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Title |
Banana Split |
Author |
DG |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Length |
3,400 words |
Rating |
6.5 |
Summary |
A woman and a man are shipwrecked on an island. She fucks him with fruit. He fucks her with fruit. They ditch the fruit and do it the old fashioned way. |
Commentary |
I liked this story. It was creative. The characters were simple but
believable. While sex was pretty much the only thing on their minds,
it was not the only thing they did. The author did include some
background. The sex was creative. This not to say that the story
had much of a plot, just that it did not go over board with the
descriptions of fucking. On the down side this story was short. Since there was no plot its hard to project where the story would have gone if it had been any longer. The characters were not too well developed. Aside from male and female I really cannot say that I remember too much about them. Despite the short comings I enjoyed this story. |
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