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Title |
Repentence |
Author |
Elf Sternberg |
Story Code(s) |
M/F |
Length |
4,800 words |
Rating |
Very Good |
Summary |
Lucifer is forgiven by God, and gets laid in the process. |
Commentary |
This story went a little over my head. It is very well
written, but I could not follow all of it. There were quite
a few biblical references. Aside from the easy ones, like
the Garden of Eden and Job, I felt lost. It was also not clear to me why there was sex in this story. How was sex necessary to the plot? Is that the irony of the story? That in order to be forgiven Lucifer had to experience "loving" sex? I liked the characters and plot, even though I could not completely understand them. This is due in large part to the splendid job the author did writing and editing this story. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |