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Title |
Realizing Nicole |
Author |
a.k.a. nolan |
Story Code(s) |
M/F/F |
Story Theme(s) |
Husband/Wife/Wife's Friend |
Length |
5,600 words |
Arousal |
4 out of 5 |
Plot and Characters |
3 out of 5 |
Editing |
5 out of 5 |
Objective Analysis |
8.0 out of 10 |
Subjective Analysis |
Excellent |
Summary |
Nolan and Kristen are supposed to be going away for a weekend with Nicole, Kristen's college roommate, and Mark, her husband. When Mark is temporarily taken out of the picture Nolan, Kristen and Nicole get nice and cozy. |
Commentary |
This is a very arousing story. Though the characters go at the sex
with some enthusiasm, the story does begin with them showing some
restraint. They seem like people, not automatons, and that always
makes sex scenes more enjoyable. This is a well paced story. It has a story line, but most of it involves sex. I like Nolan. He enjoys himself and at the same time seems to have some human concerns. The two women were hard to distinguish, at times; they weren't different enough. While the story is well executed, I did have a couple problems with it. On the whole I enjoyed this story. The plot and characters are a bit lacking, but unless you don't care for being aroused and only want to read well extremely written stories, then I advise you read this. I have given it an Excellent. |
Other |
Realizing Nicole |
Other |
nolan's erotica |