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Title |
Adrenaline Games |
Author |
DG |
Story Code(s) |
M/F, NC? |
Story Theme(s) |
-- |
Length |
5,500 words |
Arousal |
4 out of 5 |
Plot and Characters |
5 out of 5 |
Editing |
5 out of 5 |
Objective Analysis |
9.0 out of 10 |
Subjective Analysis |
Outstanding |
Summary |
Andrew gets arrested for raping Sarah, his girlfriend. He tells the cops that she asked him to. They don't believe him, so he gives them some of the details. |
Commentary |
This is a very arousing story. It is a good
mix of plot, characters, and sex. The sex is
semi-consensual. Seeing how both Andrew
and Sarah give themselves over to passion
was very arousing. The story is very well written. The plot is well conceived and flows very nicely. The author uses flashbacks very effectively to allow Andrew to tell his story to the police. The characters, including the cops, all seem real. There is a nice balance struck between plot and character development. I really enjoyed this story. It is very arousing, very well written and very well edited. Unless you are very easily squicked I do not think that the nature of the sex should bother you too much. I have given this story an Excellent, under Subjective Analysis. Even without the graphic details, I think this story is worth reading. Including the graphic details, of course, gives the story a slightly different flavor. |
ASSM |
Adrenaline Games |