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Title

 Georgetta: The Bet [Chapters 1-6]

Author

 The Dolphin

Story Code(s)

 F/M, B&D, Cons

Length

 15,500 words

Rating

 8.5

Summary

 Georgetta has lost a bet with her boyfriend Chris. Part of the bet was that she would do whatever he wanted for one night. She comes home to find a box containing clothes, instructions, and paraphernalia (hmmm...). She goes through with her lover's demands despite the fact that in his directions he explicitly states she does not have to.

Eventually Chris comes out of the closet.

(Gnarf, Brain. Does this mean...)
(Don't be ridiculous. He was merely hiding there.)
(But Brain, doesn't that mean that he is a Homo...)
(Sapien? Yes, Pinky. Now if you don't shutup I shall have to hurt you.)

Chris takes his time. He continues to toy with her even after she knows he is in the room. Eventually he releases her.

Commentary

 I liked this story. The bondage was real without being violent or forcing one person do things that turn my stomach. I liked Georgetta but felt that Chris was a bit lacking as a character. There was an occasional misspelled word or incomplete sentence. There was not much of a plot, but the story was paced accordingly.

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