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Title |
Amy Visits for the Summer (Parts I, II & III) |
Author |
Sundance |
Story Code(s) |
M/F, Teen |
Length |
12,600 words |
Rating |
Excellent |
Summary |
Married-with-three-kids-Mike, age 38, boinks beautiful-used-to-be-a-tomboy-Amy, age 17. |
Commentary |
I found this story very arousing. The author does not spend
too much time on the sex itself, but does spend a
considerable amount of time building up to it. The main character does admit to being a bit estranged from his wife, Sarah. He is ripe when Amy comes along. This bothered me some. I am curious to see how the author will bring the wife into the story. The author does a good job of showing the confusion in Mike's head. He is not entirely reluctant, but he does have his doubts. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 3) Part 2 (of 3) Part 3 (of 3) |