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Title |
The Ski Trip |
Author |
Indy |
Length |
3,700 words |
Main Character |
Female |
Combination(s) |
Twosome (2 Females) |
Orientation(s) |
Homosexual (Female) |
Relationship(s) |
Friends |
Kink(s) |
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Setting(s) |
Vacation (Mountains) |
Genre(s) |
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Caution(s) |
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Summary |
Tanya and the nameless female narrator of this story are pushed together by their friends. What appears to be an awkward situation at first turns into a rather pleasant one for both women. |
Commentary |
This is a very arousing story. The author does a
nice job building up to the sex. By the time it happens, it
seems like the appropriate thing. The balance struck between
story development and sex certainly makes this a more arousing
story. The descriptions of sex are also nicely handled, with
the focus being on how the characters are feeling not just what
they are doing. This is a very well written story. Told through dialogue and narration, the story is nicely paced and flows well. Both of the main characters are warm and realistic. I also like the supporting cast. The author does a nice job setting the scene and then having the story progress from there. It does not feel forced. I really enjoyed this story. It is very arousing and very well written. I can't think of how the author could improve it. I highly recommend it, unless lesbian stories are a real turn off for you. I have given it an Excellent. |
Arousal |
4 out of 5 |
Editing |
5 out of 5 |
Plot and |
5 out of 5 |
Objective |
9.0 out of 10 |
Subjective |
Excellent |
ASSM Link(s) |
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Other Link(s) |
The Ski Trip at Literotica.com |