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Title

Amy Visits for the Summer (Complete)

Author

Sundance

Story Code(s)

M/F, M/F/F, F/F, F/F/M, Teen

Length

30,000 words

Rating

Outstanding

Summary

Beautiful-used-to-be-a-tomboy-Amy, the 17-year-old baby-sitter, resurrects Mike and Sarah's marriage by jumping into bed with them.

Commentary

This story is well paced. I like the three main characters. They all display a range of emotions. They seem believable.

I like the way the author writes sex scenes. He does not go overboard describing exactly how Mike's cock fits into Sarah's mouth, but just says that it does and then gets on with the story. He spends considerably more time building up to the sex, than he does actually describing it.

This story is very arousing. It is a very well written and well edited story.

ASSM Link(s)

Part 1 (of 8)
Part 2 (of 8)
Part 3 (of 8)
Part 4 (of 8)
Part 5 (of 8)
Part 6 (of 8)
Part 7 (of 8)
Part 8 (of 8)