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Title

How the Frog became a Frog

Author

The Writer

Story Code(s)

M/F, M/F/F

Length

2,300 words

Arousal

3 out of 5

Story

3 out of 5

Objective Analysis

6 out of 10

Subjective Analysis

Good

Summary

This is the story of how the frog became a frog. He once was a human. It involves sex.

Commentary

This is a somewhat arousing story. There are sex scenes in this story, but my impression was that the author is trying to tell a story that involves sex. The story seems to come first and the sex second. In other words, it is not a stroke story.

This is a good effort. It has a plot, which flows a bit too quickly. It felt rushed. The characters are nothing exceptional. They are the stock type characters one usually finds in fairy tale. There is a queen, a king, a jester, a witch, etc. Still, all in all, it is a creative story. The sex serves the plot and not the other way around.

This was a fun read for me. I found myself somewhat aroused, but I was more taken in by the plot. If you are looking for something that is not a stroke story and enjoy fairy tales, then you might like this one. I have given this story a Good under Subjective Analysis.

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