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Title |
Hot Tango |
Author |
Nick |
Story Code(s) |
M/F, F/F |
Length |
4,800 words |
Rating |
Not Good |
Summary |
One rose touches the life of many people. |
Commentary |
This was a good attempt, but I think the author stifled the
characters. It seems like he got an idea and then forced
the story in a particular direction. The plot was there, and I
had no problems with it. The characters, I feel, were
sacrificed for the sake of the plot. The Star Trek reference kind of threw me. It did not do the story in for me, but it did upset the mood, that I felt had been created. It is nice if a story can be wrapped up neatly, but it is not necessary. |
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