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Title |
Thumper |
Author |
Dave Read |
Story Code(s) |
M/F, Teen |
Length |
4,300 words |
Rating |
Good |
Summary |
Mark, a senior in college, comes home to baby-sit his sister Chris, age 16, and ends up fucking one of her friends. |
Commentary |
This is a stroke story. There was a build up in this story.
The sex did not begin with the second sentence. It was
not unrealistic or too formulaic. The reference to
Buddhism made me laugh. This story was lacking in at least one area. The actions of the various characters seemed to proceed in a logical order, but they did not seem to flow. I found that distracting. The characters are not very deep, but then again, this is a stroke story. |
ASSM Link(s) |
Part 1 (of 1) |