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Title

 The Fantasy of Three

Author

 Amberle of the Three Rivers

Story Code(s)

 F/M, F/M/M

Story Theme(s)

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Length

 6,000 words

Arousal

 4 out of 5

Plot and Characters

 4 out of 5

Editing

 5 out of 5

Objective Analysis

 8.5 out of 10

Subjective Analysis

 Very Good

Summary

 Gwen has the hots for Anthony, her boyfriend's brother. When Jake, her boyfriend, finds out how she feels about Anthony, he delights and disturbs her by encouraging her to take action.

Commentary

 Both the sex and the foreplay in this story are very hot. The author takes her time in building up to the one crucial sex scene. The series of thoughts that go through Gwen's head as she comes closer to fulfilling her fantasy make the story more arousing. This is a very arousing story.

I liked the characters in this story, Gwen in particular. The author does a marvelous job depicting the variety of emotions that Gwen experiences. It made her seem very real to me. Jake and Anthony also seem realistic, but the reader is not put inside of their heads, so they do not seem quite as complete. I like the pace of the story and the course that it follows; not too fast, not too slow. This is a well written story.

I enjoyed this story quite a bit. It is very arousing and well written. I can see how some men might not be all that turned on by it, but I liked it. I have given it a Very Good.

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