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Title |
One For All... |
Author |
Ann Douglas |
Length |
9,000 words |
Main Character |
Female |
Combination(s) |
Threesome (3 Females) |
Orientation(s) |
Homosexual (Female) |
Relationship(s) |
Friends |
Kink(s) |
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Setting(s) |
Home |
Genre(s) |
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Caution(s) |
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Summary |
Stephanie and friends, Penny and Rachel, spend the evening watching TV and talking, until a lesbian scene in a porn flick, they happen to be watching, pricks her curiosity. |
Commentary |
This is a somewhat arousing story. Other than the
sex scenes, I did not find myself very aroused. I think that the
flow of the story had something to do with this. This is a well written story with one major flaw. It does not flow well; stilted at best. It felt as though the author was trying to force the story in the direction she wanted it to go, rather than letting it flow freely. I did not have any problems with the characters and the plot, but unfortunately the flow of the story got in the way of my being able to appreciate them more. I am not wild about this story, although it is somewhat arousing and is for the most part well conceived. I don't recommend it unless you think you can overlook what I have said about how the pace and manner in which the story unfolds. I have given it a Good. |
Arousal |
3 out of 5 |
Editing |
4 out of 5 |
Plot and |
4 out of 5 |
Objective |
7.0 out of 10 |
Subjective |
Good |
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