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Title

 Evidence of Betrayal

Author

 Anne Arbor

Story Code(s)

 F/M

Length

 1,900 words

Arousal

 4 out of 5

Story

 5 out of 5

Objective Analysis

 9 out of 10

Subjective Analysis

 Very Good

Summary

 Kathy finds evidence that her husband has been unfaithful.

Commentary

 This is a very arousing story. Kathy frankly admits that she enjoys sex and the author does a wonderful job relating Kathy's fond memories of sex. The tone of the story helps to balance out the descriptions of sex.

This is well written. Kathy develops as a character concurrently with the exposition of the plot. Both are nicely paced. I enjoyed the twists and turns that the story takes. It is beautifully done. The details that the author includes made it feel very realistic. This is not stroke material.

This story drew me in because it is well written and because I found it very arousing. Personally, I would have preferred something a bit longer and more involved. That is my personal preference. This story works at this length. I have given it a Very Good, under Subjective Analysis.

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