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Title |
The Bedpost |
Author |
Michael K. Smith |
Story Code(s) |
M/F, Cons? |
Length |
1,600 words |
Rating |
1.0 |
Summary |
Man impales woman on bedpost; first her cunt then her ass. |
Commentary |
Let me begin by saying what I liked about this story. I could feel
her pain/excitement, but maybe that's because I am a sensitive guy.
Aside from that I cannot recommend this story. To be honest this does not really deserve to be called a story. It is more like an interlude. I do not like stories that involve non- consensual sex and I think this came close. Some people would definitely call it non-consensual, but I'll leave that up to the courts. Considering the fact that it isn't really a story, but an interlude, it may be asking a bit much to actually expect character development and plot. I have read shorter pieces by other authors that conveyed more than what was going on at the moment. We all have our moods and it's better to get them out in a story then on someone else. I know this author has written great stuff in the past. I look forward to seeing more of his stories in future (that do not resemble this one). |
ASSM |
The Bedpost |