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Title |
Moving Day |
Author |
Bob Peale |
Length |
8,600 words |
Main Character |
Female |
Combination(s) |
Solo (Female, Male) Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male) Group (1 Female, 3 Males) |
Orientation(s) |
Heterosexual (Female, Male) |
Relationship(s) |
Hired Help-Employer |
Kink(s) |
Toys Voyeurism |
Setting(s) |
Hotel Public Restroom |
Genre(s) |
-- |
Caution(s) |
Nonconsensual |
Summary |
Andrea gets some help moving and some much needed sexual satisfaction from the three hunky guys who move her belongings from Washington, DC to Louisville, KY. |
Commentary |
There are scenes in this story that I found arousing,
but the focus seems to be just a bit too heavy on the sex, to
suit my tastes. The characters, in particular the three guys,
were indistinguishable personality-wise. Descriptions of sex are
nice, but without something else to balance them out I don't find
them as arousing. The story itself is divided into two basic parts. The first part describes Andrea's trip to an adult bookstore. I was enjoying it until towards the end she was forced to do something she did not want to do. It made me cringe. The second part of the story is about the move from DC to Louisville. The plot was okay, but the characters were definitely lacking. In my opinion in would have helped if the author had not focused quite so much on the sex. There are also a number of spelling errors. I did not enjoy this story. The lack of strong characters or a strong plot and the inclusion of a non-consensual sex scene all contributed to how this story made me feel. Unless what I have described turns you on, I can't recommend this story. I have given it a Not Good. |
Arousal |
2 out of 5 |
Editing |
4 out of 5 |
Plot and |
3 out of 5 |
Objective |
5.5 out of 10 |
Subjective |
Not Good |
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