| Home ~ Reviews ~ 353 ~ 354 ~ 355 ~ 356 ~ 357 |
Title |
Black Widow |
Author |
Miss Behavin' |
Story Code(s) |
F/M, F/M/M |
Length |
11,000 words |
Arousal |
5 out of 5 |
Plot and Characters |
3 out of 5 |
Editing |
5 out of 5 |
Objective Analysis |
9.0 out of 10 |
Subjective Analysis |
Excellent |
Summary |
Valerie, the black widow, is on the prowl. Her intended prey is Randy, an accountant. Just when Valerie is ready to pounce, Steve, a friend of Randy's, conveniently enters the story. Momentarily, Valerie the Fearless hesitates before... |
Commentary |
This is an extremely arousing story. The
author does a nice job of building up to the
sex. In particular, I was rather aroused by
Valerie's lack of inhibitions, when it comes to
sex. There is something to be said for the
author's ability to describe sex scenes, both
graphically and emotionally. This is a well written story. More time is spent on characters than on plot. The point of view is tossed around like a hot potato. Often, the focus shifts every other paragraph. Distinguishing between Steve and Randy becomes a challenge, especially during the menage-a-trois. My biggest gripe with this story is the ending. It is moralistic and unnecessary. It gave me the impression that the author was trying to blame her characters' actions on a higher power. Maybe I'm reading too much into the ending, but the bottom line is that I didn't care for it. There may not be much to the plot and the characters don't seem to have much reason to live, other than sex, but I certainly enjoyed this story. It was extremely arousing, well enough conceived and very well edited. I have given it an Excellent under Subjective Analysis. |
ASSM Link(s) |
-- |
Other Link(s) |
Erotic Stories by Miss Behavin' |