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Title |
Change of Heart |
Author |
Virago Blue |
Length |
4,400 words |
Main Character |
Female |
Combination(s) |
Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male) |
Orientation(s) |
Heterosexual (Female, Male) |
Relationship(s) |
Friends |
Kink(s) |
-- |
Setting(s) |
Indoors Outdoors |
Genre(s) |
-- |
Caution(s) |
-- |
Summary |
Crystal Beaureve is over at Jimmy's house. She will be leaving for Hollywood soon and wants something from him that she can't seem to get from her boyfriend. |
Commentary |
This is a somewhat arousing story. My level of
arousal fluctuated rather dramatically as I read the story. On
the whole I wasn't as aroused as I would have liked to have been.
That is why I have said this story is somewhat arousing. Others
may find it more arousing than I did. This is a very well written story. I really took to the author's descriptions. She does a beautiful job creating imagery. There isn't a whole lot of plot, but I don't think that there was supposed to be. Crystal is an interesting character; she knows what she wants and goes after it. Jimmy on the other hand seems a bit limited, which is to say that that the author describes him enough that he seems real, but does not do a whole lot as far as character development. The story is about Crystal after all. One thing that kept nagging at the back of my brain as I read this story is Crystal's last name, Beaureve. It would be French for Beautiful Dream, except for the fact that 'beau' is the masculine adjective for beautiful and 'reve' is a feminine noun. The proper adjective should be 'belle', not 'beau'. In other words her name should be Bellereve. I say po-tay-toes, and you say po-ta-toes. I'm just being picky and have not marked the story down for what appears to me to be an inconsistency. I just had to get this off my chest. This was an enjoyable read. I was more taken by the writing than I was aroused. I think this story should appeal more to female readers, than to male ones, but I could be wrong. I have given it a Very Good. |
Arousal |
3 out of 5 |
Editing |
5 out of 5 |
Plot and |
5 out of 5 |
Objective |
8.0 out of 10 |
Subjective |
Very Good |
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