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Title |
Obsessions |
Author |
Miss Behavin' |
Length |
9,500 words |
Main Character |
Female |
Combination(s) |
Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male) |
Orientation(s) |
Heterosexual (Female, Male) |
Relationship(s) |
Business Acquaintances |
Kink(s) |
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Setting(s) |
At Sea |
Genre(s) |
Romance |
Caution(s) |
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Summary |
Lindsay has a couple obsessions. One involves having a baby; the other involves Peter. Peter has a couple obsessions. One involves his boat; the other involves... |
Commentary |
This is a very arousing story. The first half of the
story consists of plot and character development. There isn't
much, if anything, that I would say is arousing in the first
half. The second half is another story. Of course, without the
first half the story would just consist of a sex scene. Would
that have been arousing? Considering the author's ability,
probably, but I like to think that the plot and character
development contributed to the level of arousal that I achieved. This is a very well written story. The plot flows well. It is a bit predictable, but the ride is fun. Both characters are well drawn, with more emphasis on their personalities than on their physiques. In my opinion the author's real talent lies in her ability to describe. Her words evoked beautiful imagery in my head. This is a fun read. It is both very arousing and very well written. I think it should appeal to most of you. I have given it an Excellent. |
Arousal |
4 out of 5 |
Editing |
5 out of 5 |
Plot and |
5 out of 5 |
Objective |
9.0 out of 10 |
Subjective |
Excellent |
ASSM Link(s) |
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Other Link(s) |
Erotic Stories by Miss Behavin' |