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Title |
Nicki |
Author |
Nightshade |
Story Code(s) |
M/f, Teen, Inc, Light Bond, Cons? |
Length |
8,500 words |
Rating |
Very Good |
Arousal Factor |
High |
Story Factor |
Average |
Summary |
Fifteen-year-old Nicki spends the summer with her Uncle Steve, at his cabin in the mountains. |
Commentary |
What I like about this story is the way the
author fleshes out the characters by putting
the reader first inside the head of one and
then inside the head of the other. I also like
the way the story begins. The author seems
to be taking things slowly, and building up
to the sex. I do not care for the way the story ends. In particular, the scene where Nicki passes out and her uncle ties her up. She seems to enjoy herself when she wakes up, but something rubbed me the wrong way about this scene. There is also a mention of Steve having slept with several 12-year-old girls. It is not described, so I did not include the appropriate coding above. |
ASSM Link(s) |
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