In the beginning I tried to counsel all against what was and still is considered "sexual deviancy" but over the years I have found a new prospective on the so called "deviant" behavior. My experience has shown me that no matter what the deviancy or so called healthy mindset and behavior, there is absolutely no difference in the person of societies "deviant mind" and "normal healthy mind." What I mean is, the so-called healthy mind and deviant mind, the percentages that actually cause mental damage as a result of so-called sexual deviancy and sexual societal norm are no different than all of society. I am not the only one with this opinion, but most of my contemporaries are not willing to voice that opinion for being labeled a "psychological quack"........Just wanted to throw my opinion into the mix here. I have had a number of clients that were having sex with animals. Mostly female and some male gay clients. Most of those were simply frustrated with loneliness and some were in physically abusive relationships. There were only 2 out of over a few hundred did I consider them to be a danger to themselves or society. I have counseled with a number of people that are a regular visitors to asstr.org and I have contributed financially to the website for that reason. Of those admitting to visiting the asstr.org, I find perfectly healthy and "SAFE" individuals that use the website as a vent for themselves. Thank you, Donny Bertram, no not my real name....but for obvious reasons PS I have actually enjoyed the quality of the writing and some of the content has been sexually stimulating.
Hey Donnybrook,
I would highly suspect that you'd be quite ostracized and vilified if you espoused those observations to anyone who didn't quite agree with you. Having some professional and objective experience for such a judgement and point of view - even based on that professional and objective experience - doesn't sit well for those who are - for whatever reason - emotionally invested in the opposite viewpoint: that "children" are "damaged" by sexual experiences, ideas, and information. And at the majik age of 18, then can legitimately become "sexual beings" (But don't do anything "taboo" or immoral.)
I don't know if you've looked at my info page where I refer to some of the more well known and obvious psychological defense mechanisms and the type of personality that exhibits them - to extremes.
It really wasn't that long ago that "children" twelve or fourteen years old were crossing this country in much less luxurious and quite challenging modes of transport and starting their own families.So much for the "they're too young to have sex or even know about it."
But don't get me started.
I basically write about RL things that go on that I know people are doing, using a little bit of literary license to make it a fun read. People seem to enjoy reading my krap and - if nothing else - fantasizing about doing some of them.
A researcher at Univ of Hawaii, Dr. Diamond, researched and wrote a paper on how "pornography" isn't damaging and in fact can help those on the borderline of doing something... uh, "damaging". I can provide links if desired. I'm sure his work is, has been and will be vilified as much as your own opinions and viewpoints on the subject by those who don't agree, but who have no objective data or research to back up their - usually erroneous - opinions. [I've found that the amount of spittle that is ejected by such people in their arguments is inversely proportional to their IQ.
]
Thank you for your great feedback and comments based on your years of professional experience. Those readers I've corresponded with I've found to be quite "normal" and often thankful to be able to discuss such taboo topics with others who are openminded.
Again, I write for my own enjoyment and just share it online for those who may have fun reading my brain dribblings. But again, virtually every topic, fetish or "sexual deviancy" that I write about I know is going on, right now, in RL. Too bad more people can't share in the enjoyment of it. And most of the topics in my stories are quite tame in comparison with RL. That's what amazed me when I first started writing and posting, then receiving correspondence from readers. I'm not extreme enough.
Thanks again!
name: Nick
storyname: The Gang
email-subject: Don't leave asstr
comments: Reading your posts I can feel your frustration, but there are still some guys reading here and your storys are the reason for some of them to come back to asstr again and again. Maybe they are to shy to comment, but they are there. Keep your head up und your elbow happy.
Hey there Nack,
Thanks for your words of encouragement. Yeah, there is some feeling of frustration that asstr hasn't been maintained and has declined over the last few years. It's one of the best - or has been in the past - repositories of adult erotica extant. I started reading when it was just a 'news group' and all I had was a dialup access to it. A LOT has changed! But I still think that it's a great treasure for adult writers and continue to support it.
I really have enough to keep me busy maintaining and updating weekly our White Productions member site and my Ole Stories pages. Seeing very few readers - or even page accesses - of these asstr pages just is disappointing as this had been the greatest repository of adult erotica of all kinds for so long. That it's not being maintained saddens me but I do want to keep supporting asstr by posting new material here as I can.
Again, thanks for your feedback and comments. I wish more readers would bang on that private comment link and send me a few digital bits of encouragement. It really helps.
name: Jwin
storyname:
email-subject: Winning
comments: Hey Bud:
Just an attaboy that your stories are both amazing and appreciated.
Hey J,
And right back atcha! Any and all feedback and attaboys are definitely appreciated.
Thanks!
name: HardForLittles
storyname: The Gang
email-subject:
comments: More of The Gang please, wouldnt it be fun if they captured a toddler girl and her older brother and made them do all kinds of perverted stuff together?
Hi Hard,
I'll definitely post more of The Gang for Paul Turner. It's a great saga and I'm happy that you and other readers like it.
Remember, you can read over 350 chapters that have been posted so far on our White Productions member site where we're adding two new chapters weekly. I'll forward your comment to Paul as he appreciates any reader input.
name:
storyname:
email-subject:
comments: Murder, can't be suicide when he still lives, can it?
Stories? Years since last time, I just browse around the net you know.
And where is chapter 9? Pretty please.
I think I'm gonna just post this one without comment.
name:
storyname:
email-subject:
comments: Love everything
Hi Mr Succinct,
I'm glad you can enjoy my filth. Thanks for letting me know.
name: hardforsissy
storyname: Zoo Mom
email-subject: Story Request
comments: Hey there ol crannon, been a fan of the series for a few years now. I would love to see more family action. Maybe a full on immediate family orgy with all members going bi, just the 5 of them, and throw in the dog and have Rob and Bobby sucking each other, and sucking, stroking, or getting fucked by the dog too. Bobby can cum swap with Kari.
Hey Hard,
Sounds like a plan. I'll have to add it to my notes for if I get the writing urge again, to see what I can do. Ya gotta love that whole fam-damily, huh?
The problem is, I have plenty of ideas for the story, it's just a tremendous amount of work to actually write all the stories, especially with my damnable writers block. But I have some things like that in some of my newer Zoo Mom episodes that have been or will be posted on my Ole Stories pages.
I appreciate your being a fan for a long time. I often forget that I've been writing and posting my filth for a duzn years now, already. How time flies when yer gettin' old.
Thanks for your comments and still being a fan.
[And I get hard for Sissy too! After all, she lives in my mind.]
name: Easy
storyname: Zoo mom
email-subject: Keep going
comments: As the subject says...
So constructive criticism if I may. I found the last chapter (photographer's studio)a bit flat compared to some previous ones... was this on purpose to the give the readers a small break from the outrageousness that came before. Don't get me wrong, I still enjoyed the prose, just my two penneth.
Keep going Sir.
E X
Hi Oozy,
Thanks for your vote of confidence and critique.
I'm not sure just what might be a bit flat. I basically try to pound out on the KB as much as is dribbling out of my cesspool of a subconscious mind and try to get most of it down. I think I probably lose the majority of my "mental movie". I've said before that I just try to transcribe what my characters are doing. That's not always as exciting as some would like it to be, I guess.
This little excursion to the photographer's studio has two more parts. I hope they will be less flat for you than this first part. All three parts have been posted on my Ole Stories pages, along with all my other stories and series.
Thanks again for your thoughts. I appreciate ALL feedback.
name: John
storyname: general
email-subject: General
comments: Yup there are some of us still reading and enjoying your work.
Keep it up, we'll be doing just that.
JW
Hey Yawn,
Thanks for letting me know that someone actually stumbles across my krap once in a while. The way asstr has been, it's hard for anyone to find anything of mine lately.
Again, at the risk of being redun-dundant, you can join me on our White Productions member site and get everything I've posted, plus a LOT of other good, fappable reading.
Appreciate the vote of confidence though. Glad you're enjoying my filth. Happy that at least somone is.
name: some person
storyname:
email-subject:
comments: Still think your stories are one of the best if not the best out there combining so many things that are hot individually but never found in one place please don't stop posting I check every day if there is something new
Hi Sum,
Thanks for your comments. Really glad you like my filth. Like I've said, I'm an equal opportunity perv, so if you don't like some theme, just keep reading and you'll hopefully find something you like. Like they sez, Variety is the spice of... uh, porn.
You can read all my krap that I've posted on my Ole Stories pages, if you want more. Join us there.
name: 8
storyname: general
email-subject: feedback
comments: i still read stuff on asstr.org
Hi Ate,
You may be one of the very few, it seems. But I'll put your vote in the continue my krap column. I appreciate your support. Thanx!
name: G
storyname:
email-subject: Stories
comments: PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING Stories, Thank you
Hey G,
Great. I'll put your vote in the continue to post my krap column. Thanx!
name: Harry
storyname: All
email-subject: Contents
comments: Like your stories. As for "Page count isn't moving, comments have dried up"... Now I do not know anything about managing websites like this, but would new content help with the page count issue?
Cheers,
Harry
Hi Hairy,
Regarding page counts, how would anyone know whether I'd posted new content or not without looking? The page counters are on the "home" and "what's new" pages (and others). If nobody is even looking, then the counters don't increment. See how that works ? Can't tell if anyone's home if ya aren't knockin' on the door.
name: Mick
storyname: Zoo Mom and Summertime at Grandpa Dicks
email-subject: Support
comments: I do enjoy your stories and hope you keep them up.
Hey Muck,
Thanks for the support. I'll put your vote in the continue posting my krap column.
name: Scott
storyname:
email-subject: Thank you!
comments: Just wanted to thank you for your wonderfully written pervert stories. I have dumped many loads reading them. You can't get nasty enough for me!
I do have this fantasy idea that plays out with the whole family. Young couple who live with very opened minded parents are about to welcome their first born child into the world. Her doctor is a family friend so the plan on having the birth at home. The entire family is surrounding the mother-to-be and everyone is naked including the doctor. He wants to get her water to break so he asks her father to fuck her until it happens.
Eventually, her water breaks and makes a huge mess on the bed. No one seems to care. The doctor spreads her legs and begins to go down on her getting her good and wet to help the baby slide through. At this point the doctor gets so turned on he winds up dumping his load into her. The young woman thanks him for doing this as she is so appreciative of the fact that her baby will slide through a well-lubed cunt.
Soon the baby is born and its a girl! The father is so proud. He takes his little girl into his hands and while holding her by the legs proceeds to try and push his cock into her mouth. Grandfather comes over and deep kisses his son-in-law and his son offers the little baby's mouth to him.
Eventually, a couple more friends show up and soon there are 8 guys furiously jacking off over the baby and mother while she breast feeds her new little slut. The mother starts sucking the many cocks being stuffed in her face and soon the many men begin to dump their loads all over the baby and mother. It is a beautiful site. The father is filming the entire ritual so he can share it with his daughter when she is a little older and is fucking her. The baby is covered in beautiful cum. She is crying so the mother begins to lick off the copious amounts of cum covering their daughter.
Hope that wasn't too over the edge! I think we have much in common. I love to get twisted all the time.
Write back and take care,Scott
Hi Scoot,
Thanks for your feedback and enjoying my stories enough to be able to... uh, unload things. I'm happy to provide the... uh, stimulation.
name: gilgamesh
storyname: all,
email-subject: feed back
comments: Ole Crannon
Yes keep writing, Very much appreciate and enjoy site.
Gilgamesh
Hey Gil,
Thanks for your approbation and encouragement. It's appreciated. I'll put your vote into the 'continue posting something, sometime' column.
BTW, give my regards and felicitations to Enkidu and Inanna. Hope everything is still going well for you in Uruk.
name: Hiusker
storyname:
email-subject: Girls
comments: Fun
This is another of those comments that I occasionally get where you just go "Huh?". It's hard to figure out if the sender is just being terse but trying to let me know they like reading my filth, or are on a very metered connection and can't afford to send too many characters.
I'd guess I have to agree that girls are fun. I've enjoyed them all my life. Fewer lately tho, unfortunately. Thank God for the internet!
Guess I'll just have to add this to the "want more" column, trying to be optimistic. Thanks for the (cryptic) feedback.
name: JackJester
storyname: All of them
email-subject: Keep it up.
comments: Hey man, I heard you were having some motovation issues keeping up the old site. Just letting you know you’ve got at least one ole pervert here still beating it to your nasty stories. Keep it up old man
Hey JestJacker,
Yeah, motivation isn't so much the problem as just burned out or the damned writers block. Dunno which
but the result seems to be the same. I REALLY WANT to write, just nothing coming out lately. Fortunately, I do have a few pieces backlogged, so I've been able to continue to post new(er) material for our members on the White Productions member site on my Ole Stories pages there.
I appreciate your input, but like I've noted, my page hit counters and feedback here have dropped to mostly nothing, so I keep wondering if there's any use to continue posting here. It does give me some motivation to know there's at least a few such as yourself out there reading my filth. But the work of adding to and updating the site just doesn't seem of great value if there's no one knocking on the door.
I DO appreciate EVERY comment and feedback that I get and it does help to keep me motivated to add a bit more here once in a while. I thank you for taking the time and making the effort to let me know you're at least still able to get it up... with my help.
That's encouraging.
name: Georgia
storyname:
email-subject:
comments: I love your stories
Hi Jorja,
Thank you very much. I appreciate your praise and to tell ya the truth, I'm a bit partial to my stories myself. Going back and re reading some of them is always interesting. I see the misteaks and errurs I made and also where things could be a bit smoother, nastier or just plain better. But it's always fun to do a re read of them, and even I miss some of the things that I wrote. How 'bout that?!
Again, thanks for taking the time and making the effort to let me know you enjoy my filth. It's appreciated!
name: bob
storyname: summertime
email-subject: chapter9
comments: when will you post chapter9 on line??
Hey Bobareebob again,
Thanks for your comment/question. I really don't know when I'll post that chapter. With asstr being intermittent over that past years and readers staying away from it in droves, there really isn't a lot of incentive to publish much of anything here. My feedback comments are few and far between, my page counters are barely changing and no matter how much I want to support asstr and continue, I have less and less time to work on site updates here.
I appreciate both the few faithful readers I have here and asstr continuing to be available for those of us writers who can add to/update our pages, but it does get a bit disappointing and frustrating. I've originally said that I write for myself and just post for others who may enjoy reading my filth, but if there's nobody out there reading, I can better spend my time updating and maintaining our White Productions member site where all of my stories and a lot more are posted and updated regularly. Chapter 9 of Summertime is available there on my Ole Stories pages along with all the rest of my series and stories that I've published. I also give some of my stuff to members to preview once in a while.
Thanks again for your feedback. It is appreciated.
name: Mamckn
storyname: Summertime at Grampa Dick’s
email-subject: More, please
comments: I just recently have discover you work on ASSTR and White Products. “Summertime is the first series that I have completed and am looking forward to the continuation. I will happily occupy myself with other series until the Summertime continuation is posted.
Hi Mam,
Thanks for your comments. I'm glad you like my smut. I enjoy writing, when I can as the damn burnout/writers block has drastically reduced my productivity.
See the comment two below about my Summertime series. I'd love to be able to add more to it or continue it, but nothings been coming out of my subconscious cesspool.
I really appreciate any feedback and am glad you could stumble upon my little corner of filth. I'm happy if you're all happy. It's just good if you let me know.
name: Alan
storyname: The Gang, Ch 1
email-subject: Very Good!
comments: I just wanted to say I really like your writing style. it's nice to read something from somebody who knows how to write/tell a story. I've just started reading this series so I haven't really gotten in to it in depth, but I'm hooked. I read your comment about not many people being here anymore, and just wanted to say that at least one person is here & reading your (among others') stories. Do keep up the writing; it is appreciated.
Alan
Hey Al,
Thank you for the great comment and kind words. I do have to point out that I'm not the author/writer of The Gang, I just post the stories for Paul Turner, the British author. And I'm very happy to be able to do so. He is a wonderful writer/storyteller as well as being so prolific, with over 1000 chapters of his great saga written. He has allowed me to post them here and on our White Productions member site where we have over 375 chapters posted and add two new ones every week.
I appreciate your comments and am happy you're enjoying Paul's work. Thanks again!
Paul responds
To Alan:
Glad to have you aboard Alan and thank you for your kind words. You're embarking on an epic journey where the Gang grows from strength to strength and get into ever larger and ever more serious adventures, and where Elmlee grows and grows and grows, too. Today I started work on chapter 1,351, so you have plenty of reading yet to come. I do hope you enjoy it.
Cheers
Paul
name: ra
storyname: Summertime
email-subject: Chapter 9 request
comments: Hi, appreciate your story very well and cant wait to read chapter 9.
Thanks for sharing this great work.
Kind regards
ra
Hi ra
Thanks for your comments and enjoying my story. There are some comments below, like on February 9, 2022, where I've responded to others regarding that series.
I'll try to put Summertime Chapter 9 on my to do list and see if I can get it published here at some point. Like I've said before, there is little incentive to add more of my stuff here unless there's some indication that there are people reading it. So far, my counters and email doesn't show that much. But I'll make note of your positive vote for it. Until that point, you can head over to our White Productions member site to read all of my stuff that I've posted.
name: Clive
storyname: Zoo mom
email-subject:
comments: I love reading your fantastic stories,and this one has everything that I can desire, good writing, underage sex and a family that enjoys each other
Hi Clove,
Well, thank you for your comment. I've rather enjoyed writing all of the different chapters of Zoo Mom. I'm happy there are a few family oriented pervs out there that like reading my filth.
You can get all of the stories I've published on our White Productions member site on my Ole Stories pages, along with similar ones by my co-conspirator author Data, and several guest authors. There's a LOT there to keep you in reading material and we update and add stories every week. We'd love to have you join us there.
We've also added a forum board for members to post their thoughts and ideas, in addition to an Erotic Archive where authors can post their stories for public viewing.
Thanks again for your comments. I'm glad you enjoy my brain dribblings.
name: don
storyname: the gang
email-subject: young gang
comments: very interesting and pensiveness
Hi dun,
Not sure what exactly you mean with the comment, but I appreciate it anyway. I'll mark another vote for more of The Gang from Paul.
name: Trashman
storyname: The Gang
email-subject: Awesome
comments: Just want to say that I would have never found your stories without the recent story posting list so keep posting away you narcissistic bastard! Keep up the good work.
Trashman
Hi Trashy,
I'm very happy you were able to stumble upon my little corner of filth here and enjoy my posting of Paul's epic work, The Gang. He's very happy that people are reading and enoying his writing. I'm happy to publish it here for him.
I've received what some would call "hate mail" about my "constantly reposting old stories" and calling me "a pathetic piece of shit". [See the posting below at Friday, February 18, 2022]. Fortunately, those puerile, slobbering mental midgits are few and far between. I've addressed one of them on my Info Page 2 and some of the reasons for their mental defectiveness on my main info page.
With the problems that asstr has experienced over several years, about the only way for anyone to find my little corner of perv is for my files to be listed on that 'Most Recent' file listing. I'll keep posting as long as readers like you keep letting me know you're out there and want me to.
name: Boxhead
storyname: Grandpa
email-subject:
comments: Like the story
Hey Box,
I'm very happy you liked my story. I enjoyed writing it until the damn writers block hit. I've commented to some below about that series, so I won't repeat it here. Just happy you made the effort to let me know you liked it. Thanx! If more readers would chime in, I'd probably try to post more here.
name:
storyname: Home Page
email-subject: Page Update
comments: Just a FYI On your home page (https://www.asstr.org/%7EOle_Crannon/home.html), you have, at the top, a link that says "The Perverts Club— > Zoo Mom Chapter 27A added 4/15/22", but it points to 26.
Please keep washing your hands (=
Hey Wash,
Thanks for pointing out my errur. It's not like I don't make a bunch of 'em. I fixed it so it jumps to the right chapter now... I hope.
I really appreciate readers pointing out any problems, broken links, etc on the site. I try to catch 'em before uploading, but like I allus say, "Getting old isn't the problem. Being old is the problem.
name: Kantano
storyname: Noel's Best Xmas Ever
email-subject:
comments: Hi i like the story and just wondering when rest of the story will be posted.
Hi Kant,
Amy's rather disappointed that I've not gotten her whole Noel story edited and converted to posting format for her. I have enlisted some help and will try to get the rest of the story, 6 more chapters, finished and I will post them here on these pages for her, hopefully all of them by Xmas.
I'll let her know that you like her blasphemous masterpiece and want more. She'll be pleased.
name: LoveKids
storyname: The Gang
email-subject:
comments: Thanks for the new chapters of The Gang, much appreciated.
Hey Kiddo,
Thank you for the feedback. Paul really enjoys knowing that there are a few peeps out there reading and enjoying his continuing saga. You can read over 370 chapters on our White Productions member site where 2 chapters are posted each week. Plus you might get a preview of the new Irregular Fiction website I'm working on for Paul's stories. That's a continuing work in progress.
name:
storyname: Zoo Mom 27b (to be)
email-subject: Yes Please, may I have another?
comments: Kinda felt like I was joining a fraternity by that line (=
Always (not so (grin)) patiently waiting for the next chapter.
Please make sure you wash your hands (= Definitely want more chapters to come out for Zoo Mom (=
Ah Mr Kleen again?
Yeah, that phrase sure brings back memories, don't it? And not just of the movie if you were a Greek.
I'll put yer vote in the 'more Zoo Mom' column, but the same one over and over isn't the same as more peeps screamin' for more. Just don't know if more than one or two of yez are out there. Ah well.
I'll keep washin' the tinglie bits and see about gettin' the next chapter in posting shape.
name: red
storyname: life experience
email-subject:
comments: you posted about wanting to hear about life experiences. here is one I have, I worked at a major hospital on the upper east coast. I was an aid to a e.r. doc we would see some regulars come in since no insurance and it was (free). After some time I found it strange that black single moms and there daughters would seek out this middle age white doctor. until I had to file his back log of controls when narco wasn't a c2. I started to snoop and found out he had become there pimp and there hook up for there fix. I literally caught him with his pants down and balls deep Into an 8 yo ass with her mother there. he told me to keep my mouth shut and would talk about this. he laid out what he wanted me to know and if I played dumb or along I would get a head in the department. I did having needed the job and wanted some of what he had (money,girls) I had got my chance 2 weeks later with that same girl while her mother went with the dic to get the meds leaving m e there in bliss. He got busted 2 years later after I had moved departments. I choose the money over the girls, hated living next to a Crack house. from what I got told he thought he could pull the same thing with the next aid, not knowing the guy was gay. so girls didn't do anything.
I guess it's why I love black women and girls. also please more enterracital stories with black women there children and white men
Hey red,
That's quite a story. I've said that no matter how exotic or extreme things or acts that I write about in my stories, there's people out in RL doing even more exotic or extreme acts. When I first started writing and posting some of my stories, I thought they would be maybe a little too far out for most readers. Imagine my surprise when I got feedback comments on some of the things that were being done or going on in RL. Quite the pleasant surprise, tho'.
As I've noted before, I write my fantasies and stories for myself and just really share them on the outside possibility that some other pervy minds might enjoy them. Apparently there are some that do. But although I'm really happy for readers to offer their RL experiences or fantasies as ideas for stories- and I'll incorporate some when I can, I typically just write what's in my demented cesspool of a subconscious. I have introduced some black characters in some of my stories, although they are usually male and are in some chapters that haven't been published yet.
Thanks for your first hand experience. I'd love to hear more from readers who have had hot RL action that shows what's going on out there in reality and not just in my fantasizy stories.
I DO enjoy corresponding with my readers, so use my private feedback form to let me know your thoughts, ideas or experiences. I read and respond to all, one way or anotha.
name: Los Aliasos
storyname: Pretty much all of em
email-subject: Thanks!
comments: Just another quiet member of the PervsRUs bunch. At my age, maybe post-verted.
Hi Lost,
Yeah, ya gotta be careful of us quiet ones.
I know whut ya meen by that age thingie... I remember when dirt was clean. I'm at a place in my life where errands are starting to count as going out. "Post-verted": is that like retro-verted?
Growing older is mandatory... growing up is optional! I may be getting older, but I refuse to grow up so I just keep imaginin' and bang out some of those fantasies. Apparently some of you like them. As long as pervs like you keep letting me know they're at least readin' some of my krap, I guess I'll keep posting here when I get the urge and a break from posting and maintaining our White Productions member site. You can always join me there and get all of my stories that I've posted so far.
Thanks for the note of encouragement. It does help inspire me to add a few more here once in a while.
name: The Devil
storyname: Summer at Grampa Dicks
email-subject: Chapter 9?
comments: Hello,
Chapter 9 you said it was completed on the page, I was wondering if you will be posting it?
Thanks.
Hi Ol' Scratch,
I do have chapter 9 of Summertime completed and posted on my Ole Stories page on our White Productions member site. You can join and get not only all of that series, but the latest Zoo Mom chapters that have been posted, plus other series I've published there like my new Porn Families series that I've just got the inspiration for an addition to. But wait, there's MORE! Lots more with Little Model Annie saga, my writing partner's two excellent hot series Head Teacher and the new Young Sluts story, along with over 350 chapters of Paul Turner's The Gang saga. And more. So you see, it would be worthwhile to join if you like any of my stories. Scads more there to keep you busy and we post two or three more stories/episodes every week. See ya there!
I'll put your vote in for adding Summertime chapter 9 here when i get a chance. Thanks for your vote of support.
name: Smokie
storyname: zoo mom 27a
email-subject: more please
comments: I can't hardly wait to see what sissy and her mom will do to the photographer. Will he accept invitation to come to the house and make movies of the whole family. What will he do when he meets little sister.
Hi Smoke,
Yeah, those are all good questions, although I think you know the answers if you've been reading my stories at all.
Mitchell, the photog, was sorta added on a whim when I had a brain fart and came up with the idea of Sissy stopping by a legit(?) photo studio and doing what Sissy does. He may be a "throw away" or minor character, since I've started sort of an offshoot series with the family hooking up with a real hard core porn outfit. You can read some of those chapters on our White Productions member site on my Ole Stories pages. My Zoo Famdamily even blows the mind of a hard core porn director.
Thanks for your feedback. It's appreciated and I'll put your vote in the uh-huh column for posting more of my Zoo Mom series. Glad to know there's someone out there reading my brain droolings.
[Free Trial Membership info added here in email reply]
name:
storyname: Zoo Mom 27a
email-subject: Thanks!
comments: Really liked 27a. Like they say in the story it was "...Amazing."
I had never heard of a giclee printer. Glad you took the time to add it to the story. Love to learn new things.
Please keep washing your hands. I'm (not so (big grin)) patiently waiting for the next installment.
Hey Mr Clean,
Glad you liked my perverted fable again. There's more to cum on this particular one as it is a 3 part series on the subject. Naturally, Sissy shares and Lynn and Kari get to enjoy their own photoshoot, keeping everybody happy.
Regarding learning new things, I try to make stuff educational, at least in some way. Never know whut y'all will larn reading my smut. Educational porn. Whoda thunk it!
If anybody (other than the usual suspects) lets me know they want the next few chapters, I'll try to get them in shape for posting. 'Course, they're all available already on our White Productions member site, so...
Thanks again for your thoughts. I'm continuing washing my tingly bits too. Happy Easter to all!
name: TLake
storyname: Zoomom
email-subject: Looking forward to more
comments: I just want to say I have been loving this series! I check almost every day now for the next chapter to come out. I love that the parent's are in on it now too. I'm not into the scat at all but there's enough other good stuff so I can just get by that. Love the other stuff too btw. Ty for everything. I'd love to have a family like this.
Hi Takaleak,
Thanks for your comments. I'm happy that you enjoy my brain dribblings. I'm sorry I haven't been posting much of it here but without reader feedback, I don't know if anyone is even paying attention to or reading my krapTM. Or if I will continue to have access to my asstr pages.
I'm sorry you have to go to the trouble of checking daily for updates. If you want to read all of my different story series and everything new that I publish, you can join our membership site where we update with new stories weekly. It's got all my stories that have been posted there and you could do a binge read of all of them.
Again, thanks for your feedback. It's the only way I know that anyone is reading anything here or wants to read more. I appreciate and respond to all comments/feedback.
name: Hentai lover
storyname: All of them
email-subject: Illustration
comments: Your stories are so creative and original. You write scenes so vividly, but I do wish we can read your stories illustrated like a graphic novel. At least custom illustrations of money shots and outfit show off, and how much the kids are enjoying their orgasmic adventures all covered in cum, with juicy cocks of human and animal varieties fulfilling their inviting holes while covered in steaming pile of shit.
Hi Hent,
Thanks for your compliments. Glad you like my filth. A few years ago, a great 3DX illlustrator contacted us and offered to do some illustrations. He did quite a few, but his RL got busy and he's not been able to do more work for us lately. We really miss having great illustrations of his.
Visual photographic or video depictions of most anything in our stories is, unfortunatly, quite illegal. We don't have or use any pornographic photos on our White Productions member site nor here on my personal asstr pages. 3DX and Hentai graphic illustrations have been ruled legal by the US Supreme Court and we'd love to have a good graphic illustrator work with us to add some visual interest to the stories as you have indicated.
If there are any 3DX illustrators out there who'd like to have their work displayed, I'd definitely like to hear from them. Use my private Comment button above to contact me.
Until that happens, I guess y'all will just have to be satisfied with those vivid images that pop up between yer ears when you're reading my krapTM
name: Bob
storyname: skyler
email-subject: when
comments: like the story line so when will it be posted
Hey Bobareebob,
Earl gave me a few of his stories to post for him and I started with a couple of 'em. He wanted more of his stuff posted faster than I get to them, so for him and a few other authors who had been on asstr or other sites, we put a new White Erotic Fiction site online where authors can post their stories and readers can read and review them, all for free. This gave Earl the ability to post his stories as often as he wanted and he and many other authors have taken advantage of posting there. While it probably won't be an ASSTR, we hope it gives writers another venue to get their stories posted for free public access. The site is White Erotic Fiction Archive.
After Earl, Wayne3218 and some others started posting their stories on that Archive, I sorta fergot about adding Earl's Skyler stories here. I'll do that in the next updates.
Thanks for jogging my mem'ry and for wanting more of Earl's writing.
name: Eric
storyname:
email-subject:
comments: Yes, I read and enjoy your work.
My favorite, by far, is the Zoo Mom series. I hope you'll continue it. And I look forward to much more.
Eric
Hi Ewreck,
Thanks for giving Zoo Mom your vote of confidence. I'll see what i can do to give you the next installment soon.
I appreciate your feedback. But I wouldn't let anyone know that you read and enjoy my works. They might not unnerstand.
name: LoveKIds
storyname: The gang
email-subject: WotNoGang?
comments: Yeah I like the Gang, I like reading about what the dirty little fuckers get up to and wishing it was me. More please.
Hi Ids,
Thanks for your vote for more of Paul's excellent series, The Gang. Since you asked so nicely for more of the little fuckers, I'll be adding another chapter or two shortly.
See what happens when ya let me know there's someone out there reading this stuff? Then again, you could read over 360 chapters of The Gang on our White Productions member site where 2 new chapters are posted every week.
name: JImM
storyname: any
email-subject:Additions
comments: PLease!
Hey Chim,
Such a terse few digital bits of approval. So I'll just say "OK!"
name: essdubyaeff
storyname: Ellen's Tech Sex Lesson
email-subject: Love This Story
comments: Hello,
I just wanted to drop a line and say the story Ellen's Tech Sex Lesson really turned me on! It was very hot and had me getting off very quickly. You are gifted and horny erotic writer. Thank you for such a hot story.
If you are interested in reading my stories, look me up on ASSTR as essdubyaeff. You can email me at [redacted] if you want to talk sex or trade stories and pics.
Keep up the good work!
essdubyaeff
Hey swifty,
Thanks for the vote of confidence and compliments. Glad you enjoyed my Ellen story. Ellen herself enjoyed reading it and offered some help with it. I think I've got most of a second chapter of it, which I'll probably post on our White Productions member site if and when I do get it done.
I've received a lot of nice comments about the story since it was first published, both on another story site and here.
I'll go check out your stories on asstr if the search engine still works adequately. Glad to hear from another writer.
name: Mr. Lonely
storyname: Zoo Mom
email-subject: This counts as three
comments: I'm only one reader. (Zoo Mom.) I'm only one reader. (Zoo Mom.) I'm only one reader. (Zoo Mom.) I can't make anyone else read Zoo Mom, but I'd really like to read another chapter. Apparently, though, you need three votes, so I'm trying to stuff the ballot box here. (Sucks to be in the minority.)
Hi Lone Lee,
Uh, I don't think the voting goes that way, but I'll note down your enthusiasm in the Zoo Mom column and will see if I can get another chapter ready to go pretty soon. Mebbee that'll soothe yer minority pain.
Y'all know, it really wouldn't take that much effort on y'all's part ta mash that ol' Comment button and send me a few digital bits so I know there's at least someone's still out there.
name:
storyname: The Gang
email-subject:
comments: I'm not the type of person to post comments usually but I have been really enjoying The Gang and hope you release more of it.
Looking forward to more of your posts!
Hi noname,
I appreciate you letting me know that you like Paul's The Gang series. His story has been popular on member site and I'm happy that he's allowed me to post it here for him.
The problem currently is that I have no idea whether there are any readers out there reading what I post here. I know asstr has had a lot of problems over the past few years and many readers have been lost, thinking it's no longer accessible or that most of the author's can no longer add to or update their sites. Without anyone letting us know there's someone out there reading our stuff, it seems fruitless to try to continue adding material here.
If you enjoy The Gang series, there's over 360 episodes posted on our White Productions site, along with a myriad of other stories, and other authors. We update and add new stories weekly, with two new The Gang episodes added in each update. That's eight new episodes per month!
It does take a lot of time and work to add more stories to this site. Unless I get some feedback from readers like you that they are reading here and want more, I can better use my time updating and adding to our White Productions members site.
Thanks for taking the time and making the effort to let me know you enjoy reading the stories. I appreciate it and it will help me continue to add more here.
name:
storyname: Perverts Club
email-subject: 27A (to be)
comments: You and the Ides Of March. I bet Julius would be proud to know you use his death to (maybe) post porn (=
I didn't see your post on the 1st until whenever this message goes out (=
Always looking forward to more posts of your stories (=
They haven't quite banned me from thinking, but that may be because I'm an imbecile (=
Thanks for keeping washing your hands (=
Hey there,
Got the feelin' that Ol' Julie would be happy to just have survived his encounter with the knife. And from the frescoes from around those times, I think they were much less sexually inhibited then than we are now. Might have to stop by Orange Julius on the 15th to commemorate the occasion.
I'm just getting the feeling that unless there's some indication that more than one or two people are reading my stories, then what's the use? Anyone who is really into my filth can get it all at our White Productions members site where I post all my new and old stuff. When the only feedback I get is that I'm a "pathetic piece of shit" [see below], and the hit counter only cranks up one or two notches, I get to feeling like "what's the use?" So I keep washing my hands (and tingly bits) and wondering whether I should make the effort to post more here.
name: Fuck you
storyname:
email-subject: Stop reposting
comments:You are constantly reposting old stories, fucking stop I'm a fucking stop it, you are a pathetic piece of shit
Hi Fuker,
Hey, thanks for your feedback. I appreciate your taking the time and making the effort to let me know you want more of my stories posted.
I guess you haven't read my Info pages about such previous complaints. But then again, from the looks of your diatribe, literacy probably isn't your strong suit.
I love reader comments, positive or negative. Anyone care to comment on this commenter's comment? I'll be happy to post any responses here.
name: dk
storyname: zoo mum
email-subject: need more Lynn masochistic chapters
comments: Heya, I loved Lynn enjoying pain at the hands of her kids in chapter 3 of zoo mum.
Rest if the story has been fun, but nothing much like that again.
Will you have all that teasing pay off in later chapters?
Could you recommend any other stories with that kind of scene.
Very kinky and masochist mum's enjoying being abused by their kids, not easy to find stories like that.
And yes, read all of the classic Phil stories.
Cheers,
DK
Heya back atcha deke,
Glad you're enjoying the twisted family that is Zoo Mom. I've enjoyed writing all of it and it still won't let me shake it. Even with the writers block, I still have snips and bits spewing out of my cesspool of a subconscious once in a while.
As I've probably mentioned here in my comments or on my What's New and Story Notes pages, my characters live, rent free, in my minid and I only transcribe what they do or say. When it is flowing out of my febrile mind, all I can do is type frantically to try to capture as much as I can. I figure I lose at least 90% of it. But I'm glad for that last 10% and am happy that some of my readers actually like my brain dribblings.
I really don't know what may happen in the future, other than in the chapters that I have already gotten worked out a bit. Other than the new PainStim Productions offshoot series that I've started writing. All pain, alla tha time. Shades of Torture Galaxy!
I'll make a note that you'd like Lynn to have some more 'maso' sessions with the kids and pass it on to her. I suspect she won't object. Say, have you read chapter 26 yet? You may like some of that one.
I've been slavin' over the ol' hot keyboard thingie trying to get a coupla more chapters of my Zoo Mom story ready to post here. Trouble is, unlike you, very few are letting me know if it's worth my time and effort to get anything posted up here. Sorta discouraging when you don't know if anyone's out there on the interwebs readin' my filth.
Thanks again for taking the time to let me know you like some of my stuff. It helps and is appreciated.
name: Pete
storyname: Summertime
email-subject: Chapter 9
comments: Hi, I note that Ch 9 is completed but it hasn't yet appeared on your story page and I was looking forward to reading it! When is it likely to be posted here?
It's really my first foray into reading your stories and I found this series to be quite amazing.
In many ways it is like a love / coming of age story with a lot of kinky interludes making it difficult to put down, wanting to know what happens next and what is Karen's next kink going to reveal.
I look forward to reading more of this series in the near future.
I have read a few of Paul and the gang but I'm a long way from getting up to date on that series.
Incidentally, on the summertime series the link at the end of 8A needs to be updated to go to 8B. Minor thing but useful.
In the meantime I shall have to sample some of your other series and see if they draw me in as much as summertime.
Kind regards and keep on writing, Pete
Hey hey Pete,
I really appreciate your comments and glad you liked Summertime. It was one of the first stories I ever posted publicly. I enjoyed writing it, but I ended up posting all of the chapters I had written rather quickly and suddenly had no more to post. So I had to frantically write a few more. Unfortunately, that damn writers block set in and screwed everything up and although I would LOVE to write more of that series, nothing has been coming out. One of our White Productions members ended up helping me finish chapter nine after I'd gotten bogged down about half way through. [RIP Elvenpuppy
]
Since I published Summertime, I've gotten quite a few nice comments on it, especially when asstr.org's email feedback form was working. As you can see in these comments below, there are still a few, like yourself, who enjoy reading that series, although even though I've got my own private feedback form, there just aren't a lot of readers using it. Asstr.org has had problems over the last few years and that's one of the reasons why I don't post more of my stuff here. I never know when or if my - and your - access will go down.
We publish two new chapters of Paul's The Gang series every week- That's eight a month. We have almost 350 chapters posted for our members reading enjoyment. Plus a number of other authors' stories and series in addition to all my stuff on my Ole Stories page. A treasure trove of exotic and erotic reading, if I do say so myself. And I do.
I hope you do enjoy some of my other work, such as Zoo Mom, Teen Slut Karen or my Solitude Series that I've posted here. I dearly enjoyed writing Summertime, but as I've noted before in some comments, I doubt there will be more forthcoming on that series.
BTW, I fixed the link in Ch 8A to Ch 8B. Appreciate your pointing it out. Thnx!
name:
storyname: Zoo Mom 26
email-subject: Kari DP
comments: Thanks!
I had been waiting for most of 26 chapters, but Kari finally got her DP. I was expecting it to be Rob and Bobby, but Milt and Rob is just fine. Hopefully there will be more Kari (Lynn and Sissy too!) DP in the future (= Hopefully more than two sentences in a compilation tape as well (=
Thanks again!
Please keep washing your hands (=
Hi again Mr Kleen,
Hehe, knowing the family as I do, I don't think that it was Kari's first DP, but I'd have to go back and check. But in my mind, I'm sure Rob and Bobby have been happy to fill the young'un the hell up. How could you say no to that little vixen?
I'm sure I was remiss in not describing just how they all worked to get Milt, aka "pop can", into little Kari, but I do know that Sissy has been working on her little sis to help "expand her horizons".
Ooops, can't give away the whole thing. You may have to join our site to get all of the new House Next Door offshoot series that I've written. Been having a lot of fun with that one.
I'm glad you've enjoyed the series. Now if more would let me know that they're at least reading some of it, it would help me with the motivation to keep posting more. I appreciate your comments and feedback.
name: Tootue
storyname: Zoomom
email-subject: Fun time with granpa
comments: The part where Kari gets double tagged and especially the shit eating part is just great! I love that they encourage it in the story and that she really likes it.
Hi Tooter,
Glad you like the (mis)adventures of little Kari. I really like that little scamp.
There are some who really don't like scat - or other things, like Kari's age - but as I've said before, I'm an equal opportunity deviant author and I write about all kinds of erotic kink. It's OK if anyone skips the parts they don't like and go on to the next ones.
This is all fantasy/fiction after all and we can enjoy our kinks without bothering anyone else. What's not to like? There are more adventures of our young 3 year old slut coming in future episodes. Thanks for your note of appreciation.
name: Badger
storyname: Zoo Mom
email-subject: Yes
comments: Yes... want more. Lots more.
Hi Sad Ger,
OK, I'll put your vote into the "keep posting Zoo Mom" column. Now if we could get a few more similar votes, I'd have enuf for a futball team and figure somebody out there is actually reading my krapTM. Unless yer jes' a bot blowin' smoke up my posterior orifice. But I'd guess that would count as a vote.
Thanks for taking the time and making the effort to smack ye olde keebord for a few digital bits and send 'em my way. It's appreciated.
name: Allouais
storyname: Zoo Mom
email-subject:
comments: I absolutely love the new Zoo Mom chapter! Hopefully it isn't too long before daughter/sister/aunt Kimber pays our favorite family a visit.
I do feel like the ending was rushed just a bit, I'd have liked to have read more detail about Milt's first time with Kari. But that's just a tiny nitpick, I love how the whole scene cements just how comfortable the grandparents' have gotten with all of the depravity.
Keep up the great work!
'Allo 'Allo (if you've watched British teevee),
Thanks for your great comments and story idea. I really appreciate the feedback.
Yeah, I suspect that it may be have been rushed a bit as writers block and ennui had set in, and I sometimes have trouble "fleshing out" some of what I'd like to write. I've noted before that I don't outline or plan out much of anything other than occasionally making a few notes of ideas. I get the 'mental movie' in my head and then as it starts to gush out, I try to type as fast as I can to keep up. I figure that I lose probably 90% of what comes out of my head from not being able to capture it all. I tried a dictation program thinking that may help get more down, but I spent more time making corrections than getting anything usable actually written. So I went back to just pounding it out on the keyboard.
I've given some serious thought to maybe telling the story of how they got Milt to fit into his little sex vixen granddaughter, as they made a video of it. I may have to think about that and see where it will fit into the storyline. And yeah, I'd really like to get our family together with Kimber so they can all enjoy each other's perversions. Thanks for the idea.
You can get all of not only my Zoo Mom series that I've done so far, but many other stories and series that I've created at our White Productions site on my Ole Stories page. Unless I get more feedback that people are reading my stories here, I may just focus my efforts on posting everything there and let this asstr site lay fallow.
Thanks again for your input and story idea.
name: Alnot
storyname: Zoo Mom
email-subject: Please post more!
comments: Hey Crannon, please post the next chapter! I've been waiting to see Lynn is going to get up to next!
Thanks!
Hey there NegativeAl
I think I've just about got my next Zoo Mom chapter ready for posting, so that should go up shortly, since you and few others have asked so nicely.
I did spend some time while snowed in to get it in shape. And Lynn does some pretty extreme things for good ol' mom and dad. I think you'll enjoy it.
Thanks for the request. It's the only way I know that anyone is reading my krapTM and are perverted enough to actually want more inflicted on you. Looking at the page count on my What's New page, sometimes I think I'm the only one looking at it. Go ahead you pervs, prove me wrong.
name: Dispuesto
storyname:
email-subject:
comments: Love the stories would love to read more like the one with the camel hump in little nickers xx
storyname: Young slut in trainingHi Dis,
When I first read that comment, I went "Huh??" Like they say, UK and US are two countries separated by the same language.
Then I thought 'Hey, I'd really like to read that one too.' After that I read your next email that stated:
email-subject: Introduction to fun
comments: Young slut in training need to read more! Please
Young Slut in Training is a short series I wrote for our White Productions site. So far there's three chapters posted and I've written a fourth that I've gotta edit and do a little work on before it's ready for posting..
I see that from another email you've requested information on joining the site. I've sent you that information. So thanks for your interest in my krapTM and hope to see you there. I know you'll enjoy my YST story, along with many, many more.
And I really need some more information about that camel hump thing, tho'. Sounds intriguing.
Don't think I've covered that particular perversion in any of my stories. At least not that I recognize... or remember.
name: Eric
storyname: Zoo Mom
email-subject:
comments: Hi - great writing !! I'd love to read more chapters and other stories on 'the twisted mind', but I cant figure out how to join the website. Sorry for being dense. How do I join? Thank you!
Hi Eruk,
Hehehe, guess I haven't made it that easy for everyone as I'd thought I had. Sorry 'bout that.
You can go to the White Productions site and click on the "Join" link at the top of the "News" sidebar or select "Join/Subscribe" from the drop down menu under "Home". That should give you a form to request membership info.
There's lots more stuff there, both on my Ole Stories page plus more from guest authors. Should keep you busy, at least one handed, for a while.
Just FYI, the Twisted Mind is my asstr.org web pages, the White Productions site is a separate membership website where I post all of my krapTM that I've written and where I post any new stuff. Asstr.org is where I post just a few of my stories.. Both are the result of my twisted mind.
[Free trial membership info included here in private email.]
name:Clark
storyname: Zoo Mom
email-subject: Zoo Mom
comments: I just LOVE your writings of Zoo Mom. I am a 67 year old pervert and await every chapter of your series. I am in failing health and hope that I can live to read the continuation of your "Zoo Mom"series. I just wanted you to know that you have become my favorite erotica writer. Here's hoping that you have continued health and keep your mind dirty. You sir are a true treasure. Thank you for listening and writing. Yours truly "Dirty Clark [redacted]"
Hi Clerk,
Thanks for the vote of approval. Glad you like my filth. At yer age, yer just a 'yungun'.
Compared to me, that is. But I guess we share the ol' perv gene.
At the risk of being completely immodest, after reading some of my past writing, I've become my favorite erotica writer too. Well, at least one of them.
I think that 'continued health' ship has sailed and is in the process of taking on water. Guess I can join you in that 'failing health' bit. But as I allus say, "Ain't none of us gettin' outa here alive!" Not much consolation but the truth. Hopefully, waiting for my next posts will give you the incentive to keep smellin' the daisies instead of pushin' 'em up.
Your email address doesn't seem to verify for me, so I couldn't send you some info on a limited trial access to our White Productions site where all of my stuff is posted. I'll try again.
I appreciate all comments and suggestions. It's what keeps me posting some of my stuff here to support asstr.org. If I don't get any feedback that people are reading my krap, then I figure what's the use? So again, thank you for taking the time to let me know.
name: JimM
storyname: Guest Stories
email-subject: Guest Stories
comments: Yes I read pretty much anything you post
Have been waiting ages for more of Paul Turners "Gang" and also Earl de Vere's that has not been added to in 2 months, having been promised 'soon' even before that!
Many Thanks
JimM
Hi Jam,
Wow, pretty much anything? That means you read my What's New and Story Notes pages. And my stories. My apologies for inflicting such torture upon you!
If you've kept up with the comments on this page (and the 8 other comments pages) you'd know that asstr.org has had some problems and it can be hit or miss whether authors can access and post new material here. So there's not a tremendous amount of incentive to add more stuff here unless there's some feedback and responses from readers like you. Putting stuff up here without ever knowing if anyone is even reading it can be discouraging for an author. And a dis-incentive to continue posting.
I think that asstr.org is and has been one of the greatest fixtures and features of the internet. Even with its problems, it's still a premiere archive of adult erotic fiction of all types, without censorship. That means a lot to both us writers and readers. So as I continue to have access to my pages to update them, I do so as I get the urge... and the time. It still IS a lot of work and time to even just put the stories into posting format, even for other authors' stories, and that's without doing any writing of new material.
Since you've read pretty much anything I've posted, you'll know that over 300 chapters of Paul's The Gang series have been posted on our White Productions site, along with stories by other authors that I've enjoyed and been happy to be allowed to post online - like Earl's, AmyMac's, Neel Down's and BentArrow's.
There is little incentive to post more material here if there's nobody or even just a few readers of it. I want to support asstr.org though and continue to add more of my krapTM here, if I get any responses - like yours. I've ranted about wanting feedback for ages and have been posting the comments I have received here on these pages for a couple of years now, so you can see how few readers have offered anything.
I appreciate your comments. At least I know someone is out there. If you want more of my story series, along with several other guest authors PLUS the huge Little Model Annie saga I've written with my partner Data001, you could join us there. New stories are posted weekly with 2 chapters of The Gang posted every week.
I haven't posted any more of Earl's stories because he wanted to be able to have his material posted publicly faster than I could get it out. So we added a new Erotic Fiction Archive for authors who didn't have access to asstr.org to post their work themselves and he's been posting quite a bit there. We're not trying to compete with asstr.org, just offering another resource for authors and readers. It's new and we're still trying to get it working, but more authors are posting there. It is being supported by our White Productions membership site for hosting costs. I'm also working up a whole new website for Paul Turner's stories. Yes, he has written more than just The Gang. I don't know when that will be publicly available, but I'll post that information here.
Thanks again for enjoying my filth. I'll try to get another Amy's Noel's Best Xmas Yet! chapter posted before Xmas and maybe a few more The Gang. I'll try to have another Zoo Mom chapter here after the New Year too.
name: Cali
storyname: zoo mom
email-subject: Wow
comments: Just finished chapter 9. I just love the incest aspect, especially the parents fucking their kids. Looking forward to when the toddler takes a big cock up her ass. Not crazy about the snake, but I just skip those parts. The ass fisting was a big turn on, especially when the teen was doing her friend!
Hi Cali,
Hey, the family that plays together, stays together. Right? Glad you like the stories and themes. And I'd have to go back and look but I'm sure Kari enjoys what you describe quite a few times. She's turning out to be quite the anal queen. Just wait until Grampa visits with his magic wanger. So good they make a vid of it.
As I've said before, I'm an equal opportunity perv - if there's something or some theme that you don't like, just skip it as there's more and different coming somewhere.
If you want to read all of what I've posted of my Zoo Mom series, plus some others including the new Porn Families series, just join us and get all my filth on my Ole Stories page there.
You're gonna like more adventures of Sissy and Karen, I'm sure. Thanks again for your comments. It's the only way I know that anyone out there in readerland is stumbling upon my krapTM
name:
storyname:
email-subject:
comments: Keepem kummin
You like to keep 'em short and sweet, huh? OK.
Willdoo.
name: Huggydabear
storyname: Zoo mom
email-subject: Insest, beastiality
comments: Love your stories. You are a fantastic writer and I look forward to more of your stories. Thank you for your talent.
Hi Huggs,
A 'fantastic writer'? Dunno about that... well, yeah, guess I sorta am. At least compared to some of the worst ("It was a dark and story night...") writers.
I'm glad you enjoy my filth. I'll try to keep posting some of it here as long as asstr.org is semi-functional and I'm smelling the daisies and not pushing them up .
You do know that you can read all of the stories I've posted on my Ole Stories page on our member site. There's lots more of my writing, including the new Porn Families series and chapter 9 of my Summertime story. I will also be posting more of Teen Slut Karen when she does a babysitting job or is the first pain model in the PainStim Productions series. Not to mention more than 50 chapters of my Zoo Mom family adventures and more coming. (OK, I won't mention that.) Join us there for all the fun and shenanigans.
Thanks for your kind comments. I DO appreciate getting any feedback and always respond if an email is included or here on my Comments pages. [Your 'mail.com' email address doesn't validate, so I couldn't send you a direct reply.
]
name: Gangsta
storyname: The Gang
email-subject:
comments: Thanks for your reply to my recent message. I did explain earlier that I am unable to subscribe to White Productions so, unfortunately I'm stuck here in asstr. It's now 6 weeks since the last two chapters were published here and, as I believe that there are at least 950 more to come, at this rate it's going to be in excess of 50 years before we get up to date. I hope that you and asstr will still be around in 2071 but I certainly will not. In view of this and the interminably long waits between new Gang exploits that I can wank over I have, sadly, decided to search for new wanking material elsewhere. I wish you well in your continued efforts to spread filth to the masses.
Hey again, Gang
As I've 'splained before in these comments, because of the vagaries of asstr.org and not knowing whether I'll have access to the page to update, I don't have a great incentive to put a lot of time into it. It does take a good amount of time and work to do even the simplest updates. I want to continue to support asstr.org, so I try to add something new once in a while.
Sometimes I wish that neither Paul nor I let it be known that he has written so many chapters of this story. To me, it's an amazing work of literary art, not only in quantity, but in quality of writing, storyline, character and plot development, etc. I'm very happy that he has let me post it here. But if nobody knew that there were more unpublished chapters, maybe there wouldn't be anxiety about when more would be posted.
I do understand the problem from a reader perspective. I've gotten a number of books for my eReader from some authors I really like. They are novels and take time to write, edit, proof and get published. As a writer, I understand that. As a reader, I want to have the next one as soon as I finish the current one. Unfortunately for me the reader, it takes time and effort for the next book to get written and published. Me the writer understands this as I still impatiently wait for the next release. Don't even get me started on the ones that are or end up as single releases. Quelle frustration!
I'm trying to develop a new website for Paul's stories, where I hope I'd be able to add many chapters at a time to try to catch up with his prolific output. But it would probably still be under our White Productions site where we can control the access to it
Whle asstr.org has had some major problems in the past few years and has lost a lot of its library, there's still thousands of stories still available on it. It is a treasure trove of all kinds of erotic writings. I'm sure you'll be able to find a lot of wanking material there. If not, there are a number of adult erotic fiction story sites out there. Another thing I've found, even with my own material is that you can re-read it over again and get something new out of it. Or maybe that's just me.
I hate to lose any dedicated readers, so check back in once in a while and see what's been added. I'll try to keep the new site map updated as I add new material after interminably long waits. Ciao!
name: Brian
storyname: White Productions
email-subject: How to sign up for White Productions
comments: Hello Ole,
All across your site I come across links to the White Productions site. When I get there it asks for a username and password, which I don't have.
I've looked for a sign up button but it's nowhere to be found. How can I subscribe to White Productions?
Kind regards,
Brian
Hi Brain,
I really had thought that I'd put enuf links and info on these various pages to at least leave a little breadcrumb trail... Guess not!
I'm not trying to promote our White Productions site at the expense of asstr.org. Really. It's just where those who are perverse enuf to like my kind of storytelling can find most everything new and old that I've posted online on my Ole Stories pages there. In addition to other stuff that I've written with my fellow author Data001, plus many new stories by our guest authors: AmyMac, Neel Down, BentArrow, Earl De Vere and more.
You can get information on how to join the site by going to Join/Subscribe page or clicking on the main 'home' menu and select the 'Join/Subscribe' link in the drop down menu. On the main page sidebar, there's a 'Click the Join button' link in the News column. Usually don't post that information here.
We've discussed revamping the whole main White Productions main public page, so I'll take this comment as confirmation that we need to do that to make it more friendly.
Most of the links I post here are to the 'public' area pages, which don't require any sign up or membership to view. Only the pages within our membership area require a login. Hope this helps. The email address you listed doesn't validate, or I would have sent you the subscription information directly.
name: Poco
storyname: The Gang
email-subject: Ch. 55
comments: Victoria's abuse of Alan's willy was classic! Alan's delirious response was outrageously hilarious! I laughed so hard I couldn't catch my breath. Having lived in Britain, in County Essex, I truly enjoy Brit humor and this series is so typical.
Thanks to the author and and to you for publishing it. I just wish that the chapters were published more frequently. Giving you the elbow right back!
Hola Little bit,
Both Paul and I are very happy that you're enjoying his delightful story, The Gang, so much. I'll be happy to continue posting here as long as I can have access to my pages.
As mentioned before, if you want more of The Gang, you can head on over to our White Productions site where we have over 350 chapters posted and are adding 2 each week. Plus I'm working on a website for Paul and his stories that will hopefully have larger numbers of chapters posted at a time there. Keep yer fingers crossed.
I'll send Paul a copy of this comment so he knows he has some enthusiastic readers for his story. He tries to respond to all I send him and I'll post it here when he does. Thanks again.
Paul responds: Thanks for the thumbs-up, Poco, it's always a joy to hear that readers are enjoying the series. Humour is a constant thread throughout the series and I too sometime laugh out loud when reading back through old chapters.
Plenty more to come.
Cheers, Paul.
name: Ed
storyname: Grandpa Dicks
email-subject:
comments: I just wanted to say that I have been reading this set of stories and I have found it a real turn on.
Your description of scenes like the shopping mall and the progression of the story is very good on many levels!
Please keep up the good work.
Regards
Ed
Hey Ed,
Thanks for your comments about Summertime at Grandpa Dicks. I really enjoyed writing that series, but unfortunately haven't had much inspiration to continue it further. Scroll down these comments a bit and you'll find some of the responses I've made regarding that.
As I've noted previously, without reader feedback I don't know how much more I will be adding to or updating this site. Seems sorta pointless to post stuff here if nobody's reading it. (See previous comment below.)
name: Gangsta
storyname: The Gang
email-subject:
comments: Oh dear Ole, another long, long wait for the next two chapters of The Gang.
Hi again, Gangst
I know. It's terrible to have to wait for the next episodes of The Gang. I can sympathize but also, with the problems that asstr.org has had over the past few years, I never know if I'll be able to access my pages and add/update anything. So that tends to be a negative incentive for putting more time and effort into doing it. Plus, the complete lack of any comments or feedback on the stories makes me wonder if... (tapping microphone) "Hello, anyone out there?"
As an alternative, you could just join us at our White Productions site and have over 350 chapters of the story to read. And two more being added every week. Just sayin'.
I've also been working on a whole new website just for Paul's Irregular Fiction stories. Haven't quite got it completed yet but it will be within our member site and have larger groups of chapters posted on it each update as I get them converted to html format. It will be available to our members or you can subscribe just for access to that site separately. I'll add a notice here on these pages when that is available, once the first 350-400 chapters are converted and ready to go.
Thanks for your comment. Both Paul and I are very happy that you, and others, are enjoying his story.
name: John[redacted]
storyname: Perverts Club Zoo Mom
email-subject: Scat and lots of other things
comments: I truly am enjoying Perverts Club and am amazed how much I relate to many of the things happening in this incredible story. I am an old, overweight, perv who has done many of the things described in this series. I love scat, piss, bugs, huge insertions including toilet brushes. You might check out my videos on motherless.com. I would pay big money to have dogs and pigs bury their cocks in my ass.
Just wanted you to know how much I'm enjoying Perverts Club and can't wait for the next installment. Keep them cumming.
Hey B J,
Thanks for your comments. I'm glad you're enjoying all of my filth. I s'pose that's what it's written for.
It's interesting that at first, when I started writing and posting my stuff online, I figured that what I'd written was so far 'out there' and extreme that most people wouldn't believe it. Then I started getting some correspondence from readers like you who said that some was exactly like what they did or some were even more extreme than I had written about. While it is fiction, I've actually tried to base most everything I write on what I know happens in RL, with some literary license thrown in to make it a fun read. Although not that I've experienced or done it all myself.
I appreciate hearing from any of my readers who have personal experiences, comments or ideas about the themes in my stories. I'm sure you'll enjoy more of my Zoo Mom, Porn Families, and all of our Little Model Annie series on the White Productions site. Let me know what you think.
name: alias
storyname: Our Gang 54-55
email-subject: Something's wrong?
comments: Part of ch 55 appears to have content from ch 54
Hi helpful alias,
Yeah, I apparently screwed up. Well, what's new about that, huh?
I've fixed that... I think. Thanks for double checking me and letting me know about my errurs. The first 100 chapters of The Gang were posted on our White Productions site as two chapters per page. Sometimes when I copy from them for these pages, I don't always get it right. Hey, I'm old. I'm lucky I can still read or write, let alone do HMTL or HLMT or whatever it is.
I appreciate you letting me know of my misteak and I'll be eternally grateful... or at least until tomorrow.
name: Nevadayote
storyname: The Gang and general comment
email-subject: This story and the ASSTR site
comments: I stumbled upon your page while attempting to navigate the ASSTR site. At one time, I was an author at ASSTR but I can no longer log in or even find my author account.
The story, the Gang, is entertaining. Though I don't really like some of the BDSM aspects, and there is a lot of that, I still enjoy the story overall. The writing is of a much higher quality than I find on even mainstream sites such as Amazon Kindle.
As for ASSTR, this is the only site that I know of that total freedom to publish erotic fiction is allowed. For a lot of the story ideas that pass through my twisted mind, there is absolutely no place to post them. This is because of the limits on the ages of the characters.
Do you know of any method I can use to create a new author account on ASSTR and use it to publish what I wrote?
Thank you for doing what you're doing. Please don't give up!
Nevadayote
Hey Nev,
Thanks for your comments. And I know that there are a LOT of former ASSTR authors who are in the same boat as you. With the server crashes and changes/migrations, much of what used to be there has been lost. As I've noted, the only way to upload files that still works is via FTP and most non tech oriented authors don't know how to do that. Plus, when you've lost your password, nothing will work.
I've been really happy to be able to publish Paul's The Gang series and am glad a lot of readers enjoy it. Paul is a great writer and you can just let yourself get involved in his storyline and with his characters. Such fun! And I've been privileged to have read some of his other works, including a great (non-sexual) fiction story. After reading the first "book", I so badly wanted to read the sequel, which he hasn't written yet. He is such a good storyteller!
You're right in that ASSTR is one of the only sites you'll find adult fiction that is uncensored as far as character ages and themes. It's really tragic that much of it has been lost. That's one of the reasons we created our White Productions site for our stories. As far as I know, there is no way to retrieve or create a new account on ASSTR as the owners/admins just don't care anymore about maintaining or updating it. Like I said, it's a tragic loss. And it's also the reason why I don't post all of my stuff here. I never know when it won't be available any longer.
At this point I haven't given up, but with the writers block and burnout, I've just not been getting much of anything new done. I have a backlog of stuff that's not been published yet, but I've really been busy keeping the websites maintained and updated that there's been little time or motivation for writing anything new. A lady reader that has been corresponding with me has given me some ideas for a new hot new story with a biographical basis and I'm letting that percolate around in my cesspool a bit, but I'm not giving up. I'll keep updating this ASSTR site as I get the chance as long as readers let me know like you have that there's someone out there reading my stuff. So thanks again for your feedback. Every little bit helps.
name: Guy on net
storyname: Zoo Mom
email-subject: Good addition!
comments: Love the next installment. Please keep sharing. Would like more frequent updates, but I'll take whatever timeline the author's brain can make.
Hi Guy,
Thanks, glad you enjoyed the story. As I've noted before, if you're interested in more chapters and updates, I post all of my new stuff on our White Productions site on my pages there. With the problems asstr.org has had over the past few years, we never know when or if it will be functional.
As for the author's brain, I'm sure there are quite a few who would debate the fact of whether there was any cerebral effort put into the scribblings at all. But that's a matter of opinion, I guess. Mine versus the rest of the world.
Thanks again for the comments!
name: Robert [redacted]
storyname: Summertime at Grandpa Dicks
email-subject: Chapter 9.
comments: I just found out about this story recently and I have made it up to Chap 7 so far. I would really to see what happens in Chap 9.
Hi Robber,
I'm glad you stumbled upon my little corner of literary anarchy and sexual apostasy. How in the world did you ever find it?
Happy that you're enjoying the Summertime series. As noted in several comments below, Chapter 9 is so far the last one I've gotten done. Don't know if there will be any more. Just wish I had the conscious control over what spews out of my cesspool,
but unfortunately I don't.
Summertime Chapter 9 has been posted for our members on our White Productions site and you can join me there for it and all of my new stuff that's been posted, plus a lot more.
I appreciate your taking the time to let me know you like my brain droolings. Thanks!
name: Anon
storyname: Zoo Mom
email-subject:
comments: I absolutely loved the new chapter! Can't wait to see Kari get stretched by her grandfather. Keep up the great work!
Hey anon,
Glad you liked it. You seem to either be getting ahead of me or you have the same pervy mind that I do and can see where this is going.
I'll work on getting chapter 26 ready for posting, where the whole famdamily has some fun. And if you've been following my stories, you know what that will be. Thanks again!
name: Craven
storyname: chapt 8 Summertime at Grand
email-subject: keep it going
comments: You pen a great tale with each chapter developing a story we are enjoying... some say I am sick .... so be it, but keep up the work.
Thank you
Hi there Craven,
Why, thank you for the compliment on my scribblings... or beating out digital bits on the key board. (No real physical bits were damaged or hurt during those sporadic episodes of electronic defilement.
)
Again, at the risk of being mono-tone us, I've addressed this situation in a number of replies, such as on Sept 9th, 2X on July 26th, June 13th (scroll down this page) and a couple of times on my 'What's New' and 'Story Notes' pages. Discerning readers will have found those and wept tears and gnashed teeth over my responses... er, sumthin', but that's as good as I got. At least, at this point. Never know what will spew forth from my subconscious cesspool at any point.
Anybody who says someone who enjoys reading about people enjoying sexual situations is "sick" is just projecting. You might peruse my "Info" page that has some psychological "sciencey" based insights into such behavior by intolerant bigots and hypocrites.
To repeat, I appreciate your feedback and desire for more of that series. The only way we authors know anyone is reading our krap TM is if you let us know.
name: OneTwoThree
storyname: Zoo Mom
email-subject: More please
comments: You keep saying that if I tell you I like Zoo Mom, you'll post more. Well, I like the story, I've read every chapter, so please post more.
And then post more after that.
Zoo Mom has been going on for -- what? Close to a decade now? Please keep it up if you can.
I appreciate that you want to post stuff by others, but I came here to read YOU, Ole Crannon, not the others. I don't mind reading the others, but your work comes FIRST!
Hi digits,
I really appreciate your comments and any feedback I get on my site or stories. But as I've mentioned before
, for a number of reasons I post all of my new (and old) stories first on our member site and after they've been posted there for a while, I will add some of them to this free site, like Zoo Mom, Summertime or Solitude. I AM trying to support asstr.org and post some of my stuff when I can.
Over the past couple of years, there have been problems with the asstr.org site and server that put into question just how much longer it will survive online. The Author Dashboard has been down for a couple of years now and many authors have no other way to access or update their sites. The email feedback hasn't worked for years, which is why I have my own private feedback form so readers can let me know if I should continue posting here.
I'm a tech geek
If you like MY stories that much, all you have to do is join me there on our membership site and you'll have everything I've posted online, since I don't publish anywhere else.
Yeah, I've been writing and publishing my stories for over a decade. Jeez, how time flies when yer havin' pervy fun. But if it isn't worth subscribing and paying about a nickel a day for not only all of MY stories but others that I've collaborated on - or from other authors who don't or can't publish elsewhere - then you put up with the vagaries of a free site like asstr.org. I definitely DO appreciate the audience I have here on these asstr pages, but I also feel the obligation to provide my material to those who have subscribed and become supporters of our member site. Everything is put online for them first, then some of it may be added here. Or not. That's what ya get fer free.
Plus, even tho' *I* can get access to my files here (so far) and try to add to or update them, the only way I know if there's anyone even reading the stuff I put on here is through the personal, private feedback form that I had to create on a separate server. Most authors can't or don't know how to do that. Many years ago, there used to be a weekly "page hit" report that was emailed to the authors. [That hasn't worked for years, along with the aforementioned email or author dashboard.] So now you know why it's important to any authors remaining on the asstr.org sites to receive feedback.
I created this site because I thought I'd share my brain dribblings with any others who might enjoy them, for who knows what deranged reason. It seems there are a few. I actually never intended to post anything other than my material. Over time, different people have offered me their stuff to post if I felt like it. Some I have. I will continue to do both while asstr.org is still semi-functional. But to reiterate, all of my stuff is published on our member site for members. First. And usually exclusively. It's available there if you want it.
Again, thanks for your thoughts. I appreciate hearing from any of my readers.
name:
storyname: 25B Zoo Mom 25C To Be (second note)
email-subject: Woot
comments: "So Sayonara until enuf peeps shame me into posting more of my stories, or I get the itch, whichever cums first."
Shame <dong> Shame <dong> Shame <dong> <=== read as "please post, please post, please post" Hopefully you get the Game of Thrones reference enough to know the answer to: "What do we tell the god of death?"
Still hoping you enjoy writing and posting. I'll still be reading!
Please keep washing your hands. (=
Hi again, mr kleen,
First of all, I've NEVER seen any of the Game of Thrones. Other than being in lust with Jennifer Lawrence, I don't know a damn thing about it. Just not interested in that kind of thing- other than the hot bare bods that may be in it.
Since I'm without an inordinate amount of self importance, I probably won't respond to shame, but nice requests seem to get me to want to respond. Actually, the only way I know anyone is reading my filth is by feedback or comments. Otherwise it's like shouting into a vacuum - and not the floor cleaning appliance.
I really DO still enjoy writing. The problem is that I've not been able to do much of it lately due to writers block/burnout or just too busy keeping up the websites. I do wash my hands when I think about it, tho'.
name:
storyname:
email-subject:
comments: i like your story's that i have read zoo mom and the others when i get around to it
Hi When,
Hey thanks! Every little bit of encouragement helps. Glad you like 'em. I'll try to add more when I get around to it.
name: Boza
storyname: Summertime at Grandpa Dicks
email-subject: keep going
comments: Your story telling is excellent, please keep up the great work and add more content to the Summertime at Grandpa Dicks series. It is Intriguing as to what can happen next.
I've not move on to Teen Slut Karen as yet, but is this a continuation?
Awesome work.
Hi Bozo,
Thanks for your comments. I appreciate any feedback. I think I've addressed this particular subject, continuation of the Summertime series, in previous replies to comments.
As far as Teen Slut Karen, that's a different storyline which is basically part of and a character of my Zoo Mom series. I may have screwed up a little in the name selection, but that was probably before I was keeping track of names with a names list. I'm trying to avoid that dilemma now.
Happy that you appreciate my... uh, work. You'll be able to read all of it in addition to chapter 9 of Summertime on our White Productions member site.
name: funpics
storyname: White Productions
email-subject: Magic Show
comments: Love this story hoping i can find more of the young magician with her mouse encounters and more
Hi fun,
Glad you liked the story. The sample that is posted here is really only part of that story. Unfortunately [depending on how you look at it], that was basically a one off that I wrote when I got the idea one day. Ya never know what sets me off.
The full one is on our White Productions member site along with a LOT more that I've written. Lots more. Plus a lot from other authors that have written and are writing for us. Like AmyMac's that I've put a few samples of her Geoff Sterling saga here on these pages. Plus other works from Neel Down, BentArrow, Paul Turner (over 300 episodes of The Gang posted), and recently Earl De Vere, along with the full Little Model Annie story universe. Then there's two series by my compatriot Data001, and then the collection of my stories, which include all of the current Zoo Mom series, plus many more that I've written. Whew! That's a lot and we're adding more every week!
So you can get the whole gamut if you join us there. Thanks again for letting me know you enjoy my brain dribblings and haven't run frantically screaming for some psychological help after reading them.
name: Charles
storyname: the gang
email-subject:
comments: Where will I find more stories from Paul Turner?
Thanks
Hi Chaz,
As I mentioned in the response to the comment below, we post two of Paul's The Gang series each week on our White Productions member site. You can join us there where over 300 chapters are now posted so far. Plus many more stories from myself and other authors.
Also as I said, I'm looking at trying to create a website just for Paul's work, as he has a number of stories other than The Gang. It's a lot of work to do that and I don't know if or when it may come to fruition, but I'll post here if I get something worked out. Paul is all for it as he doesn't have other public venues for publishing his work.
Thanks for your comment and I'll let Paul know he has another fan.
name: Gangsta
storyname: The Gang
email-subject: More please
comments: Cum on Ole, it's been 4 weeks since I last got my fix of The Gang and I get withdrawal symptoms if I don't get my fill of what those naughty kids get up to. I know you are a busy man and spend a lot of time enabling us pervy people to read all the lascivious stories that you post here and it's much appreciated, especially as I'm not able to subscribe to White Productions, but I need to know what happens next in the story so I can enjoy a wank or two. Or more!
I don't like to beg but I will if that's what it takes and I'd even lick your boots or anything else you'd like licked! Oh, Except I won't lick 'that'.
Here's licking you,
Regards
Hi Gangs,
I appreciate that some readers like Paul's The Gang story, and I'm trying to keep some updates going here, but you're right. I've got my hands full trying to keep two websites going and updated, plus trying to dodge Real Life as best i can.
Regarding the membership to our White Productions site, it works out to be only about a nickel a day. That's not really bad compared to some sites. But I understand. We are adding two new The Gang chapters there every week in addition to our own and other authors' materials.
I've tried to work up a way to get a website going for Paul's stories, so we could publish more of them at a time. But like I say, it's a lot of work with the two we've got, but if I can work something out, I'll announce it here.
You don't have to lick anything, as I'll try to keep posting more stories here as long as I'm looking at the green side of the dirt... and asstr.org continues to be semi-functional. All it takes is for readers like you to let me know they're out there and actually reading what I put here. I'll have a new update on here shortly... I hope.
And I'll send your comment to Paul so he knows he's appreciated too.
name: Anonymouse
storyname: The Gang
email-subject: Thank you
comments: Thank you for your stories and your activity on asstr.
"The Gang" does not exactly match my kink (it's a bit toooo much of spanking), but the story is nicely written and nearly everytime I visit asstr, I check your page for updates.
Hi Mouse,
Like the frogs allus say, "chacun à son goût", which roughly translated means "each of us got our own kink". I think Paul's story has a lot more than spanking for reader enjoyment, but I understand. You have to remember he's British, after all.
I appreciate your comment. I'll try to keep adding a bit more as long as asstr.org remains semi-functional and I can access the pages to do updates and add to things.
name: Don
storyname: Zoo MOm and Summer at Grand Pa Dick's
email-subject: Stories
comments: I really appreciate your writing style. Great erotica. Keep it up.
Hi Dun,
Duh, I've got a "writing style"? Who knew? I just thought I let my brain drippings drool out and I banged away on the KB with them. Ah, ya larn sumptin' ev'ry day.
Guess I gotta give all the credit to those Catholic skool nuns that edumakated me all them eons ago. They musta dun sumptin write. Ya meen, studying the Greek pantheon of gods in the fourth grade was akshully worthwhile? Well, I did enjoy it back then. Still do. But I wouldn't quite call it "classical training" for my writin'.
Thanks for your comments tho'. I'm happy that my filth can bring a little fapping sunshine to your little corner of the world. As I've said before, I write for myself and just share here in case some others may get something outa them. Like a rise. But I appreciate the feedback, lettin' me know someone does.
name: Ms Mister
storyname: Zoo Mom
email-subject: More Zoo Mom
comments: Hello!
I beg you to please post more Zoo Mom stories!
Hi Ms,
Well, if you're begging me, the least I can do is post another chapter, which I'll do soon. I just wanted to get Earl De Vere's new story posted for him first. Then we'll get to fap to the fabulous Zoo Mom family and their sexual antics in chapter 25C, where the family's pervy secrets are revealed to Gram and Gramps. And they learn a little about Gram and Gramp's secrets also. Then in chapter 26, everybody enjoys Lynn's exhibition of her special predilections. Lotsa fun!!
Thanks for letting me know you want more of my Zoo Mom filth. You don't have to grovel and beg, but it does help.
name: VeryAnonymousPerson
storyname: zoo mom
email-subject:
comments: Bummed to see that Lasiter is done with Torrid Tales, there were a ton of great unfinished stories there. Oh well, at least we still have more Zoo Mom chapters to look forward to! Can't wait to read what else you've cooked up for our favorite Family
Hi Very,
Yeah, it's a bummer that Torrid Tales won't be updated any more with new material, but I've been told that apparently it will still remain as it is, just not updated. So as long as asstr.org remains, I guess it will too.
Yup, glad you like my Zoo Mom series and I do have more to post on that. If you just can't get enough, you can always join our member site where I post any and all of my new stuff on my page there, plus a lot of other great stuff from other authors like AmyMac, Neel Down, BentArrow, Earl De Vere and more.
Thanks for your comments. I DO have lots "cooked up" for my fav pervy family, so there will be more to come and cum to.
name: Easy
storyname: Zoo mom
email-subject: 25c
comments: Hey... is it coming soon? Can't get enough x
Hey EZ,
It's not only coming soon, but hopefully my readers will be cumming too.
Happy that you enjoy the series and sorry you can't get enough x.
name: Max
storyname: Ellen's tech boy
email-subject:
comments: Great story as are all of yours m worthy of another chapter , she has so much to teach
Hi Mad,
I appreciate your enthusiasm and I DO have a second chapter mostly done and want to expand it into a third. And Ellen definitely has some things to teach her young student. Like squirting, or doing it standing upright.
When I get it finished, I'll post that second chapter on our White Productions site first, then I may post it here.
Anybody had any similar experience with a teacher? Or have any readers who are teachers enjoyed tutoring any of their students? Use the private feedback link to let me know.
name: mrdave63
storyname:
email-subject: asiter Torrid Tales
comments: How about inviting BenBad and Uncle Wayne to post on your site too?
Hey Mr,
Thanks for your comment. I haven't "invited" anyone to have their stories posted on my asstr.org pages. I originally started this site just to post my own brain droppings, wondering if any other mentally deranged organisms would be interested in reading them. Apparently a few were.
After I had been posting my stories for a while and receiving comments and correspondences with some readers, a couple sent me (unsolicited) a few of their stories and said I could do what I wanted with them. After reading them, I decided they were interesting and started my "Other Authors" pages. Once the first ones were posted, I received some email and other submissions. I posted the ones I thought my reader base (all three of them) would like. Then AmyMac started writing for our White Productions membership site and I posted a couple of sample chapters here from her long and continuing Geoff Sterling saga (25 chapters at last count).
After Neel Down started writing for us there, he suggested that we post Paul Turner's The Gang series, which we did. Figuring that my readership (again all three) would enjoy Paul's series, he graciously agreed to have me post some of it here. It has had a great reception, so I'm continuing to publish it regularly since Paul has written so much I'll never catch up to him.
Over the years, some people have sent me submissions, wanting to know if I'd publish them here. Most didn't meet my quality writing expectations. I've been a reader of Lasiter's Tales of the Taboo, so I was already familiar with Earl De Vere's writing and stories. When he contacted me about posting his new material, I didn't hesitate. I know that it will be a great addition and something that my readers (the three!) will enjoy.
So I've not gone out and solicited any author for their stories. If the writing is good quality on themes that I enjoy, I'll be happy to post more writers' works. At least as long as I can access my asstr.org pages and keep them updated. With the problems over the past few years, nobody knows how long that could last. But I'll keep trying.
As a side note, it really is time consuming and takes a lot of work to do the updates and maintain the pages here. I do it because I enjoy it, but with an almost full time job trying to maintain and update our White Productions site where we're posting new stories every week, which sometimes means 10-12 new stories per month, have to be readied, converted to online html format, then added to the existing pages with links to everything updated. With that plus the writers block, I almost don't have time or am able to write much of anything original for myself. My Zoo Mom series does have some new chapters and storylines, plus a couple of new stories that I've been able to knock out for the site. I post any of my new material there first.
I'm not looking for any more work, but if some authors with good material need a place to publish it and I think my readership (the three) will like it, I'll be happy to consider it. I'm just not out actively seeking new authors or trying to make this site a "collection" of other authors' works. I'll leave that to others who probably do it better than I.
Thanks again for your suggestion.
name: Anders
storyname:
email-subject: Earl De Vere
comments: Dear Ole, I have read many of EdV's stories over the years, and I was grieved when he told me that Lasiter would shut down and he wouldn't be able to publish any more. So I'm elated that you have taken him under your wings - a great THANK YOU for that.
To those out there, who might not have enjoyed EdV's stories yet: You have something to look forward to!
Best wishes,
Anders.
Hey And,
Thanks for your comment. I'm just starting to work with Earl d V to get his new stories added to my other writers story page. I have mixed emotions as I hate to see Torrid Tales of the Taboo stop publishing, but am happy to be able to post Earl's stories here for him. I'll try to have the first new story posted here shortly.
I have to agree that we all have something to look forward to with Earl's new stories. I hope everyone who enjoys them uses my feedback link to let me know. I will definitely pass any comments I receive on to Earl and post his responses here also.
name: Aliasmyass
storyname: Zoo Mom
email-subject: Please continue
comments: [Quote: If anyone cares, I'll look around and see if I've got a next chapter of my Zoo Mom series ready to go. Let's see, where did we leave off? Oh yeah, Sissy was entertaining Gramps in the master suite of their new castle on wheels. She found him a good fit. So we gotta see what else the family reveals to Gramma and Grampa. Unless nobody cares and I don't get any feedback or encouragement. It's all up to you! ]
Oh, yeah, I'm reading and waiting. Mostly waiting, it seems. Enjoying very much this stroll down Perversity Lane, but I'm starting to feel like I'm whistling in the dark.
So here's one more vote to keep going, but I'm not in your preferred demographic, so maybe my vote doesn't count as much?
Hi yerAss,
I'm happy that you're at least sitting on yer ass in the dark whistling, anticipating the next chapter. At least ya got off yer ass and pounded out a few digital bits to let me know that you'd like some more of Zoo Mom. That's a plus and some encouragement for me to continue posting since you put in that amount of effort to let me know. Glad to have your vote. It counts.
But I don't know what you mean by my "preferred demographic". Basically that demographic is 'warm and breathing'... and preferably able to read my filth. With or without moving yer lips.
As I've mentioned in my voluminous comments somewhere before, when I first started posting stories on my asstr.org pages, I posted almost all of my Summertime story at once and quickly ran out of more. I frantically wrote another chapter or so, to be able to have more of that series to post. But I learned my lesson. I don't throw everything I have up online as that leaves nothing more to add and my productivity has fallen off due to the writers block/burnout.
Plus I only post here some of what's been already published at our White Productions membership site on my Ole Stories page. Posting it all here for free wouldn't be very fair to our members there. But I do support asstr.org and continue to put up some of my works here. You DO know that you can join our member site and get access to everything I've put online there in the member's area. You should consider it if yer tired of sittin' in the dark, whistlin'.
Appreciate your vote. I'll make note and go hunt around for that next Zoo Mom chapter and beat it into shape to get it up on here soon.
name: nifty jimmy
storyname:
email-subject: lder couple using young male for sexual fun
comments: Just a suggestion for a story my friend ?? When I was lot younger I was involved in few relationships with couples a lot older than myself The reason given was he just wanted to see his much older wife fucked by lot younger male This experience didnt involve the husband at all He usually took pics or just watched and maybe gave directions on some little things his wife liked.
One of the wives who was rather large in body ( which really turned me on)just loved me to wear her crouchless knickers while fucking her The husband sometimes would have a selection of her underwear on the bed for me to change into really interesting times and would love to find a story site for this topic Cheers
Hi nifty,
Hey, thanks for the idea and personal experiences. Like I've said, there's a LOT going on out there in RL that people don't realize or talk about. Some of the things in my stories are based on such info that readers have provided for my fertile/fetid mind to twist and explore.
I'll have to make a note in my story ideas file with what you've shared. I know that cuckolding is a popular theme for both stories and porn vids. I've just never been "into it" that much so I haven't written about it. I'll have to see what cums up. As i've mentioned in previous comments, I started writing about themes and stuff that I like because I couldn't find much to interest me. Still is the same way. I write what I like and just share it in case others may enjoy reading it too. Apparently there are a few twisted minds like mine out there.
Thanks for sharing and providing feedback for me. I appreciate it and who knows, your suggestion might just show up some day. I'd love to hear more ideas from readers' first hand experiences that may not... ahem... fit into the "normal" system of sexual norms.
name: Renovator
storyname: The Gang
email-subject: Episodes 1 -47
comments: Absolutely love the sstory writing. This has to be some of the best erotic writing I have ever had the pleasure to read and over the last half centuaryu I have read plenty. This is quality workmanship by someone who enjoys his work. Can't wait to read more
Hi Reno,
I have to totally agree with you about Paul's great story series, The Gang. He is an excellent writer and draws the reader into his story and lets them relate to his very real characters. You're right, the work of a true artist! And he tells me that the story just even gets better.
We're so very happy that we can post his story on our White Productions membership site, where we've been posting 2 chapters every week for quite a while. There's now over 300 chapters available there online for our members. And I appreciate that he's given me permission to post them here also, which I will continue to do as long as asstr.org is at least semi-functional and I can.
I see that you've requested subscription info and we hope to see you there and enjoying all of The Gang along with the rest of us.
I'll forward your comment along to Paul for his response.
Paul responds:
To Reno: I am really glad you're enjoying the series and am touched by your kind words. There's plenty come to come, with chapter 1,320 being written as I speak, and the series continues to grow deeper, broader and more exciting.
name: yupsmooth
storyname: yst pt-1 sample
email-subject:
comments: Such a very HOT sweet story the wife and I loved , can't wait to read the full caphter.love her size just rt.
Glad you liked it enough to join our member site so you can read all of the full three chapters posted there. I also have chapter 4 partly written and it will be posted there when I get it done.
Also like that fact that both you AND your wife enjoyed reading it. I'd really like more female readers and their feedback on my stories. More sample chapters are now linked from our story/site outline page there so readers can get an idea of what's there..
Thanks again for your comment and for enjoying my stories.
name:
storyname: Summer with gramps
email-subject: Great story. So hard
comments: O wow this one has keeped me as hard as a rock throughout chapter after chapter I will really miss this one when it's finished I'm sure I will revisit it often but please add more chapters pllleeease
Hi Hell,
Let me tell you that I'm happy to be able to assist in your sexual adventures and emissions.
I won't repeat what you can read in my reply to the previous commenter, but that may give you some knowledge if not satisfaction.
I appreciate your comments and happy that my stuff has helped you get through the day. I'll keep trying to add more if more people will let me know they're reading.
name: Ian
storyname: Summertime at Granpa Dicks
email-subject: Chapter 9
comments: This is one of the few really good stories on ASSTR. The characters are quite well fleshed out and help make a STORY, not just a quick thrill fun read.
It's the sort of difference you get between a quick porn flick with all the "fantastic and realistic" scenes and a proper full scale Oscar nominated feature film made with real actors/actresses and a believable story line. To not continue publishing chapters already to go is beyond cruelty! Even the Marquis De Sade himself, would think it was Over The Top. So OTT that he would probably never think any one could do such a thing.
Hi EyeOn
Thanks for your nice comments. I appreciate them. As I've said before, I've been reading asstr.org along with many more adult sex story sites for years and ended not being able to find something I liked... whether themes or writing quality. So I just started writing my own, and posted some online thinking that maybe there would be some other twisted minds like mine that may enjoy reading them. Apparently, there were.
As you have seen, I don't... actually can't... write a short stroke story. [Or even a short response.] Some writers think that a few paragraphs of hot, stinking, dirty sex descriptions - and not well written at that - is a "story". Some of my synopses or summaries are longer than some of those writers' stuff.
Then there are some readers who claim that my writing is too wordy and long. Again, I'm not writing for them, but just sharing what I write for myself... at least when the damn writers block lets me bang out a page load of digital bits.
It's not that I don't care what anyone thinks, it's just that I really don't have that much conscious control over what spews out of my subconscious cesspool. And again, I've said that my characters live - rent free - in my head and I just transcribe their antics, conversations and thoughts.
Having been a reader of asstr.org since before it was even a website - as the news group alt.sex.stories.text and even before that on dialup bulletin boards (and even ran a multi-line one over !gasp! 9600 baud modem cards) - I've read my share of every possible combination and permutation of sex story. The only ones I don't like reading are ones that are poorly written. Thus, my original impetus to write my own. I still enjoy going back and re-reading my older stories. [Forgive the immodesty.]
Shortly after getting my asstr.org account setup, which did take some time even back then, I got an email from a reader and we started corresponding. That ended up being developed as the Little Model Annie series and for various reasons, we created White Productions as a subscription site for member subscribers who liked our stories and writing.
So long story a little shorter, we publish not only mine but several other authors' stories along with the Little Model Annie series we collaborated on. So if you'd like to read more of my stuff, including chapter 9 of my Summertime series, it's there. The ol' Marquis would be a subscriber.
The reason there's not any more to the Summertime series is that damn writers block. Nothing has been spewing out of the cesspool on it. It's not that I don't want to write more or don't like it, there's just nothing there. Sorry 'bout that. But if you want to read chapter 9, just head on over to White Productions and join us. Lots of stuff there. Even some things the Marquis might enjoy.
Again, thank you for the praise and comments. It's the only way I know anyone out there is reading my filth and want more.
name: Isabella
storyname: zoo mom
email-subject: chapter 25c
comments: I'm looking forward for the remaining chapters in zoo mom.
Keep the perverted work
Hi Izzy,
Thanks for your comment. It's nice to hear from female readers for a change. I just wish there were more and that they'd let me know how they stumbled upon my little make believe world of fiction and fantasy. And how they like it. I have a feeling that there probably are a lot more female readers of "adult erotic literature" than one would believe.
I really appreciate you taking the time to give me some feedback and that you like the series. Ladies, I'd like to hear more from you!
And doncha wish more people were perverted and would admit to it?
name:
storyname: Perverts Club
email-subject: 25C To Be
comments: So long as ASSTR keeps limping along, I'll be reading what gets posted. Your Perverts Club is one of my favorites (as we have discussed). Please keep posting as you're wanting/able to do so (=
We've already gotten alpha, beta, gamma, and delta. I'm sure we'll get at least through epsilon, zeta, and eta before we are are on to SARS 3...
Please keep washing your hands (=
Hi again, Mr Kleen,
Yeah, asstr has lost a lot of its functionality and probably a lot of readers the last few years. So far I can still upload stuff to my pages here, so I'll continue trying... as long as there are at least a few letting me know that they have either inadvertently stumbled upon or actively sought out my KrapTM
You would have thought we're into at least revision 20 of the plannedemic, with all the nooz media crying and moaning about a flu that isn't much different than some we've had before with no hue and cry. Plus all the gubmint bribes to take the jab. Makes ya wonder, huh? But ya gets what ya votes for. Good luck with that.
I keep washing, my hands after my butt. Does that help?
Thanks for your comments and encouragement.
name: Bill
storyname: All of them
email-subject: General comment
comments: I, for one, have enjoyed everything I've read thus far. Some more than others, but I'd flush none of them down the drain.
They're thought-provoking, fantasy-evoking, and at my age, libido enhancing.
Please keep up the work, and I promise I'll be more timely in future comments and feedback.
Hey wild Bill,
And I s'pose that you'd really piss off the econuts for flushing any of my fetid stuff down the drain and polluting the Erf. But glad you wouldn't consider that.
And hey, at our age, we need all the libido enhancement we can get. Right? But if they give you good nasty thoughts and perverted fantasies, then my job is done.
I'll try to continue despite the damnable writers block, but if you want to read more of my stories, you can join us and have all my stuff that's been published there and more.
I appreciate your comments. Thank you.
Wild Bill replied:I'd more likely be apt to taking the 'fetid' stuff, putting a glossy coat on it, and delivering it, anonymously, to the steps of the local clergy and mucky-mucks. They truly need enlightenment.
As for the writer's block, a good cleaning of the plumbing often helps...
I've bookmarked the whiteproductions website for perusal...
name: grumpymark
storyname: Zoo Mom
email-subject: Keep up the great work
comments: Fantastic Stories, please post more!!!!
Hi Grump,
Thanks for the attaboy. Every little bit is appreciated, but when we used to get weekly "hit counts" of our stories on asstr (counts of people reading them), there used to be 10's of thousands of hits on some of my story pages. Knowing that those kinds of numbers of eyeballs were hitting the pages and discounting a certain small percent for those who didn't like the writing, subject matter, themes, etc, or stumbled upon them inadvertently and clicked away, that left literally thousands of readers with only a few email comments received. That was back when the asstr email form was working (my new personal one does work, as you can see) and a few of those were complaints about me reposting stories without adding new ones (see my info 2 page for one of them and my response), but even one or two positive feedback comments out of thousands of readers of my stories led me to believe that maybe people didn't like my themes, my writing or my sense of humor (or humour, as my Brit friend Data would write).
I've noted before that I really started writing my stories because after years of reading on asstr and other erotic fiction sites, I wasn't finding the perverted themes and quality of writing that I wanted. I started posting my stories in case others might feel the same way and may enjoy mine. That's still the reason I do it. But it does take a lot of time and effort to keep these pages updated and add more content, and if there's (almost) nobody reading and enjoying them, I don't know whether the effort is worth it or not. I make it really easy to just bang on that ol' feedback link to let me know. It's not that I need the ego strokes. I'll continue writing stories no matter what, despite the damned writers block, when the urge strikes, but I would like to know if they're being read.
On our White Productions members site, I've installed a voting or rating script on the pages so our members can rate each one to let us know how they like it. Asstr has limited ability for scripting and I haven't felt that it would be worth it or needed to install one or a hit counter to at least let me know how many 'views' the pages are getting.
So getting a little feedback from readers really is the only payment and incentive to continue adding stories. It's really not asking much to bang out a few digital bits to let me know, as you did. Thank you for that. I'm happy you have enjoyed the stories I've posted. If you want to read a lot more and newer ones, all it takes is joining us on the members site and you'll get access to all my stories that have been posted there and any new ones, but also a huge collection of the works of other writers that are added to the site weekly.
My feedback form is anonymous, unless you include your email address so I can personally reply to you. And I DO respond to all comments I receive, positive or negative. I've even enjoyed some continuing correspondences with some of my readers over the years. The email addresses are considered private and I don't sell, rent, lease, or share any of them with anyone, including our member site. So you won't get any spam mails from me or others if you include your email address. In addition, or alternatively if no email address is included, I have been trying to post all comments and my replies to them here on these 'comments' pages. So you can see how few I DO receive.
Thanks again for taking the time and making the little bit of effort to let me know you appreciate my stuff and want more. I'll be posting more as long as I have access to my asstr pages and the site is functional.
name: mrdave
storyname:
email-subject:
comments: It would be a shame to let asstr die. It's one of a few sites left that doesn't limit your fantasies.
Hi again mr,
Yeah, I have to agree with you. It's still one of the few places that readers can read adult erotic fiction of all types without censorship or restrictions. And authors, while they still have access to their pages, can post their erotic writings regardless of subject matter. Unfortunately, it's not up to the authors on whether asstr.org continues or not. It is purely up to the owners/admins who originated the site and have let it languish the past few years.
Apparently there are a lot of writers and readers who echo your sentiments, as some have tried to band together and offered to assume the maintenance and upgrading of the site. However, the owners weren't receptive to that effort even though they have indicated that they don't have the time or inclination to work on it. It's really too bad because it really wouldn't take much effort for a group of knowledgeable people to keep it running and to even upgrade it from what it was several years ago before the server crashes.
Even the Donations list page hasn't been updated for five years and I doubt whether the contact form still works. At least the authors' email form hasn't worked for years, which is why I have setup my own anonymous feedback form - that does work. It's also unknown if the mailing address on the donations page is still active and receiving snailmail. I do hope that something can be done to assure the continued existence of this valuable resource. I don't know of any way to contact the admins to even let them know that you would support the continuing of asstr, even if by a group of volunteers.
Because it's such a valuable resource and treasure trove of erotic writing, I continue to support it by uploading some of my stories when I can and as long as I still have accesss to my pages. This despite having quite an extensive site of my own to administer, maintain and update with not only my stories but other writers as well as Data001's and my huge Little Model Annie series and more. But I feel it's well worth it since I originally started reading when it was the alt.sex.story.repository news group eons ago - before the web. (Yeah, I'm that old.)
Thank you for your comments. I appreciate and echo your sentiments.
name: T Wabbitz
storyname: Summertime at Grandps Dicks and Teen Slut Karen
email-subject: Continuation
comments: Sir
Will there be continuation of these two stories. I cannot belong to your group even though I would like to. Hence, what is on the web site I can only get part of the Teen slut Karen.
Thank you
T
Hi Wabbitz,
As I've mentioned before in comments below and on my What's New and Story Notes pages, I finally got Summertime chapter 9 finished with some help from one of our White Productions members and I've posted it there. Unfortunately, nothing more on that series is flowing out of my fetid cesspool of a mind and I really don't have conscious control over that.
I have written more of Teen Slut Karen, although not the continuation of the first four chapters. They next pick up when she's approaching 18 and has gotten even more pervy and an inveterate pain slut than when she was 14. Those haven't been posted on my story page there yet, but they will be published there first. I may put them on my asstr pages here, but haven't decided yet. While I get a few sporadic comments and requests like yours, they are very scarce and I really don't know if there's enough interest or people reading them to make it worth the time and effort to put them here. It does take a bit of time and work to get them into asstr html format.
Sorry that you can't join us but with the problems that asstr.org has had and continues to have, it's really iffy whether I'll have continued access to my pages here or if anyone else will be able to find them.
Thank you for your inquiry and interest in my story series. I appreciate every response I get. And there's no need to call me 'sir'. Like they say in the military, I worked for a living. [But thanx anyway.]
name: Allie
storyname: Zoo Mom
email-subject: Anxious for more
comments: I like thinking about the nasty things Kari will get up to in Europe and especially that idea of her being served a big steaming helping of fresh....
Hi Alley,
Gee, I don't wanna make anybody 'anxious', but in this case, I guess that's sorta a good thing TM.
You know... I sorta like thinking about the nasty things little Kari could get up to... or get up in her. And she'd probably like most all of it. What a little scamp!
In the grand scheme of all things Zoo Mom, I've had plans for them to enjoy a really pervy trip to Europe. I've just never gotten to that point in the storyline to make it happen. Maybe I should just create a little 'offshoot' series where the whole famdamily jets off to Europe and makes a bunch of raunchy porn vids there. Kari enjoying an open air gang bang in a park, Lynn visiting Torture Galaxy and Sissy... well, Sissy being Sissy seducing guys, gals, dogs, snakes and anything else she can find.
As you can see, I have given it some thought, but just haven't gotten over the writers block enough to get it to pour out of my fertile (febrile?) cesspool of a mind and get them beaten into digital bits so I can post them. If I do, they will be published first on our White Productions member site on my story page there. But I think I've got quite a few chapters to go before that happens.
Thank you for your comments. I appreciate knowing that someone is out there enjoying reading my filth. Even if it makes you anxious. If you want, I'd appreciate any ideas for those things they could do on their trip. Especially from any European ladies who know what goes on there... behind closed doors or otherwise.
name: Almostanything
storyname: ZOO MOM
email-subject: Family love
comments: I'd just wanted to let you know that I love this story.
Hi Almostan,
I sorta like the story too.
I have enjoyed writing Zoo Mom from the start and still do. That is, when something starts to overflow from my cesspool subconcious and I can pound more out. [Talkin' about the keyboard, all you dirty minded people
]
I do have quite a few more chapters of the series to post, as can be seen on my White Productions story page and there's actually even more that aren't listed there.
The problem is, I get virtually no feedback from what I post here, except from a few dedicated (and deranged?) fans. I continue to try to justify the time and work it takes to get them into posting shape and keep updating the site if nobody's reading them. We used to have a weekly report of page 'hits' from asstr but that hasn't functioned for several years, so there really isn't any other way than reader feedback to know if anyone is out there and reading.
I probably could work on putting a 'hit counter' on all the pages, but that's just more work and time that I could be putting into our White Productions member site and keeping it up to date with posting more of my stories.
So I gotta thank you and the others below for taking time and making the effort to at least bang out a few digital attaboys. It's appreciated! Especially when you include an email address for a personal reply.
name: Would-be Gang Member
storyname: The Gang
email-subject:
comments: Thanks, Ole, for passing my comments on to Paul, and it was very kind of him to give an insight into the points that I mentioned previously. It's a shame that Helen won't be joining the Gang but maybe she will feature again in some future storyline. Can't wait to read about Ben and Amy, hopefully they will fuck with the rest of the Gang looking on.
Hi again, Woodnhead,
It is my pleasure to both post Paul's story, The Gang, on the site for him and to pass on any comments or feedback for him to enjoy. He really does thrive on reader feedback and immediately replies to any comments I send him. I'll then post them here or forward them if you include a valid email.
Reader feedback, comments and responses are the only payment writers receive for posting their material on asstr.org for free. It's not like it's a major undertaking to hit that feedback link to let me know what you think. Otherwise, we just figure nobody cares.
Plus, if you include a valid email address, you'll get a personal response from a [not so] famous porn writer that you can frame and hang on the wall and cherish forever. Well, maybe a digital frame and virtual wall, anyway.
name: F--tucker
storyname: Zoo mom and karen
email-subject: Stories
comments: As I have said in the past us pervs love your stories. Keep them cumming
Hey again, Fu... er, Tucker
Thanks again for your support and comments. I really DO appreciate any feedback I get and, as you all can see, I DO respond to them. If an email is included, I not only post my reply here but send a personal email.
Despite my writers block for some time, I do have more of my stories "in the can", including Zoo Mom. The problem is, if I don't hear from anyone except a couple of faithful fans, I don't know if it's worth continuing posting and doing the work to update the site.
I DO really appreciate your thoughts and support.
name: Would-be Gang Member
storyname: The Gang
email-subject:
comments: Love the Gang, if only I could have been a member! All I had was a few sucking and wanking sessions with a group of fellow boys. I never imagined that girls would have maybe joined in. It really turned me on to read about how the Gang showed their love for each other in front of Giles and Helen and I hope that Helen becomes a member. But who will the new boy member(s) be? I also hope that Ben and Amy get it together. Brother and sister going at it in front of the other members would get me wanking in a trice. Ben seems not to be keen but, although only 10, I think Amy is and I'm sure she could persuade him.
I look forward with anticipation to more exciting and erotic chapters soon.
Hi Wood,
I'm really happy you are enjoying The Gang story. I'll definitely forward your comments to Paul and post his reply, if any, here.
Yeah, wouldn't it be nice if we could go back knowing what we know now. Just think of how it would have all turned out different!
Hey, if you readers have some interesting stories about your antics as a youngster, send 'em to me. Especially you ladies, as I'd really like to see how things looked from your point-of-view.
Again, thanks for your comments. Paul really appreciates any feedback on his series. That's the only way us authors here know anyone's even looking at our stuff.
Paul responds: That's really great.
Clearly he's going to be delighted with how things develop, with Ben and Amy getting together, but perhaps disappointed with Helen not joining the Gang. Still, plenty more excitement waiting for him, not only of the erotic variety but also the general narrative, which broadens, deepens and gets more exciting as time goes on.