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Title

 Flight to Heaven

Author

 Richard Budig

Story Code(s)

 M/F

Length

 6,000 words

Arousal

 5 out of 5

Story

 4 out of 5

Objective Analysis

 9 out of 10

Subjective Analysis

 Excellent

Summary

 Jack and Mary, his mother-in-law, crash land a small airplane in the Mojave Desert. Mary is at least twice Jack's age and has been divorced for quite some time. In the end, two people who are related by marriage end up sharing intimacies that two such people normally would not share.

Commentary

 I found this story to be extremely arousing. The author takes his time and sees to it that Jack is properly tested before he finally gives into his carnal desires. I prefer a story in which the author allows the tension to build between two or more characters. This is such a story.

This is also a well written story. The plot is not very complex. The action revolves around what happens in the 24 hours after the plane crash, but it is well paced and seems to follow a relatively logical progression. The characters are not extremely deep, but they are more than adequate. This is a stroke story after all.

I found this story to be extremely arousing and well written. Personally I find myself turned on by these sorts of stories. That does not mean that I like every incest or in-law sex story that I read, but that I am probably a bit more forgiving when it comes to judging them. My objective judgment of the story still stands, it is very well written. My subjective judgment is that this is an Excellent story.

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