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Title |
The Maid |
Author |
Maria Gonzales |
Story Code(s) |
F/M, Exhib |
Length |
5,200 words |
Arousal |
5 out of 5 |
Story |
5 out of 5 |
Objective Analysis |
10 out of 10 |
Subjective Analysis |
Outstanding |
Summary |
Isabel is a maid. John is a writer. He is staying in the hotel where she works. After Isabel acts as though she does not speak English, John admits that he thinks she's gorgeous and would like to fuck her. Isabel decides to do something about John's crude remark. She teases him over the next few days by wearing less and less clothing. |
Commentary |
This story is extremely arousing, probably
because the author takes her time in
leading up to the sex. The author does not
focus too much on physical descriptions and
actions. Instead, she focuses on how her
characters are thinking and feeling. I think
this also makes the story more arousing. This is a very well written story. It has a plot. The plot flows nicely. It seems logical enough. The characters seem real. They do not seem to exist for the sole purpose of having sex. This is a stroke story, but the characters are more interesting than the ones you find in your average stroke story. I definitely enjoyed the story. I was pulled into it early on and thoroughly enjoyed the ride. It belongs on my A-list and that's why I have given it an Excellent, under Subjective Analysis. Unless a story has to be really nasty and disgusting for you to enjoy it, I highly recommend that you read this one. |
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