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Title |
Blood Ties |
Author |
Inkubus |
Story Code(s) |
F/M, Magic |
Length |
5,500 words |
Rating |
Good |
Summary |
Byronee, a female demon, is captured by a sorcerer. The sorcerer's apprentice lets his hormones get the better of him and suffers the consequences. |
Commentary |
I like the way the plot was crafted. It is simple, and not
completely original, but it works. The characters are
believable. My only complaint is with the descriptions of sex. The paragraphs were much longer, in that part of the story, than they were anywhere else. If the paragraphs had been chopped up a bit more it would have made the story more readable. |
ASSM |
Blood Ties |