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Title |
The Restaurant |
Author |
Mel |
Story Code(s) |
F/F, Teen |
Length |
1,200 words |
Rating |
Good |
Summary |
A woman experiences lesbian love for the first time. |
Commentary |
This is a stroke story. The descriptions are well handled, but the story is short on both characterization and plot. It would have been nice to have seen a little more dialogue. The author did do a good job of building up to the inevitable sex scene. |
ASSM |
Complete Story |