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Title |
The Punishment Fits the Crime |
Author |
E. Z. Riter |
Story Code(s) |
M/F, D&S |
Length |
4,000 words |
Rating |
Good |
Summary |
Charlie punishes his wife, Becky, for cheating on him with her tennis instructor, Harry. |
Commentary |
This story did not flow for me. It seemed rather episodic. It
felt like something was missing. Aside from that it was a
good story. The descriptions are great. The story seems to be well paced. I liked the plot. There is tension in this story, and I liked it. I guess what bothers me is the fact that in the end it seems like Charlie forgives Becky simply because she is a sexpot and he cannot get enough of that thang. In retrospect, Charlie's dilemma does not seem to be either, whether or not to forgive Becky, or why he should forgive her, but how long to wait before forgiving her. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |