[Some of my responses have been slightly edited or revised. Names redacted for privacy.]
name: Amber
storyname: Summertime at geandpa
email-subject: Amazing story please more of her whoring out and sold .
comments:
Hey Pale Yellow,
First, thanks for your comment about my story. As I've mentioned before, I've received some nice comments about my Summertime series with most asking when more will be posted. I really haven't done anything with it unfortunately. Although I had that bit of inspiration for a chapter 9, I got about half way through it before I got stalled there. I don't know when or if I'll ever get more done on it. I just don't have the conscious control over what comes out of the cesspool that I and some others would like.
Lately, I've had a spurt of motivation and inspiration and have actually had 5 or 6 different story chapters open and working on them. When that happens, I don't even like to eat, sleep or take bathroom breaks, but unfortunately... Anyway, most of them were Zoo Mom future chapters or some of my new Porn Families series. Fortunately, when I stalled a bit, I had some help from some of our members and their ideas and comments helped me push through some of it. Regrettably, daily life still intrudes and breaks the flow of the story out of my cesspool of a mind. But ya never know what will happen to spew out once in a while.
I truly did enjoy writing about Karen and Gramps in Summertime. It was actually the first story I posted publicly and was loosely based upon another as yet never published story that I had written several years earlier. Maybe some day, I'll have to dust that one off and update it. Which reminds me, there's another short story (if you can believe I can ever write anything short) that I've lost to hard drive crashes and upgrades, that was done oh so many years ago... well, decades actually. I only have one printed copy of it. I guess if I was quarantined inside for a long time, I could retype it all.
Again, thanks for taking the time to send me your thoughts. I DO appreciate all and who knows, it could just motivate me to take a look at that series again.
name: Kinco[redacted]
storyname: Zoo mom
email-subject: Keep up the great work
comments: Hope you will post all your finished chapters soon.
Hey, K, thank you for your comment. I appreciate it. Glad you like my filth.
What? And then have nothing left to post?
In addition, any new material that is ready to post and within the timeline of one of my series, I post for our members first on White Productions. After they have been posted there for a while, I'll put some of them on here for everyone to either enjoy or vomit over. Some of my newest series and stories, like the new The Porn Families, are published exclusively for our members and won't be posted here. Sorry 'bout that. I have my reasons.
A few weeks ago, I got a flash of inspiration and started writing in a frenzy. And if you know how uncomfortable it is doing it in a frenzy, you'll appreciate my trials and tribulations. I had five or six stories open at a time and was working on all of them. Some of our members were given a preview and they assisted me with some suggestions, which helped me finish a couple of new Zoo Mom chapters, as well as the Porn Families one that I was having trouble with. Like they say, "Membership has its privileges".
I've actually had some asstr readers, in the past, preview some of my stories and help with ideas and comments after they used the feedback form to send me some thoughts. See what can happen when you bash your rodent on that Contact Link and beat out a few digital bits to let me know there's someone alive out there in readerland?
I DO appreciate every comment I get and DO respond if, like you, an email address is included. And unlike out in the real (?) world, you don't have to wear a mask and gloves and don't risk getting the Kungflu just by exchanging digital bits.
name: AnonymousRex
storyname: Summertime at Grandpa Dicks
email-subject: Please sir, may I have some more?
comments: Just finished chapter one and can't wait to continue the series.
Please continue and send a copy of 8a or even 9 if you have finished them.
Looking forward to reading your other series too!
Hey Any Mouse Rex
Sounds like you're bending over, asking for more ala that movie I vaguely remember from somewhere in the distant past.
As I've 'splained before, I had about seven chapters of Summertime done when I posted them all on my (then) new asstr. page. Alas, the dreaded writers block set in and I was just barely able to get the two part chapter 8 (A and B) banged out before hitting a real dry spell.
A few years later, after receiving some comments from my feedback form, I tried to add something to the series and got half way through chapter 9, where Grandpa agrees to give Claire a no holds (and no holes) barred heavy SM torture session. Guess you could say my inspiration petered out and I've never been able to finish it. Guess I need someone to preview it and give me some fresh ideas. I'll see if some of our White Productions members can do that and help me get it finished.
I DO have chapter 8B finished and can post it, but I didn't get a lot of feedback to do so when I offered, oh, back in May '17. Check my Story Notes page and scroll down to 5/15/17. I've been saying that unless I get some indication that somebody's alive out in readerland, like you have done, I don't see the object of putting in the effort to format it and post it here.
Thanks so much for taking the time to bang on the feedback button and let me know you like my filth. It does help me know that someone is out there and wants more of something. After you get through all of the Summertime series, you can let me know what you think and maybe I can work out something so you can preview ch 9.
Although I usually only give previews to members of our site and to those who will help with suggestions or ideas.
name: Me Again
storyname:
email-subject:
comments: I keep checking, hoping for the next chapter of Zoo Mom. May Day, May 1, would be the best holiday to post Chapter 23A. As for a good holiday to post Chapter 23B, what could be more perfect than Mother's Day?
I know you're just chafing waiting for Zoo Mom chapter 23A. That is, you're chafing something. Hope that it's because of the Zoo Mom and other stories I've posted. That's what they were written for.
I looked on my trusty Holiday site and it sez that Mother's Day is somewhere around the first Sunday in May. Other parts of the world may celebrate it around May Day, but I decided that Amy's new story would work better now. I visualize her doing a May Day dance around a May pole in a gauzy, transparent white dress. Wish it was my pole she was dancing around.
So how 'bout we compromise and somewhere close to the middle of May, I'll post the Zoo Mom chapter 23A for those, like you, who are interested. Since you and a few others were kind enough to send me a comment showing some interest. Stay tuned!
name: Me Again
storyname: Zoo Mom
email-subject: Virus Time
comments: As you said, we all have a little more time on our hands to have our hands on our ... oops, nevermind.
Anyway, you would do us a great public service by posting Zoo Mom 23A. But it's a special time. Why not get radical and post 23A and 23B?
Meanwhile, while I wait, I'm re-reading it all. So I'm primed for the next chapter.
Well, I'm glad you're primed but hope you don't go off half cocked.
[For those young whippersnappers, your homework is to go look up what 'half cocked' refers to. And no, it doesn't refer to some stunted part of male anatomy.]I looked through my voluminous inventory of perverted filth and found that I do have Zoo Mom chapter 23A ready for posting, so I can put that one up here pretty soon. Maybe to celebrate May Day, if we're freed from our quarantine imposed from on high by those who follow the political winds and evidently have little comprehension or knowledge of evidence and facts. But like Marcus Tullius Cicero said oh so many eons ago, "Politicians are not born. They're excreted." So we've had this plague with us for, well... forever.
I'll finish proofing and getting chapter 23B ready and I can see about posting that one pretty soon. Maybe there's another holiday in May that we can celebrate.
name:
storyname: 23B (to be) Zoo Mom
email-subject: Waiting for 23B
comments: You are apparently washing your hands (or drinking Bacardi 151 and coke)! Glad to see it.
I'm partial to BL JD. According to a local brewmaster, JD is the PBR of whiskey. If so, see the Scuzz Twittly song for "Keep Your Hands Off My PBR!" Available on Youtube. Very much not a socially acceptable song.
I'm also partial to Zoo Mom. Hoping to see 23B when you have the time to post!
Hi no name or email included,
I'm washing my hands, face and ball... uh other parts. Can't be too careful, ya know. But that hand sanitizer stings like hell in certain areas. Oh, ya mean, I was supposed to use just soap and water on the senstitive parts?! Now that makes sense.
I used to love Bacardi 151 and coke. Once in a while. When I was younger. Much younger. Now, my ol' liver won't tolerate that stuff so the closest I come to alcohol is the hand sanitizer. I have found the non-alchy beer goes OK with my pizza. Now it's just the hot peppers on it that cause the problem. The next day. To quote Cheech and Chong: "C'mon ice cream!"
Looks like you're getting ahead of me a bit. I'll try to get Zoo Mom ch 23A posted next. Glad all three of you are enjoying the series. I've had a helluva good time writing it. So thank you for letting me know there's at least one person out there who wants more... even if you didn't get the chapter number right. But then, that's probably my fault too for using a confusing numbering system. But it looks like 23B will come after 23A. [Odd how that happens, huh?]
Remember folks, use the feedback form to let me know if you want more of any of my stuff posted and if you include an email address, I DO respond to all.
name: M[redacted]
storyname: Zoo mom
email-subject: More zoo mom please!
comments: Hi there,
My bf and I both *love* Zoo Mom, we read it together and play with each other while we read it out. I play all the girls and he reads the boys lol. He even calls me Sissy now and then and we like to roleplay. Needless to say quarantine has us touching and playing all the time, we'd love to see more.
Happy Easter M,
Hi M and bf,
I'm very happy you can enjoy my filth together. Have you played the Kari part and him Rob yet?
Apparently, that is the sliver lining of this virus cloud- more time together for touchy feelies. Although some may not appreciate the extended time, depending on how they get along already. But I'm happy you can indulge your fantasies with mine. And I feel privileged you choose mine to fantasy with. Guess I'll have to get on the stick (ouch!) and get some more ready for posting here. Since you asked so nicely.
Remember, if you'd included an email address, I could reply right back to you. I DO respond to all emails/comments/feedback.
name: N[redacted]
storyname:
email-subject: Story Idea
comments: Hi my name is N[redacted], I was born and raised in Law Vegas, NV. I've been thinking up some possible ideas of a good story. Since the coronavirus has shut down "non-essential" services. .well nothing in Vegas is essential haha it reminds me of a video game called FALLOUT NEW VEGAS, look into it if you aren't familiar. It's a damn ghost town here. No clubs, no parties, no titty bars, no bunny ranches there isn't even hookers, no swingers parties. I would imagine somebody's hosting some underground all you can fuck group. Because where would anyone go to get some sex these days??? Humans need intercourse or people go mad! Perhaps you could turn fallout including Las Vegas sinful ways into a hot and heavy story...it's a thought. Thank you and stay safe!
Hi N,
Thanks for the comments and idea. Yeah, seems like everyone has fallen for the big media hype panic. Not that the virus isn't contagious as hell, but there have been similar in the past and everything wasn't shut down and we survived somehow.
I don't play much in the way of video games, so I'm not familiar with any of those. I do play a city building simulation game, but that's probably because I'm too clinical and analytical... in addition to my desire to take over the world. J/K [I think]
Maybe now that you've got the time on your hands, you could do a work up of your story idea and see what you can come up with. If nothing else, it will show you just how much time and work it takes to even outline a good story idea, let alone write, proof, edit and rewrite a novelette length story. Like the Nathaniel Hawthorne quote on my Story Notes page, "Easy reading is damn hard writing."
I'm glad you found my stories and are getting some entertainment from them during your relegation to "non-essential" status. I guess the one good thing about it all is that more people have more time to read my stories. See, there's a cloud behind every silver lining... er, sumthin'.
Wash yer hands and other interesting parts, keep your social distancing, wear your gloves and mask, carry your hand sanitizer - then go ahead and just see if you can have any fun at all. Thanks!
name: Fed[redacted]
storyname: Zoo Mom 22B
email-subject: Thanks!
comments: Hello again, I just saw this site by chance and saw that you uploaded the new chapter of Zoo Mom, thank you very much, I will continue to wait patiently for the other chapters and I hope they remain the same or more perverted. Keep it up ole!
Hola! to you in Brazil! Glad you caught the Zoo Mom chapter I added. I'll be adding some more soon, I think. Teen Slut Karen chapter 3 was just posted in this update.
As I mentioned below, I try to post a notice on my 'What's New' page when I add something new. So check there to keep up to date with the latest.
It is always interesting to see that the internet is truly worldwide and that there are readers from around the globe interested in the themes I cover in my stories. I'm just happy that some can find them interesting. And I am pretty sure that they will continue to tip the scale to the perverted side, if you like what I've written so far.
I appreciate you letting me know you enjoy them. Perversion knows no borders, huh? And seems quite popular.
name: FC
storyname:
email-subject: Ellen Teaches Young Boy
comments: Your chapter struck me as entirely believable and highly effective in stimulating my 81-year-old eyes. I have written quite a few stories myself (all on gaydemon.com) about males experiences involving - among them - "education." Hetero stories seldom interest or draw me in the way this one has. If you maintain a list of interested readers, add my to it for notification of Ch. 2, please. Yours truly, FC
Hey I'm glad someone liked it.
Actually, before the asstr email form bit the dust, I had gotten some very nice comments on the story. One related that he had had a similar experience when he was a young guy and still cherished the memories of the wonderful 'teacher'.
I really never know if I 'hit the sweet spots' with any story or theme that I write unless I get feedback from readers and all I can do is just hope it all doesn't come across as impossible flights of fancy/fantasy. I'm a dirty old man with a perverted mind and I'm not sure about writing from the female POV. That's why I really would like input and feedback from the ladies who stumble upon my filth. I have had a few help with ideas and I've incorporated some of them into various stories. So any ladies out there, mash my feedback button and let me know you'd like to give me your... uh, thoughts.
As I've mentioned before someplace, after I had written and published that one chapter on a different story site, the lovely lady author that it was written for/about helped me with some ideas for continuing the storyline. I have part of the second chapter written, based on some of her input and we had planned a third chapter, which would end up with quite a bit more intrigue. So again, if any of the lady readers like the story and would like to help me continue it, let me know and you could be in for a preview.
I really don't have any way of notifying anyone of anything new other than my 'What's New' page that I try to keep updated. If/when I post anything new, it usually is announced there. Thanks so much again for your comments. I really appreciate them. Male or female - or any of the dozens of genders some claim are out there.
name: C[redacted]
storyname: Porn Families
email-subject: Ideas/suggestions
comments: Some ideas. What do you think?
Family 1: Gloryholes. Dad films, mom sits in front of the hole until a stranger pokes his cock through, at which point her little daughter takes her spot and sucks him off until he jizzes in her mouth. The girl moves out of the way and shows the camera(s) the load in her mouth before swallowing it. Repeat 40 to 100+ times. Because the men never see the girl they think it is the mom sucking them off. The girls would be 3 to 10 for oral. 11 and up could be tied with her pussy fuckable through the hole without needing mom's help and get it sloppily pounded full of stranger jizz.
Family 2: Toddlergirl blowbang/bukkake club, starting gentle and with a strong emphasis on a big group of grown men teaching her cumeating skills but over repeated sessions continued expansion of her training, from gentle facefucking to rougher, and eventually being used for deepthroat/throatpie use by very big groups of men until her 11th birthday. Trained to make eye contact with the camera while a stranger's balls are resting on her nose and lightly pulsing as the groaning man's cock down her throat is twitching and jizzing a big load while the next man in line is eagerly watching and rubbing his cock.
Sloppy pussy pounding creampie gangbangs for girls 11 to 13, and once they are 14+ they are taken off BC and the next generation of cumdump is bred into them by the gangbang group so that there are new girls for the oral videos. After they are 18+ they are helped to find a career in porn or assisted through college by the profits from the videos. I like the idea of a girl raised like this going into porn on her 18th birthday and visiting a gangbang porn site's group, blowing them away with how much experience she has already at 18.
Hi C,
I love your ideas! But since you're at the disadvantage of not having read the chapters that I've already written or partially completed in that story series that haven't been published yet, I might need to give you some background on the group. Or maybe I'll just have to start a whole new series, Porn Families Part Deux, using some of your ideas. I like them.
Maybe I can give all of you a little preview: Jim Rayder is kiddie pornographer and specializes in videos of an exclusive group of various families doing extreme sex acts with their kids. He puts on parties for group sex videos and does big scripted kiddie porn videos at different and exotic locations, one year or every other year, depending on the script and young kid(s) available in addition to the short, unscripted porn vids he does all the time. He has an exclusive distribution setup and has quite a large audience that he sells and shoots videos for. His specialty is extreme underage kids doing extreme sex acts. Some of his current families and stars: Chrissie, three year old bestiality queen (2 chapters written with 8 3DX graphics galleries); Jenny, a five year old, has an unusually long, deep vagina and can take a full 10" cock or dildo (2 chapters written); Brie, who reveals herself to Jim to be a shit eater. Jim does vids of her and her mom doing it everywhere (2 chapters written); and Lexi, 16, with E cup tits that Jim does tit torture vids of (1+ chapter written).
Apparently, I'll just have to expand the series and incorporate some of your ideas, or start a new series.
None of the current Porn Families stories have been published yet, as some are still being written. They will be starting to be posted exclusively on our White Productions member area soon, along with the new chapters of my Zoo Mom series and more.
Thanks for your ideas. I appreciate them and may have to bring you on as a story consultant.
name: M[redacted]
storyname: Summer time at grandpa dicks
email-subject: Chapter 8,9
comments: When are you going to release the other chapters?
Hi, M
Thanks for your feedback/question. As I've noted before, Summertime ch 8B has been posted on our White Productions member site and ch 9 has only been partially written. When/if I complete it, it too will be posted on the member site and I *may* add it to the asstr site at some point. I don't know for sure and since there have been problems with the asstr server over the past few years, I never know if I will have access to upload any files. So I post any of my new stuff on the member site.