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Title |
Ten |
Author |
LeAnna |
Story Code(s) |
M/F/F |
Length |
4,500 words |
Rating |
9.5 |
Summary |
A woman and a man, Lee and Nick respectively, sit outside a bar. They are getting sauced on vodka while they evaluate the talent of the women walking into the bar. After some unsuccessful attempts at picking one up, Lee and Nick are picked up themselves by Denise. Denise takes them home to her place. She and Lee tie up Nick and then all three have some fun. |
Commentary |
Good story. Very good. I liked the banter back and forth
between Lee and Nick. It was sexy without being coarse
or vulgar. The susceptibility of Nick to Lee and Denise's
manipulation was very believable. This story was just the right length. It was not long, but if it had gone any longer I don't know where it could have gone other than to catalog acts of passion. This is the first story I have read by Leanna. I am sure it will not be the last. It was a little short, but the author did pace the story. The characters could have been fleshed out a little more. My advice to the author is to put these two characters in different situations, both with and without each other, and show how the sexual tension affects them before having them jump in the sack together. |
ASSM |
Ten |