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Title |
Tease |
Author |
Hawk Richards |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Length |
1,200 words |
Arousal |
4 out of 5 |
Story |
4 out of 5 |
Objective Analysis |
8 out of 10 |
Subjective Analysis |
Very Good |
Summary |
A man describes how he was teased by his date. |
Commentary |
This is a very arousing story. On the other
hand it is not very long or involved. The
ending was not completely satisfying, but
the author does a good job leading up to it. The story is well written. I was impressed by the descriptions and the narrator's tone. The plot and characters are a bit lacking, but they are adequate considering the length of the story. The action is well paced. So, in summation, this is a well written story that I found to be very arousing. I wish it had been longer. It belongs on my B-list, in other words I have given it a Very Good, under Subjective Analysis. |
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