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Title |
The Transgression |
Author |
Edbun |
Story Code(s) |
F/M, Discipline |
Story Theme(s) |
Dominated by the Boss |
Length |
6,700 words |
Arousal |
4 out of 5 |
Plot and Characters |
3 out of 5 |
Editing |
5 out of 5 |
Objective Analysis |
8.0 out of 10 |
Subjective Analysis |
Very Good |
Summary |
Christine has "borrowed" money from the petty cash fund. Mr. Edmonds, the president of the company, wants to fire her and have her prosecuted for theft. Christine doesn't like either prospect. Mr. Edmonds offers her a third option, corporal punishment. |
Commentary |
This is a very arousing story. Christine is both scared and excited,
when she discovers that there is a way she can avoid dismissal and
arrest. Being torn, as she is, makes her a more interesting
character and makes the story quite arousing. This story is well enough written. The author takes the time to situate Christine in her world. Mr. Edmonds is not as complete a character as she is. The plot is simple. It flows smoothly for the most part, but there are some places where it seems a bit jerky. I enjoyed reading this story. It is very arousing and the story is reasonably well written. I have given it a Very Good, under Subjective Analysis. |
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