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Title |
Milky Maria |
Author |
Jackie |
Story Code(s) |
F/F |
Length |
6,500 words |
Rating |
Good |
Arousal Factor |
Average |
Story Factor |
Average |
Summary |
Jackie is two months pregnant and horny as hell. Maria is having trouble breastfeeding her newborn. |
Commentary |
The scope of this story is somewhat limited.
Most of the action takes place inside the
ladies room at the zoo. Jackie narrates the
story. She also does most of the talking. The story is arousing, but I prefer to see more dialogue and a plot that is a little more involved than this one is. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |