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Title

Climbing

Author

Poison Ivan

Story Code(s)

M/F

Length

8,000 words

Rating

Outstanding

Arousal Factor

High

Story Factor

Ultra

Summary

Told in the first person, a man recounts how he met a woman and some of the experiences they shared while mountain climbing.

Commentary

This is a wonderfully composed story. There are two narratives that run simultaneously. The author does a wonderful job of jumping back and forth between the two.

I like the characters, they both seem real. The plot is simple, but well constructed. It is the author's handling of it that really make this a treat to read. The sex is very arousing without being omnipresent.

I've never mountain climbed so I will not comment on the accuracy of the mountain climbing details. There was not too much climbing jargon in this story, but there was a climbing term here and there that I was not familiar with.

ASSM Link(s)

Part 1 (of 1)