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Title |
Lake Jeptha |
Author |
Mat Twassel |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Length |
1,500 words |
Rating |
Very Good |
Summary |
Mat and Laura enjoy a summer vacation and long to be alone together. |
Commentary |
This is a good story with a sad twist at the end. I like the author's descriptions and the way he moves from one episode to another. The story flows very nicely. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |