Home ~ Reviews ~ 366 ~ 367 ~ 368 ~ 369 ~ 370


Title

 Yard Work

Author

 Bob Peale

Story Code(s)

 M-solo, M/F

Story Theme(s)

 Exhibitionism
Voyeurism

Length

 3,900 words

Arousal

 4 out of 5

Plot and Characters

 4 out of 5

Editing

 5 out of 5

Objective Analysis

 8.5 out of 10

Subjective Analysis

 Very Good

Summary

 Tim is hot for Steven. Steven is married to Jenn. Steven is not hot for Tim, but decides to give him an eyeful anyway.

Commentary

 This is a very arousing story. Steven does not seem completely certain about the course of action he takes, but he does seem to get a charge out of being as exhibitionistic as he is. I think this served to make the story more arousing. I also have to admit that seeing a man expose himself to another man, at least under these circumstances, got me aroused. Its nice to see a man who is confident enough in his sexuality to take a chance.

This story is well written. There are three characters, but the focus is on Steven. It is not told from his point of view, but the author seems to be more concerned with what he experiences, rather than how his relationships with Tim and Jenn change. The plot is well paced. It might have been nice if the characters were a bit deeper, but then again, this is a stroke story.

I enjoyed this story; some of you might not. There are hints of homosexuality or male bisexuality in this story. If even the hint of those topics bothers you that much, then maybe you will not be able to enjoy this story. On the other hand, I think you'll be missing a story that is well written and very arousing. I have given it a Very Good.

Google.com

 Yard Work