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Title |
Private Dancer |
Author |
Steven A. Black |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Length |
9,300 words |
Rating |
Good |
Summary |
Andy hooks up with Sasha, a stripper. |
Commentary |
This is a well paced story. The author teases the reader,
but does not get down to business too fast. Neither of the main characters has to make any tough choices. The purpose of the plot seems to be to get them into bed. The story ends with them living happily ever after. The descriptions are good, but there are some instances where the author tells the reader how Andy feels, rather than show the reader how Andy feels. |
ASSM |
Complete Story |