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Title |
Financial Planning |
Author |
Anne747 |
Story Code(s) |
F-solo, F/M |
Story Theme(s) |
Toys |
Length |
3,900 words |
Arousal |
5 out of 5 |
Plot and Characters |
4 out of 5 |
Editing |
5 out of 5 |
Objective Analysis |
9.5 out of 10 |
Subjective Analysis |
Excellent |
Summary |
After getting treated badly by one of the tellers, Sheila has a talk with the bank's manager. He asks her out. She is too horny to say no. She decides to wear a butt plug to dinner that night. One thing leads to another. |
Commentary |
This is an extremely arousing story, even
though there isn't much plot development,
before Sheila starts touching with herself. I
think that there is more than one thing at
work here. There is Sheila's frankness
when it comes to sex. There is the author's
descriptions that focus not only on what
Sheila is experiencing physically, but also
emotionally. There is also Sheila "toy"
collection. It all adds up to an extremely
arousing story. This is a well written story. There isn't much to the plot, but it does flow nicely. This is a definite stroke story. Everything in the story feeds into Sheila bedding Joe, the bank manager. The characters seemed realistic enough. It might have been nice if the plot was a bit more involved or the characters were a bit deeper, but then again this is a stroke story. Well, I enjoyed this story. It is extremely arousing, well written and well edited. Unless the idea of sex with "toys" squicks you, I think you should enjoy this one. It makes my A-list. |
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