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Title |
High-Heeled Tease |
Author |
Philippe Richard |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Length |
2,600 words |
Arousal |
5 out of 5 |
Story |
2 out of 5 |
Objective Analysis |
7 out of 10 |
Subjective Analysis |
Very Good |
Summary |
Philip meets Jessica in a Paris nightclub. She loves to tease men. He becomes her latest victim. |
Commentary |
This story is extremely arousing. Despite
the fact there is no actual intercourse, of
any sort, this story really got me going. The story could use some work. In particular, the paragraphs are a bit too long. My advice to the author is to break most of the paragraphs down into shorter ones. An occasional long paragraph is one thing. A story that has almost nothing but very long paragraphs is another. There isn't much to the plot, but then it is stroke material and it is rather short. There is nothing special about the characters, but there is nothing seriously lacking in them either. I enjoyed this story quite a bit. It is extremely arousing. I wish the paragraphs were shorter. It belongs on my B-list. |
ASSM Link(s) |
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