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Title

Stormy

Author

Emily

Story Code(s)

F/M

Length

1,600 words

Rating

Good

Summary

Josie is out for a jog when she meets a handsome stranger, or does she?

Commentary

This story was nice, but it was nothing great. It read like the beginning of a longer work. The handsome stranger seems to be a bit of a stereotype.

I just felt a bit cheated. Just as things started to get interesting the story ended.

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