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Title |
Pollywanna |
Author |
Losgud |
Story Code(s) |
M/F, Inc |
Length |
6,500 words |
Rating |
Good |
Arousal Factor |
Average |
Story Factor |
Low |
Summary |
On his way from New York to Miami, a poet stops in to visit his bawdy sister, Polly. |
Commentary |
This story has some arousing scenes in it.
There are others scenes that do not work
for me. In particular, the scene in the bar,
went too quickly for me. It did not feel like
the author had taken the time to set the
mood; instead he just jumped straight to
the action. It felt like the tone of the story
was dictated, rather than depicted. I did find the sex arousing, but feel that the story left something to be desired. |
ASSM Link(s) |
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