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Title |
Tenth, Eleventh, Twelfth |
Author |
Baird Allen |
Length |
3,200 words |
Main Character |
Male |
Combination(s) |
Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male) |
Orientation(s) |
Heterosexual (Female, Male) |
Relationship(s) |
Married Couple |
Kink(s) |
-- |
Setting(s) |
Home |
Genre(s) |
-- |
Caution(s) |
-- |
Summary |
Rick is recuperating after having a vasectomy. Karen, his wife is rather eager for proof that the operation was a success. |
Commentary |
This story begins and ends with sex. The author does
a very nice job describing the sex. He also happens to include a
plot and take the time to flesh Rick and Karen out to the point
that they are more than just bodies. This is a very arousing
story. The story is very well edited. The plot flows smoothly and is interwoven quite nicely with the sex. The story on the whole is more about a series of events more than it is about the characters themselves. The characters seem realistic; on the one hand horny, on the other hand concerned with other day-to-day activities. Their verbal interaction is handled quite nicely, although most of it does occur during sex. This is a very well written story. I enjoyed this story quite a bit. It is very well written and very arousing. I think that most of you should enjoy it. I have given it an Excellent. |
Arousal |
4 out of 5 |
Editing |
5 out of 5 |
Plot and |
5 out of 5 |
Objective |
9.0 out of 10 |
Subjective |
Excellent |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |
Other Link(s) |
The Bear's Den |