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Title |
Library Studies |
Author |
a.k.a. nolan |
Length |
3,900 words |
Main Character |
Male |
Combination(s) |
Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male) |
Orientation(s) |
Heterosexual (Female, Male) |
Relationship(s) |
Fellow College Students |
Kink(s) |
-- |
Setting(s) |
College |
Genre(s) |
-- |
Caution(s) |
-- |
Summary |
Kevin is at the library trying to study. At first he is kept from his studies because he is daydreaming about Andrea. After she asks him for some help, he is kept from his studies by more than just his imagination. |
Commentary |
This is a very arousing story. I liked the
descriptions of Andrea quite a bit. They seem more sensual and
erotic than they do sexual. The author also makes sure to build
up to what sex there is in the story and does not linger too long
on any one moment. The story is well written, although there isn't much to the plot. It does flow nicely. I would not say the characters are deep. Andrea is more of a body than she is a fleshed out character. What make this story so well written are the descriptions and the author's sense of timing. He doesn't drag it out too long and he seems to keep in mind that how Kevin feels is as important as what he is doing. I enjoyed this story very much. It is very arousing and well written. It wasn't hard to see what the author was describing; my mind did not have to work double time envisioning the story as it progressed in order to keep up with my eyes as they took the written words of the story in. This is a very enjoyable read and I recommend it to all, but at the same time I can see how it might appeal to men more than to women. I have given it an Excellent. |
Arousal |
4 out of 5 |
Editing |
5 out of 5 |
Plot and |
4 out of 5 |
Objective |
8.5 out of 10 |
Subjective |
Excellent |
ASSM Link(s) |
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Other Link(s) |
a.k.a. nolan's stories Library Studies at EroticStories.com |